Douluo Dalu: I Transmigrated as Qian Xunji and Took the Blue Silver Emperor as My Wife

The writing is quite good, but the protagonist's setting of making Tang San his son and Qian Renxue being born by A Yin are a bit jarring. If you can accept this, it's a good novel. It is best to be original with a son. There are angel gods and blue silver grass martial spirits. As for the original Tang San, Tang Hao and his cousin Tang Yuehua can give birth to him. After Tang Hao returned home in despair, he was taken care of by Tang Yuehua, which led to a long-term affair. Just create a little loser. Then let the protagonist's son bully the little Yakuza. This makes it more interesting. As a time traveler, the timeline is so early. I don't want to become a god on my own, but I also want my son to become another time traveler. That's the biggest poisonous point.

The front looks good, but the back looks disgusting to me. The story is written in a roundabout way. Shopping, vacation, and travel are too frequent. Are there no other plots? Like a running account. There are also some words and phrases that seem to be directly copied and pasted. Now I am afraid of losing the word "tail". The characters are too verbose and their expressions are indifferent, but the plot is very good. I did not abandon the book because the direction of the plot is unpredictable. I hope the author can write better and improve his writing skills.

That is the origin of all stories in Douluo Continent It was all his plan for Bibi Dong to start the divine test.

Confess all over -> Relaxed But if there are typos with the same sound, at least it means it was not written by AI

A lot of repetitive nonsense for the sake of water

So-so. The only pity is that Tang Hao's son Tang San is a native and is not a time travel by the Tang God King. In this way, the protagonist has no BOSS and no villain, and the plot is dull and boring. Yu Xiaogang also died early, and many places were too boring.

Good guy, I came here from Douyin. What I can read on Douyin is simple white text. I just wanted to come over and have a look, but I still don't know what's going on.

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The first part was good, but the second part became more and more shabby, so I gave up the book.

Author, you'd better think about how to write it first? Also, Oscar's CP is Ye Lingling, and Dugu Yan's CP is the child of the leader of the Holy Dragon Sect. Also, you'd better not look at the same thing at first glance. Think about it for a while. Maybe you can borrow some writing methods from others. But you still have to write most of the plot yourself.