The Low-Level Adventurer Begins with the Equipment Slot

Equipment column, solidification, I have seen this set in several books, either the eunuch is unfinished, or it is a mess, I suggest the author at least have a main line, the protagonist must have a goal, otherwise he will dream about where he writes. It doesn't matter if the routine is old, the most important thing is to write well, and it is best if it is hand-made.

1. The panel didn't come out until more than 40 chapters It's a bit slow to warm up 2. The protagonist doesn't seem to have a special sense of urgency to become stronger It's more Buddhist 3. The main and supporting characters are vague Neither of them are memorable 4. The development of the story does not seem to be very coherent. It often requires the reader to make up part of it. But the reader just lacks this. 5. The main plot seems to have appeared It would be too tiring to rely on the reader to guess.

Isn't it a bit confusing? This piece of equipment is next to the next piece of equipment. Isn't it to look at the equipment? Shouldn't it be about the story behind the equipment? Shouldn't the equipment be used to lead the story? 🙂

It is recommended that the author does not want the team to be all female, and can add male characters appropriately The characters should have different characteristics from others, so that they are more identifiable A character that is too perfect will become an unchanging template A nun who likes to pray, a mage who often makes dark dishes, a warrior who likes to use makeup to taunt, an assassin who can taunt... And the like

Well, there's not much to say. I can barely watch it. There are some minor irritations, which is acceptable to me. Inexplicably, it feels like the protagonist is always fighting. In addition to fighting, adventurers can also explore.

It's so tiring to watch, and the plot has to be imagined by the reader. It's not coherent enough. Most of the characters that appear, including the protagonist, look crazy, and the protagonist doesn't want to be a time traveler in his mind.

Why doesn't the protagonist synthesize some equipment such as heavy armor? Always hurt.

There are a few chapters that are tiring to read, especially the part about merging skills. Maybe it's because I'm not used to such narrative techniques But the writing is really good. It's different from many assembly-line works on the market. Although many settings seem commonplace at first glance, it makes me feel like I've returned to a fantasy world I saw when I first came into contact with fantasy novels But it's really a bit messy and there are too many foreshadowings.

If nothing else happens 🙂 I will wait for the author to save more manuscripts.

I hope the author can refer to the writing style and the task of solidifying items in "My Different World is a Game Mode". The protagonist of that novel also explores and fights, but the protagonist of Stone Traveler also has modern thinking, not to mention all kinds of whimsical ideas, but he will not be as rigid as now, and he does not dig holes everywhere.