If I Make a Ghost Movie, How Can I Become a Heavenly Master?

This is a wise guy. When he was young, he posted a video saying that he had to hand over the murderer after killing someone. However, he didn't mention a word about carrying a gun to kill people who had a good life. So in this book, it is legal to carry a gun in the so-called Daxia? I don't understand what's cool about it? I'm afraid this is the author's own work.

After reading chapter one hundred and eighty-three, I really couldn't bear the poison anymore. This trick is too outrageous, all kinds of unreasonable, all kinds of nonsense, meaningless things were talked about for a long time, there are too many flaws, it's hard to explain in one sentence, and it slipped away.

This book really collapsed. It's a good idea. The novel can be developed from the main lines of entertainment, supernatural beings, and the protagonist's teaching and fighting against the strange. Although it was a bit watered down at first, at least it is still on the main line. But since the emergence of those weird master organizations that claim to be gods, this book has turned the conflict between people and weird people into a conflict between people, especially the headshot, which is a complete failure. This is rubbing Xia Guo's official ability on the ground. Even if the author wants to write about a villain whose mentality becomes unbalanced as soon as he gains power, you can't write about a group of stinky rats in the ditch who are above the country. Otherwise, why would the country still exist? Why haven't they taken over the world yet? Every author will have good ideas, but the difference between a master and a street author is that the master author can always control the plot and let the plot whet the reader's appetite. But the author of "Pu Jie" collapsed as he wrote.

It was originally a pretty good beginning and subject matter, but the author forcibly reduced the wisdom later in the writing, not only the author's but also the readers' wisdom of the protagonist and supporting characters! Just because of a setting, let me make an analogy! I am afraid of ghosts. When one day someone tells me that those ants you stepped on just now are ghosts, do you think I will still be afraid of ghosts from now on? The author disagrees. The protagonist easily kills the red-clad ghosts who are helpless in the entire special department. The special department conceals the fact that there are ghosts, fearing that the protagonist will be afraid of ghosts if he knows the truth! ! ! Let me ask you, are you afraid of ants? It's really too poisonous! ! !

If you can resist poison, just watch it

Thoughts after reading Chapter 70: First of all, I want to say that I am short of books and just found a novel to read, and I read it purely as a novice, because there is a system in the setting, and it is also a lottery system!                                                                                                                                                                             est bookworms all know that this kind of setting doesn't have much logic at all. It's basically something that the protagonist draws and can use it immediately. If it is not used within ten chapters, the author will most likely forget his setting. Therefore, I advise everyone not to read it with the perspective of reading classics handed down from ancient times. Based on my more than ten years of online writing experience, I can see that there are too many flaws in this novel starting from the first chapter.       ，，，！ However, the author also explained this situation in the introduction. Later, the protagonist will gradually accept the fact that there are ghosts in the world, so as someone who chose to read this novel after seeing this introduction, I can bear it. And then there are many people who question the imbalance of rewards in the lottery treasure chest. I think there is no need to worry too much. Although I think the lifespan obtained from the bronze treasure chest lottery is almost the same as the lifespan obtained from the gold treasure chest, I can really complain about it. But think about it carefully, if the protagonist only needs a long life to survive? You must know that there are really ghosts in the world in the novel! He definitely needs a lot more than longevity! For example, basic knowledge about various ghosts, as well as things or spells that can limit ghosts or even destroy them! So under this premise, the life span obtained by lottery is only the most basic "thing"! What we need to look at is something other than longevity. Instead of just focusing on the issue of lifespan and making brainless complaints. I will continue to read this book in the future. I hope the author can continue to work hard. I also hope everyone can calm down and read with me. The author and the readers must make progress together, not the readers who must destroy the author!

It was too watery. When I saw the box office, I was poisoned. I still endured to see how the next few chapters were watery, and then I found that the water came and went, and the box office was still enough to win the lottery. So why did you write so many chapters? To be honest, the previous one was very watery, and now this one is so watery. I wonder if it will be the same when it is released later. The original intention of the protagonist is to earn points and win a lottery to gain longevity. Since the box office earned can lead to a lottery, this matter is none of his business. To understand is to understand that the author wants to write about group portraits. After all, group portraits are the easiest to write. But if you don't have that level, don't write it. It's said to be a group portrait, but it's actually a kind of separate plot. It's for the sake of expression. There is no character or anything else. It is better to focus on the protagonist's main plot. Since the water army works, it is a method for both parties to cooperate with the protagonist to make a movie and withdraw from their own ghost-hunting concepts, and then partially earn box office returns. Add some daily routines and keep pushing forward like this.

It was a book that I was attracted to read without reading the introduction at that time. The first half of the book is really good. Although it is really watery, it is not a problem to read it as an entertainment novel. It is not really good, but the expectations are getting lower and lower later.                                                                                                        There is something wrong starting from the seniors in the hospital, but mainly from the Japanese military experimental base, the more we write, the less interesting it becomes. There is a relationship where the protagonist knows the truth, but the most important thing is the embarrassment, even if it is not embarrassing enough, it is forced to embarrass it. The author may want to make that paragraph a little more tragic to trigger the excitement later on, but have you ever considered whether your book, which is rich in water resources, can bear the sadness you want to write? The sad point that originally tested the rhythm will make you flush out as much water as possible, leaving only the feeling of seeing the Spring Festival Gala sketch coming towards you. It's not even sad enough, so how much more exciting can it be to take over the next part of it?                                                      Arranging flowers and making jade, and listening to music on the hook will remind you of Xu Qian, because these are original jokes. We are becoming more powerful Tianlong every day. To be honest, it gives me a headache. Be bold and try to be original and have some new ideas. If it doesn't work, there are still so many scriptures and spells that match the talismans. We can learn from them. It's not embarrassing. There are also bad points in the setting, such as the number of people in official agencies, which makes people uncomfortable. To be honest, according to the settings in the book, ghosts should have appeared a long time ago, but due to unknown reasons, the number suddenly decreased. After Lin Zheng traveled through time, a large-scale resurgence of ghosts began to occur. The officials should be more aware of the importance of recuperating and vigorously and rapidly developing organizational personnel. As a result, there are only these few teams at this moment. You can say that it is difficult to become a ghost controller, but with a huge population base, it should not be just a few people. If it were really difficult to this level, the world would have been extinct long ago. Generally speaking, write less sad points. Maybe your writing ability allows you to write, but Hai in the book disagrees. The plots of dungeons such as The White-Haired Girl are the same as above. Because they are too wordy, the hypnotic effect is excellent. You can rely more on entertainment, the writing in this area is really good.

I've read half of the book, and it's still very interesting at the beginning, but I got stuck in the middle Advantages: - Relaxing plot, lots of laughs and cool points that are well-chosen - The plot progression is not too abrupt, there are plot points, foreshadowing, and logic Editing Disadvantages: - The writing is still a little rough, and the emotions I want to express sometimes seem a bit "self-exciting" and it is difficult to resonate with the emotions of the characters - There is a perverted ferocity in my bones, but the expression is inexplicable. Picking point 1: If the old landlady's legs were broken little by little, it was to arouse angry emotions in the audience; then after Tongtong's head was broken, he was stabbed in with a stick, which was baffling. The emotions were indeed aroused, but when he turned around, the protagonist was shot in the head, and his emotions were not vented. This is a refreshing novel that makes people feel frustrated and a bit nonsensical, and it is hard to let go Pitfall 2: Based on the same basis, although the protagonist describes a lot of changes in his mentality after his rebirth, the change is too fast. After the first chapter, regardless of the casualties of his teammates, he just comes to show off. As the book review said, are the supporting characters not taken seriously? Destroyer casualties completely ignored? Even though Tongtong and Yan Zhengguo Nenghuo later (as expected) this wave of "relaxed" atmosphere failed to make me turn around. Thanks to the author for the happiness he has brought

The writing is quite interesting, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot.

It's best for the author to let nature take its course. It's impossible to force the protagonist not to encounter ghosts. Of course, if the author's writing style is good enough to polish all of this so naturally, then if I didn't say it, the plot would be a bit delayed.

How to deal with ordinary zombies, regardless of intelligence

The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes -_-||! Make a movie and play detective? The gameplay is full of loopholes, and the setting is completely messed up to keep the protagonist unaware of ghosts. The protagonist is like a retard, and the official staff are no longer retarded, but a bunch of mentally retarded imbeciles!

Let's talk about the advantages: 1. The story logic is relatively rigorous, which is a rare work for old bookworms. 2. The setting is also quite interesting. The male protagonist can catch ghosts, but others cannot! It's so cool. 3. It is also what I value most. As the saying goes, reading words is like reading people. When you look at the three views of the characters in the book, it is not difficult to find that the author's three views are also very positive. This is very important. It is related to the quality of the whole book and is also the motivation for me to continue reading. Let's talk about the shortcomings In fact, there are some shortcomings when I read it. Book friends all mentioned it, but I think the small flaws are not important. After all, this is a matter of opinion, and there will always be dissatisfying points. But what is the most unpleasant thing about this book? It's just "bloated". It gives people a feeling of water. After reading it carefully, you will find that every sentence is good, but after reading one chapter, you will find that things can be solved in a few words. But it is precisely because of this that the plot of True Skills advances slowly and seems bloated. I started reading at 6 p. M. And saw that from now until the latest chapter, there are only two main stories in Chapter 90. Isn't that the end? Many book friends have a negative reaction, that is, the author did not remove the complexity and keep the simplicity, and there is no substantial word count to advance the content. It feels like it is advanced, but it feels like it is not advanced. Although I have never written a novel, I have done short video commentary. I want to explain everything clearly, so I need to write in detail. I feel this is also important. I have to add my personal understanding to that paragraph, and then it is a bloated video. In fact, apart from being self-motivated, it will not be liked by many viewers. In fact, how to condense a one-to-two-hour movie into six or seven minutes, and still explain it in a clear and coherent manner, with a small climax of 20 seconds and a big climax of 30 seconds? Only such works can have a higher completion rate and higher broadcasts. The same is true for novels. If it is just to structure the world view in the book and create more characters, but ignore the importance of rhythm, then it can only be regarded as the author's self-feeling. No readers will care about this at all, and they have no responsibility to understand the author. Results are the best feedback.

I'd like to meet you and comment on it. I hope you won't delete it for the sake of reading the original version. From the title introduction, this is a supernatural system text, and the whole story has a supernatural plot from beginning to end. The system plot is less than one thousandth. Secondly, as a time traveler, things like time travel have happened. Even if people all over the world say there are ghosts, even if the system provides a lot of information about ghosts, I don't believe it, don't listen, don't listen, you are all neurotic. All kinds of pretending to be stupid. I have read a book before and stayed in the restricted area for many years. The memory of the protagonist is sealed, and then the whole world surrounds the protagonist and hides the protagonist. And you are the whole world telling the protagonist, and then the protagonist is stupid. The latest chapter has been cut and he still pretends to be stupid. I really can't stand it anymore. I can accept the protagonist's escape, mental illness, dihua, and dark series, but I really don't include fools.

The plot was so boring that I didn't have the patience to continue reading, and the first dozen or so chapters were boring and not interesting at all.

Before reading a book, you must first lower your IQ to the level of a third-grade elementary school student.

After reading some, I feel like complaining First: The protagonist keeps repeating that there are no ghosts in the world, and you have to believe in science. This is actually not a poisonous point, but I personally find it a bit embarrassing. Everyone says there are ghosts, but the protagonist alone still doesn't believe it. I have never even doubted who is sick Second: The squad leader of the relevant department, this is the one who is scolded the most. No objection. In fact, if you think about it, if you are the squad leader and you don't know whether the protagonist is good or bad, can you trust the protagonist unconditionally? If this is the case, then your captain position can only be obtained by py. Originally, you should monitor contacts and cooperate best. If the protagonist shows signs of danger, you should use all means to deal with the protagonist. Don't talk from a God's perspective.

System, time travel, talent, don't believe in ghosts. Very poisonous.

Does the author never look at the results of his own books? Is the data increasing or decreasing every day? Is the increase in collections slower or faster? Do you think it's funny if you don't believe in ghosts in supernatural literature?

The protagonist's logic is understandable, but it's uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist feels something is wrong from the things given by the system, and then goes to verify it, but he can't find it. Asking others also said there is no ghost, so he suspects that there is a problem with the system. Here, the protagonist does not think that there must be no ghosts, but he can't find ghosts. They all avoid the feeling of the protagonist, just like writing about the death of an important character to create a climax, then this character has to waste some writing. It doesn't just mean that this character is a close friend of the protagonist's parents, but it also has to be felt by the readers.), The reason for this discomfort is Because only people with special physiques can see ghosts. All the protagonist's methods of dealing with ghosts are true. He can also practice and easily destroy ordinary ghosts. He has a lot of knowledge that others don't know, but he only lacks the knowledge and ability to see ghosts. All knowledge is true! But the only way to see ghosts is fake! This is not to say that this is definitely not possible, but it is more forced to create conflicts. Some "invincible flow" and "I am invincible but I don't know the flow" are prone to this kind of problem. If it is handled well, it will be comfortable to watch, but if it is not handled well, it will be more uncomfortable. It feels like the protagonist is forcibly subdued, and the logic is not asked, but it is not handled well.

People are weird! In this novel, in which the protagonist believes in science but does not believe in ghosts, the protagonist is criticized for believing in science too much! But in other novels where extraordinary powers are more obvious, it is unscientific to complain! Please taste carefully! The first reply to this post is most of the reasons I mentioned for deleting the post. If it is deleted by me for other reasons, you can come and I will explain it to you in detail. Or if someone has posted something, you can come here and say it, and I will delete it. That's it. The other thing is that I don't have any yin and yang weirdness. What I mean is that there are trolls... There are quite a few of them, even in several other books they also spray randomly. Then what I mentioned earlier is that one person said in this book that the protagonist believed in science too much, but in another book he talked about the four basic forces, and the theory of evolution... But that book was about beast control... Its extraordinary power is very obvious... And the evolution theory of Pokemon and the evolution theory of reality... Tsk tsk tsk.

I ordered 100 chapters and read it for a while. I was thinking about how I could resist cursing.

Forcibly pretending to be stupid and subduing intelligence may be acceptable if you look at it a little, but if you try too much, you really can't bear the poison.

The author doesn't understand what's so exciting about his book. It is to make a ghost movie, there is a similar case in reality, and then the law enforcement officers come up with a solution from the movie. Originally, the interesting points have been highlighted in the introduction, but the written content is basically untouchable. There are a few people who really want to see your movie become a hit, so they spend a long paragraph writing a movie review. You are not a director, so no one will read it for this. Besides, you don't have the writing skills. Or it would be interesting to create a nonsensical style in which everyone knows that the protagonist does not know that there is a ghost, but is afraid that he will not know it because he cannot pass the fear test, and a bunch of relevant departments cover up his butt. It is much better than writing everything now and not being able to find the style and positioning yourself. Don't blame others for talking about water, not knowing what readers are coming for, and writing a bunch of introductions to attract readers who don't want to read the content. What is it if it's not water? Comments from a website, reposted

Are you sure the protagonist of your book is Lin Zheng and not Li Changsheng and the others? You have more time to write Li Changsheng, and if I take out the skills, I will definitely practice them first. The special effects of Dawei Tianlong are already out. Doesn't the protagonist still believe in ghosts? What I particularly want to complain about is the country's strategy towards weirdness. The strategy of a normal country is to block it rather than open it up, slowly release the news, gradually let the people adapt, and then have the ability to protect themselves. I think your subject matter is particularly good, but what you wrote should be the plot that I have read after reading 50 chapters. Are you the sea? You want to drown me. I skipped chapters to read it, but the plot can still be connected.

I ordered 20 chapters. Can I cancel? The writing is really good and the protagonist is stupid.

Good guy, before the protagonist had no talent, it was easy to commit suicide, but after he got the talent, ghosts would come to visit him? Are you kidding me?

It is suggested that the author can prescribe a technique to control Yang Qi when the protagonist realizes that there is a ghost. After all, the real lifespan is only useful to the protagonist if he does not realize that there is a ghost. Later, the lifespan is used to dilute the protagonist. I can only say, awesome, 666

The setting of this book is quite good, but the main character is not good enough. He acts like a fool. I don't know whether the author is stupid or the author treats the readers as fools to create such a protagonist. You are time-traveling and systematic. You ask for a ghost movie. The rewards are spell skills and a four-eyed sword. And then you are still a staunch atheist without even a little doubt. Especially the cat-faced old lady in Chapters 5 and 6. She is obviously quite weird, but she ignores her like a fool. I really can't stand it.