Great Ming: From the Start, I Transmigrated into the Future with Old Zhu

Being able to travel through the past and future, a normal person would not immediately be Zhu Yuanzhang's dog licker, but go back to the past and rescue Lan Yu directly. For example, if Lao Zhu really rebels before Lao Zhu thinks you will rebel, in short, he will definitely not take Lao Zhu back and forth for the sake of Lao Zhu's family.

It's interesting to take Lao Zhu through time travel, but the protagonist is not well set. Lao Zhu is too overbearing. He becomes a minister through time travel, just like a tool man.

This is not a shrimp skit template 😅

I feel like the author has no medical knowledge

I love Zhu Yuanzhang too much. Who is the protagonist? Does the protagonist live such a humble life?

The writing is awkward, and the characters' left and right brains are a little bit at odds with each other...

The plot develops too slowly, and the starting point of the protagonist is too restrictive. As a result, the whole world is showing off whether the protagonist is beaten or fatally injured. The protagonist currently has a strong tool attribute, and has not developed any gold fingers, so he is not very interesting. Then Zhu Yuanzhang, Zhu Di, Zhu Yunwen, and even the leader of the Jin Yiwei seem to have a very strong presence. Zhu Yuanzhang's various actions also prove that this novel is not just a simple novel, but at least some thought has been put into it, which is a highlight. However, Zhu Yuanzhang, as the most powerful person in the book, is old, and it is impossible for him to be cruel to other players who are blood relatives, and all kinds of methods are meaningless.

After writing for a long time, I did not write about the key points, but the side details were full of nonsense!

There's too much nonsense, it's so annoying

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is poor. Lan Chen is the protagonist. In the timeline, Lan Yu has been imprisoned by Lao Zhu and the whole family is GG at any time. The identity of the protagonist is Lan Yu's heir. The protagonist Lan Chen can be said to be useless as a character. He is more like the golden finger pendant of the real protagonist Zhu Yuanzhang. He has zero initiative and has never thought about fighting for the right to speak from the beginning to the end. This is already the biggest failure of the protagonist, not to mention that at the beginning, the author wrote that the protagonist was saved from being immediately hacked to death by Lao Zhu because he could travel through time and space, but then he went to a place and almost died because of the invitation of a complete stranger. This move is really poisonous to the extreme. The person who took action was Zhu Di's second son, Zhu Gaoxu. Because of the protagonist, he was also involved in the life of a Jin Yiwei. Zhu Gaoxu did not give up because the protagonist was protected by Jin Yiwei, and insisted on going his own way. Killing and seriously injuring the Jin Yiwei and killing the protagonist in the capital, the description of the character is really stupid. When Zhu Yuanzhang was alive, in the capital, he killed people who were favored by Zhu Yuanzhang and also killed the Jin Yiwei. Tsk tsk tsk. On the other hand, the real protagonist Zhu Yuanzhang is portrayed in a mess by the author, with constant saucy operations. The reason why I rated it as a mess is that after Zhu Yunwen knew the historical direction of Zhu Yunwen, he still wanted to make him emperor. With Zhu Yunwen's series of operations, Zhu Yuanzhang could still make him emperor. I really... I really don't know what the author wanted to write.

How do you handle your timeline? It's best if you can explain it clearly. If it is parallel time and space, then Jiajing will not be threatened in the future. If it is the same timeline type, then when you and Lao Zhu meet, the corresponding memory point should appear in the mind of Lao Zhu who is about to die. Too contradictory.

Change history but not change it? It would be pointless if we don't change it, but if we change it, the past is normal and it's a parallel time and space. We can't change the past and bring the prince back to life, right?