Plunged into the Cretaceous

Just write whatever you want, select the readers, read a novel and ask for it, then you guys can write it yourself

The writing is a bit shabby, but the story is still good

The author should have come to the starting point long ago. At least your writing style will have a solid audience here. The readers here are very sticky, so just accumulate slowly For example, I have always supported you. Not only can I learn things, but I also have a strong sense of involvement. The details are really good and my knowledge is very deep. On this subject of adventure survival, I feel that no one can write better than you. I even doubt that you wrote that work in 2009. A certain author is so similar. His writing style and writing techniques seem like this when I read your previous works

Is this the only prehistoric survival story with no cheats and hard-core survival? No unpopularity, everyone spoke up, gave away monthly tickets, and arrived at this treasured place for the first time. It is said that the readers of Qidian are handsome and cute. I was extremely serious when I wrote the article, paying attention to every knowledge point. Please correct me if there are any mistakes and omissions, and accept it with an open mind. Remember to support! Your encouragement is the motivation for me to write. (The full text of the novel does not have AI, all words are typed out one by one) Update time is 12 noon every day.

It's so good. I finished it overnight. It's so rare to find an author as good as this. Most authors can't understand logic. The plot, logic, and characters are all online, and it can't be justified without last month's vote list. A good work must be popular. For example, when 99 only had 50 chapters, I can tell that it must be the best among fandoms. Ordinary people's preferences are not too far apart. When all the excellent conditions are met, why can't they succeed? Except for a few people who haven't finished elementary school and some people who are obviously mentally abnormal and different from the public's hobbies, this book will definitely keep most people awake at night. Those new book lists, bestseller lists, monthly ticket lists, etc., Most authors can only satisfy one or two points in terms of plot, logic, and characters, and they are not very good at all. They can even reach the level of this level. In online articles, the author's level is really high, which is a bit incredible. The only thing that worries me is whether the author of such a high-quality work can keep it updated.

The subject matter is very novel, and there is no trope of foreigners being all bad and Chinese being all good, which is rare in today's highly homogeneous starting point.

Reminds me of "Lost in the Cretaceous" by The Horse in the Woods

From the beginning of Chapter 58 when I wrote about Chen Yue, it was like child's play. The story was written bluntly and the rationality was much less.

Speak facts and reason, and don't travel back to prehistoric times. Any carnivorous dinosaur could smell blood from a few kilometers away. At that time, the ancestors of mammals were all nocturnal animals or small animals. They basically had low metabolism and high fertility. The entire mammal lineage, including those killed by dinosaurs, has no gene repair function, so I advise everyone not to travel through ancient prehistoric times. Unless you have a system that is superhuman. Just read this book as if you were bragging.

Come on Unique material selection, the survival story of the Cretaceous Robinson Crusoe group. Daily survival is combined with the science fiction background of multiverse time and space travel. There are too many plots that can be unfolded later. I am very curious about the overall plot direction of the set outline and whether the style will change in the middle and later stages. Did the author change his vest in order to become famous with one book? The writing style is very similar to a book I have read.

The author has no idea what the readers want to see. We are tired of the hypocrisy of unity and friendship. Modern people all want to see rivers of blood.

It's pretty good, but it's too awkward to write about women competing for the protagonist's favor.

Suddenly primitive people appear. If you write what you call a true hard-core survival article, then it will be very inconsistent. . If it's like the American TV series Lost World, then it doesn't matter if there are aliens. . I prefer the latter's team exploration and adventure stories, but I'm not interested in the former's infrastructure search, attack, and evacuation stories. . . I have read a survival article before. Every once in a while, people from different time periods will come through, even ancient people. It is quite interesting. Will there be more time travelers in the follow-up of this book to increase the number of people?

You secretly traveled through time without bringing your brothers to play, right?

I just want to ask how the pig horns survive the high oxygen content and intoxication. . . . . .

Either the protagonists were killed by prehistoric virus microorganisms because they had no antibodies, or the prehistoric creatures could not adapt to the viruses carried by the protagonists, and the creatures became extinct wherever the protagonists went.

Finished reading! It is indeed a novel that sees modern people traveling through the Cretaceous to survive! It's my first time watching it! Some readers have already suggested setting fire to the forest and burning the plains from the outskirts of the aircraft camp to the river! Discover open-pit iron ore by the way! Then use palm trees to squeeze out palm oil, and use reeds to make fire folds, paper, medicine, and water purification. And make charcoal in a low furnace first, and make pottery, bows and arrows one month later! A year later, the plane camp was connected to the river and stabilized, and at least ten babies were born! The other three children took the time to learn Chinese characters and scientific knowledge! Cretaceous human civilization used Chinese characters as ideograms for convenience! (The phonetic characters will be incomprehensible four hundred years later, while only the ideographic characters will be understandable after tens of thousands of years). After reed paper is made, engraving printing can be produced. The protagonist asks all adults to record all the modern knowledge in their minds on reed paper! One person is a blacksmith, two are engineers, one is an old white male physicist, and one is a female doctor. They record all the knowledge and print twenty copies. A simple hand-operated generator will be released in three years (find open-pit copper ore and magnetite), and a simple version of a hydraulic generator will be released in ten years, right? Gunpowder can only be produced by finding sulfur mines. You can hold a small cannon (large-caliber flintlock gun) and a Roman ballistae to fire gunpowder shells. That is, ten years later and twenty years later, the protagonist's children and grandchildren can really defeat the Tyrannosaurus rex with steel weapons and gunpowder weapons! That is, the elderly protagonist, applauding his children and grandchildren for two or three generations, can finally defeat all the large dinosaurs! Defeat by making weapons! In this year, the protagonist finds edible vegetables and fruits, starts the Cretaceous human civilization agriculture, grows vegetables and fruits, breeds herbivorous dinosaurs, and tames Troodon! After all, Troodon is distributed in North America and Northeast Asia! And Troodon is the smartest dinosaur. A female animal trainer took her children and grandchildren to tame a small dog-like dinosaur called Venator, and tamed a small pterosaur to become a homing pigeon-like and hawk-like one! The elderly protagonist completed editing the Cretaceous Chronicle and Cretaceous Calendar, dividing a year into dry season and rainy season, and edited mythological songs to tell future generations that humans must develop aerial technology (aerospace), develop clairvoyance (satellites) and large rockets (hydrogen bombs) to cope with the huge meteorite crisis in the future! Sure enough, 10,000 years later, humans built large and small bases on the moon and Mars during the Cretaceous period and discovered a huge meteorite. According to the mythological protagonist predicting the destruction of the world by the large meteorite 10,000 years ago, 100,000 hydrogen bombs were immediately launched to hit the large meteorite! Human civilization and dinosaurs were preserved. About Troodon, it was the elderly protagonist who saw his grandson taming Troodon, which started the Cretaceous period when humans tamed Troodon for 10,000 years. After 10,000 years of overcoming the giant meteorite, Troodon evolved into Erectosaurus after living in symbiosis with humans for 10,000 years. It was also humans who deliberately trained Troodon to stand for 10,000 years. Troodon - Erectosaurus - Handsaurus - Charlottor - Zhilong, it was also during the Cretaceous that humans threw a thousand Erectosaurus on the Antarctic continent for observation. One more thing, the author wrote that the seriously injured people survived and were disabled. When the elderly protagonist saw the blind and deaf-mute, he thought of the modern university for the blind and the Deaf-mute University before editing the Braille sign language of Cretaceous humans. It also quoted modern semaphores and lanterns (Zheng He's fleet used lantern language). Blind people in the Cretaceous could learn music, massage, mathematics, and also do hand-pushing machines. Deaf and mute people in the Cretaceous learned sign language before Chinese people could learn mathematics, astronomy, physics, medicine, science and engineering. In short, three hundred years after the death of the elderly protagonist, it is estimated that more than two to three thousand humans have reproduced in the Cretaceous? Anyway, the inheritance of iron smelting, gunpowder, and electricity! A thousand years later, there were only over 100,000 humans in the Cretaceous period, and 10,000 people in the largest city also came out to ride dinosaurs! {"Url":"https://qdreaderpic-1252317822. File. Myqcloud. Com/23473729/9e 2959311d0a4f6fa0b04fa168a82b1c_original. Jpg","Width":"960","Height":"1208"}

This subject is so suitable for film and television adaptation. I haven't seen this kind of novel in a long time.

The writing is good, it exceeded my expectations. I originally thought it would be a cliché one, but I found the latest chapter unexpectedly interesting. From the plot point of view, the direct threats faced by the protagonist group are the NAC forces on the cruise ship, with a core combat strength of 500 mature men + at least 20 firearms + modern tactics. The safari sapiens force that can control predatory dinosaurs is unknown in number but certainly larger than the cruise ship force. The paper data of the two hostile forces is much larger than that of the protagonist group. The available combat power of the protagonist group is that there are no more than 20 modern men and no more than 10 firearms. There are twenty or thirty male orcs, plus a small tribe of Homo sapiens. They can't beat it. They should annex other orc tribes later, rely on orcs as soldiers, and use the mycelium in the plot to build a dinosaur army. It is suggested that the author can teach the orcs to use bows and arrows, and add some farming content such as camp statistics. Otherwise, it will be too confusing. I don't know how many people are there now, so I can only rely on feeling. There should also be something interesting to see in terms of system construction. Between modern people and indigenous people, orcs and Homo sapiens, I am curious how to write it. The protagonist group is now more equal to the Homo sapiens forces, and treats the orcs as slaves. If they want to annex the Homo sapiens forces in the future, the current system will definitely not work. It seems to have been written before in the novel that the orcs and Homo sapiens are hostile. Maybe introduce religious rule and caste system? After all, it's a flaw that the protagonist group is small. Anyway, keep writing.

Please revise the previous chapters carefully, especially Wang Hao and his bitch, and what Chen Yue did not handle well. It is recommended that you revise them carefully. These are all small poisonous points. You will have Chen Yue, the heroine of the capital, and don't let her and the yellow haired people say whether to give it or not. In addition, there is no need for the motherland. A big internet celebrity is not a college student, there is no shortage of women, and the two French blond stewardesses who were rescued can also be used to write about it.

I thought it was the kind where the protagonist travels to the age of dinosaurs alone, and then leaves a dragon girl for those who come after me. When I clicked on it, it turned out to be a multiplayer survival show.

This savage is probably an ape-man, so there will be reproductive isolation. In addition, different human races have a direct cannibalism phenomenon, either eating you or fucking you. In the end, only one race is left to become the regional hegemon.

It's quite interesting, but the progress is currently relatively slow, and some problems have been discovered. I don't know if the author is aware of it. I hope you can send me the later archived manuscript to give you suggestions for revision.

Three chapters in one day. It was a pleasure to read. The plot is not watery and unconventional. It moves forward quickly and the words are meaningful. It is really rare.

This book is very good. Keep it level. It is not a dream to become a god with one book.

A well-written emotional line is just the icing on the cake. A poorly written book will be ruined, so I'd better concentrate on writing survival plots.

It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of old-fashioned wandering in the wilderness, still in a group. Today's Wilderness Survival programs are all written programs. It's not that they're not good to watch, but they're a bit boring. I hope the author will work hard and write this book well

The opening chapter is not realistic enough. In the face of disaster, there are not so many dialogues Not to mention the far-fetched determination of the protagonist as the leader Ye Ge is also difficult to listen to In short, it is very vain and not real enough

Why not make full use of the resources on the plane wreckage? There are emergency wind turbines on the passenger planes. It is no problem to use the cables on the plane to create a stream of water in the nearby stream to generate electricity. The planes also have various emergency lights, radios and gyroscopes. If you can't use them now, don't think about the future. Do you really want to dig food in the ground?

Keep writing, don't make a mess, have a well-thought-out outline, be logical, and be optimistic about the big hits.