There's Something Off About This Lord's Magic
这个领主的魔法不对劲
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 85k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
37Chapters
0Votes
64Recs
4Fans
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Reader comments 7
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The vassal of my vassal is not my vassal. The king used several methods to attack the current heir when the power of a viscount was transferred. He was infinitely close to forcing him to give up his viscount title and territory. It was clear that three barons had rebelled and he still had to intervene to prevent them from retaliating. How much impact would this have on the king's feudal rule at that time? Above the viscount there is an earl, above the earl there is a marquis, and above the marquis there is a grand duke. If the king does this, will these people rebel? For only ten gold coins, the viscount will be deprived of the right to inherit, or the inheritance right was obtained by killing. Are you really not afraid of rebellion? This is a poisonous point!
Yal and helen
From Helen's Memories
No system panel, visual inspection of single heroine
Shennong tasted it and found that it was not poisonous for the time being. The cut was a bit slow. It's chapter 10 and I haven't started farming yet. Where will I develop in the future?
I went to Western Fantasy. Can this category really be written down?
The writing is okay, and the character development of the protagonist feels like a top-notch work. However, there are some minor bugs and small details that have not been handled well. The plot is still pretty good. Also, I should mention that the protagonist is not a time traveler.
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There are many places where the logic is not clear 1. The female knight had a very violent character from the beginning. After the second son was controlled, she tortured and killed her. If a young man about the same age as the protagonist hasn't gone out to fight much and is just practicing, his character and behavior would be a bit too exaggerated. 2. The archbishop is set as an ordinary person, which does not fit the background of west Huan Gao Mo. An ordinary person cannot be a noble, nor can he be a bishop. 3. The adultery between the group leader and his stepmother is logical, but it is strange to see the second son being suppressed and killed. And after catching the protagonist, he should kill him directly without any reason to communicate. Because there is no negotiation. 4. Secondly, the process of the second son being controlled until he was killed is too difficult to understand.