The American Dynasty: Starting with the Mayflower

The writing is online and the plot logic is good. Because I like to play CK3, I have always been fond of games and novels about family development. This book has added extraordinary elements, so I am a little worried about whether it will turn into a fight between gods in the future (I don't like it personally, and it is just a low-level magic at the moment). In addition, the protagonist is groping for his golden finger to cross the river. It is not like in the game where players can know the effect of their next traits and inheritance. The unknown road is also very good. Support it!

In fact, from the perspective of the world in the future, the decline of the Indians is really inevitable. Unless there is a great man of the era, or a mechanical deity appears, otherwise they will continue to lose blood and be hopeless. The first is that it is impossible to organize an effective attack without complete unification. Let alone the unification of the country, there is not even a unified belief or a unified language. The second is that there is no national consensus. White groups have begun to occupy and attack Indian gathering places. There are also neutrals and people who are friendly to white people. They agree that white people will not kill you after killing others. Thirdly, the technology tree of the Indians was too primitive. Perhaps it was due to the relatively closed and safe living environment. They did not even have the metallurgical casting process, and they did not even have the swords and armors. Obviously, the technological generation gap at that time was not hopeless. Who knew that the Indians did not even have a metallurgical foundation.

I don't know if the author has ever seen China's local ancient brewing equipment. It can produce grain wine of about 30-45 degrees. The distilled version does not need to use the Western copper version. It is enough for the initial start. You can switch to professional equipment later when you have the funds and resources

This triple interweaving of family upbringing, world exploration, and the grandeur of history adds a different feeling to this book. A game system similar to Ck adds extra fun to this novel. But the difficulty in writing this kind of creative point lies in the handover between generations. Different from novels such as Xuanjian Xianzu, the protagonist has to directly face the handover problem between generations, including the transition between bodies and interpersonal relationships. The key is that when the first generation dies, the second generation protagonist will suddenly be controlled by the main perspective, similar to taking over the body, or at a certain stage of life, the protagonist will have two perspectives to control the two generations of protagonists, and then complete the handover, which is more similar to the original body being alive at the same time, or other possibilities. But no matter what, the death of a generation must be a turning point. Still looking forward to how the author writes.

It looks good and the plot is interesting. However, the author should write a family story at a faster pace and not have too many protagonists. 50 Chapters are almost enough. Chapter 100 is a bit delayed. Unlike a family story, after writing the protagonist and laying the foundation of the family, it is time to write how the protagonist's son will continue to develop based on the foundation. It's too slow now.

I came across 100,000 words, but I haven't read it yet, and now I have read it again, and I finished reading it in less than two days. It's so frustrating!

It's just that there are a little few updates, but there are a lot of updates, and the monthly subscription is huge.

It is best to update more chapters after it is released. If you update each chapter one by one, no matter how good the subject matter is, there will only be fewer and fewer people. If I can't remember the plots I watched yesterday and today, I don't know what I am watching. It is best to make them coherent.

It would be nice if the male protagonist could be reincarnated in his own bloodline

Nice idea, looking forward to it😰

The setting is interesting and the plot attracts me, but it is too slow If the plot progresses too slowly and the descriptions are detailed, many people will not want to follow it When there are more people and fewer people follow it, the author will lose motivation and not want to write, and then he will naturally become a eunuch Of course, remember to give a follow-up outline before eunuching, don't say anything

Photos taken during the day trip to Plymouth in the first half of the year, the first photo was of Plymouth Rock

This type of thing needs to be watched in one sitting to feel comfortable

It is completely possible to establish a country at this point in time

🎬 Plot: It's a bit interesting, and the unique plot will keep readers watching. According to the current plot, it's the most rated ✒️Writing: It's okay, at least there are no typos or messy sentence fragments, which is rare, and the writing is smooth 🎭 Character design: At present, it seems that the character design is in line with the plot. We will look at the character design after seeing how the plot develops.

I still feel a little uncomfortable after using my eyes for voice input and touch typing with my eyes closed. It hurts to look at the screen with my eyes open. I also temporarily changed my work to not looking at the computer. Please forgive me.

British colonization was the worst because they looted more than they built

You can write some short stories about future generations at the end of the chapter

Are there two big tribes? The protagonist has a good relationship with one of the leaders, but during the war with the other one, the cannon kills the leader. Can anyone describe the relationship between the tribes in the article?

This book could also be written so that the presidents are related by blood to the protagonist (even Obama is related by blood to the Queen of England, which is too outrageous)

The writing is very good, the writing style is very interesting, and it is not dramatic at all. The plot is still developing steadily, at least in my opinion, there is nothing poisonous about it.

If you survive the Mayflower, your descendants will be the best.

The plot progresses too slowly, so there's no need to write it in such detail (if you have 20,000 a day, just pretend I didn't say anything)

Why don't you post anything? Are you just reading quietly?

I have read more than 100 chapters in one go. I am looking forward to the follow-up. I must finish this book.

Does it look good? Another point is, are you having fun for the sake of having fun? I hope that this kind of novel will talk about logic, and it will be more enjoyable sometimes.

Come on, keep up the good work. Two or more monthly passes.

It's okay, I'm not a novice writer. It looks like you're watching the author play a game, a text-only version of the Creation family. People who like this kind of novels can read it.

Well, on a ten-point scale, I would give it 8.4 Points. You can read it.

The writing is very good, but there are too many unnecessary parts in Golden Finger. Just describe it briefly. More updates.