
Douluo Dalu: The Comic-Style Yu Xiaogang Template, Tang San's Mentor
斗罗:漫画玉小刚模板,唐三恩师
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 234k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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113Chapters
452Votes
922Recs
30.4kFans
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The overall look is good, but the poisonous spots are very poisonous.
The biggest problem is that the system directly brainwashes and transforms other characters from beginning to end. You set the protagonist and Yu Xiaogang to be twin brothers, which leads to the mutation of martial arts. And because of different concepts, Yu Xiaogang feeds carrots and the protagonist feeds meat. In this way, whether it is Bibi Dong, Flanders or Liu Erlong, they can It is more reasonable to connect with the protagonist, but what you did is directly brainwashing, replacing all their memories of Yu Xiaogang with the protagonist, and all the memories of Yu Xiaogang are gone. Flanders even wrote a letter to Yu Xiaogang before, and as a result, this memory was directly deleted from Flanders' mind. It's poisonous, extremely poisonous.
I think this introduction means that without a system, the protagonist is just a loser.
Buy promotion after only thirty episodes? Crazy
Regarding the follow-up direction
Brothers, in the subsequent development of this book, the author plans to create a brand new Shrek, but the members in it may be criticized, such as Dai Mubai and Ma Hongjun. If you want to maintain the original comic version of Shrek's Seven Devils, the author can keep it. If not, he can also arrange the plot to accommodate other characters! ! !
I feel like there is no heroine in this book or the heroine is of the same generation. It would be too disgusting to include juniors like Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing. There are also Liu Erlong and Bibi Dong. It wouldn't be too disgusting to include them.
Although I really like watching iGang TV, it is still too uncomfortable to tamper with memories and change the past.
Seriously, why don't you give up Liu Erlong to Flanders? Li Changsheng, Liu Erlong and Bibi Dong are almost one round older than each other. To put it bluntly, the two old women still want to eat young grass! 🙂
The title of the novel can be changed to: Puppet Invasion of Douluo
The characters are very fragmented and the plot is really mindless. The people around me are as if they are blinded by the various unreasonable things in the protagonist group. The rules are weird.
Indirectly, it was said that the innate soul power was low, and it was Luo Sanpao's martial soul. I thought it was half level, but you said it was six levels? Even level 6 can be considered a little genius, right? And if the innate soul power is level six, then the martial soul cannot be in the form of Luo Sanpao. If it is not the Golden Holy Dragon, it must evolve at least one or two levels higher and cannot compete with the Blue Sky Tyrannosaurus. On the contrary, if the martial soul is the same as Luo Sanpao, it cannot be level six. Just like ordinary blue silver grass cannot have high innate soul power, as long as the innate sixth level is not wasted, it can be cultivated to level 20 before the age of 12.
Really, the most disgusting thing about reading this novel is the tampering with common sense and memory that has already happened. But it looks like a buttery hypnotic novel to me, and I have no intention of reading it anymore. Everything else is fine. You can tell the story of what happened when you met him after they separated, but you can't overlay what has already happened. It's just a joke anyway. Why is your template for usurping identity?