Starting as an Immortal Second-Generation

This is a work of cultivating immortality with a novel and unique setting. The protagonist Fang Hong is the son of a golden elixir overhaul, but he has acquired a life card system because of his status as a time traveler. His fortune-telling talent can observe good and bad luck, discern other people's fate, and break through bottlenecks in a targeted manner. He also uses modern thinking and water elements to intersperse the world of cultivation, such as black gold nanmu bed with vibration arrays, Bixiao Divine Armor, and ancient boat of ten thousand worlds science fiction elements. The overall style is smart and interesting, relying on resourcefulness and strength step by step, both refreshing and strategic, it is worth chasing!

Let's hedge with the person below. The more the merrier, thank you.

How did you withstand the first three chapters?

I have already helped you think of a name that you would like to change if the book becomes popular, "Questioning Mirror", how about 🤓

This author still can't let go of his body-training plot. Either wear a muscle-busting outfit, or become a monster. There is no Chinese-style fairy tale aesthetic at all. Immortal energy, Taoism, supernatural powers, and magic weapons are not enough for you to write. If that doesn't work, you can copy Journey to the West and Fengshen. It has a bronze head and iron bones, three heads and six arms, and seventy-two transformations. China has its own style of painting of immortals and warriors, and its protectors also have the angry eyes of King Kong. Whether it is a mural or a movie, the outward appearance of physical strength has never been the Western feeling of exploding muscles.

Write more about ladies, female masters, female master uncles, and arrange everything

Write and write with sincerity. I sincerely pray to Beidou Wenqu Xingjun and Wenchang Emperor for your kind protection: May the writing be smooth, the literary thoughts endless, the plot smooth, and the characters vivid. May this book bring good karma and bring good friends from all over the world. With the auspicious omen of Wenchang Wenqu, I wish all new and old book friends good luck in literature and all the best!

Is there Shennong? Is there another useless protagonist?

If the first order is low, I don't want to write. If I don't want to write, the subscription will be even lower. 😆😆😆

Has the beginning been changed? I remember it was introducing the Traveler Company at the beginning. No one wants the life card of the protagonist, the Second Generation Immortal.

Why are my comments gone? Has it been deleted? It's not necessary. I didn't say bad words, I just sent a question. The author responded to me, why is it gone?

After keeping it for half a month, I found it very cool. Originally, the starting point was just to read the copy of the text, but as we all know, you don't need to read the rest of the book. I thought I would have to live with Tomato and eat rotten food, but what happened? I didn't like reading the book at the beginning, so I kept it casually. I read it for a while half a month ago and thought it was okay, so I kept it again. I finished reading it in the past two days. At this point, I think the food and grass and the grass jelly are worth reading. A very comfortable looking book.

Why has the beginning of the article been changed? Although it is almost the same as before, the overall background significance is still quite large. The first step is to go to the Ancient Ark of the Ten Thousand Realms to test fortunes. No one wants it in big companies, but those who want it in small companies are calculated 🙂

This protagonist's life is called the life of cultivating immortals. It is much more enjoyable than those protagonists who live in the slums at the beginning and think about killing people and being killed and cheating every day.

The plot is very good. A little suggestion, if you can't break out of the old routine, I don't recommend not writing a disciple plot. Most of the novels have plots about recruiting apprentices, especially the fairy tales, which are highly toxic throughout. It's not that the author doesn't write well, but that he was deeply influenced by classical fairy tales, which are all pitfalls. It is almost certain to be a similar plot, with apprentices being recruited for no reason and free thugs; the protagonist takes risks and the apprentice enjoys the blessings; the apprentice gets into trouble and the protagonist takes the blame; the tool is stated as a tool, but in reality it is a nanny, etc. It is almost all like this, including the author's previous books. Moreover, disciples often have poor character creation and are very annoying. Even if it is the more common innocent heart (not stupid and sweet), kindness, and hard work, most of the facts cannot be described. Take "The Story of Mortals Cultivating Immortality" as an example. Even a stallion stream that only accepts female apprentices is much better than the above. At least it is logically consistent and profitable. No profit at least, people are likeable, right? The plot of the heirs and the plot of the mount are the same as above. I really hope there is a book that can break out of this framework and lead changes in the novel world.

No more fun

A monthly ticket will be sent to you. The starting point is now only looking at yours and Brother Su's. Do you have any other good-looking ones to recommend? You can also cultivate immortals, have beautiful women, and have leisure. Don't cultivate immortals in a greenhouse every day. You are not as good as ordinary people. Don't endure hardships, just enjoy blessings.

You're all here, let's talk and add some heat! Give me the essence!

Awesome, I didn't say anything and you deleted my comment!

Skip directly to the first two chapters and read from Chapter 3

It's a pretty good article about cultivating immortals, but the description of the Demon Sect's ethos and overall environment is a bit subversive.

A bunch of trainees came here and said it looked good. . .

It's better to change the name and start with the fortune teller.

1. Gluttony: Improve physical body 2. Arrogance: Improve spiritual consciousness 3. Greed: Improve mana 4. Rage: Transform into beast 5. Sloth: Improve qualifications 6. Jealousy: Improve luck 7. Lust: Control humans and beasts

Are there any novels with similar writing style?

Open your harem hard for me

I thought I was looking at tomatoes

Good book, but you can use it more often. Jin Dan's father and family will be the second generation of immortals.

As of the 7-21st, the writing is okay. The plot is coherent and not stuck. There are not many poisonous points. It feels good when it should be. The writing is sufficient. It is rare to find something that I can watch. I hope it doesn't fall apart in the future. It has great potential.

Too little, too good, Qingliu from the starting point of cultivating immortality, it will be on the shelves soon, more updates will be released soon