The Self-Cultivation of an Expert

It's so hard to read your book. The book is gone, the book is gone, and the reading time is too long!

First of all, I think the author's plot advancement is too rigid. For example, at the beginning of Gongyang, it is said to be a shocking conspiracy, so it is better not to write like this, and it can be said more straightforwardly. As long as it is not subdued, we readers can accept it. In Gongyang, readers actually need a bit of God's perspective. If you mention something that other seventh realms will not notice, there will be no such blunt plot development later, and it will give us an inexplicable feeling. It's a wonderful feeling Secondly, I suggest that you don't need so many modifiers. This is not a retro novel like Huanzhu Louzhu's Shushan. The rhetoric will be more straightforward for us to read more comfortably Also, it is indeed more enjoyable to first suppress and then expand the plot, but when writing, I hope the author can have a more logical outline and the protagonist's character is finally determined. Otherwise, there will be too many inconsistencies and there will be doubts when reading. Will the protagonist really do this?

The following only represents my personal views: 1. Doesn't the protagonist know what will happen if he is pregnant with a rare treasure? Even if you don't know, you should have heard the saying "A common man is not guilty, but he who possesses a jade is guilty". The little girl is equivalent to the second descendant of Taoism in our world. You can see visions, so why can't others see them? Isn't that important? Not to mention how many attacks, defenses, magic weapons, spiritual treasures, etc. Some other old monsters have stacked on their descendants, there should be defensive things. It's better for you, you don't have anything at all, only the so-called Dao Fruit automatically protects the Lord. At the very least, you should stack some defensive spells instead of having nothing at all. I don't know if the surroundings are dangerous or not. After living there for about a year, I should know some things. You have great power, why don't you warn some monsters around you? If you really can't fight, just kill him to death. How can there be so many things later? 2. Is the protagonist's reputation great? "Badu River, Bibo Cave, green hills, 800 miles of Qinchuan, no monsters can appear, everyone who sees them will bow their heads" From this sentence, the reputation is relatively great, the key is that the two snake monsters run away when they see it. But that Shura in the back acted as if he had never heard of him before and dared to massacre the city. Your reputation is of no use. You can even smash that Shura to pieces. Why not go ahead and warn, there are cities around. In short, the protagonist gives me the feeling that he has not grown up and has been reading Taoism in the mountains for more than 20 years. During this period, I never went down the mountain or had any contact with the Internet, and then I traveled across the country.

I hope the author will think about it and not write in such a way that it feels like the royal family are all arrogant, and then they offend the protagonist, and then they either humblely apologize or pretend to be pushy. I hope there are more things like this for cultivation.

The sense of fragmentation is too strong. The character of the protagonist is too disconnected from the plot. When you write a fairy tale, the atmosphere is well-done and the description of the environment is also quite good. But your plot has a strong sense of fragmentation. One second your protagonist is picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, and the next second he's killing people and fighting with all his might, which is very abrupt. Then your plots that shape the protagonist's character of "I won't offend others unless I offend others" really create a huge sense of fragmentation. This makes the protagonist's character less like a land fairy and a bit intellectual.

Is the protagonist too useless? Just cultivate the body but not the brain? There is no whim in the True Immortal Golden Elixir Realm on land? The arranged backhand was activated and there was no sense at all. He was beaten to death a hundred miles away but was disturbed by a person in the same realm, and he became blind and deaf. It was not suppressed by the spirit treasure. When you arrive at the county seat, you will be massacred, and the family you save will be almost wiped out. There is nothing new in your plot. Next time you write about someone you know or a place you go to, something will happen in that place. The family is saving you, and you, a land god, put a curse on a little girl. Her parents have nothing. If there is a teleportation, why don't the whole family use it? Do you insist on leading to such a bad plot? Is this the golden elixir realm?

One word "pretend" sums up the author's writing ability. This author's writing style is excellent, much better than those sloppy and licking novices at the starting point. He also quotes some literary allusions from time to time to add literary polish to his novels. ———— 😁 But he couldn't write the taste of a real Taoist master. It gave me the feeling that he was a fake trying his best to pretend to have that charm, but in fact he was just trying to imitate others. Ning Daoqi, portrayed by Huang Yi in Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, has the elegance of a carefree wandering in Zhuangzi's works, just like the Kunpeng of the North Ming Dynasty soaring upwards. One reading can give readers a sense of immortality. 😁And what about you? The protagonist he created was a low-end knockoff who was pretending to be a fake. To put it bluntly, he was fake, so fake that it was extremely unnatural, like a poor clown actor, and he couldn't perform that kind of charm.

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The Monk in the Mountains depicts the feeling of cultivating immortality that I have always pursued. Although it has not been updated due to various reasons, it is still at the top of my bookshelf! I also pay attention to the news from time to time. When I saw it today, it turned out to be a fake corpse! I'm looking forward to the new work of the talented scholar. I haven't mentioned anything yet, so I'm following the new book. Come on!

From the previous plots of the charlatans, to the fact that a dog raised by an expert has caused trouble, don't act like a dog is worth more than a human being, or that a prime minister's dog is more valuable than a third-rank official. Are the charlatans' schemes very harmful to you? Was there any intention to stab you in the back? Or do they want to come here to learn skills and want to curry favor with you because they see how good you are? You can just ignore them! How come the Taoist nobles are sending you to the bliss of the next life? Your self-cultivation as a master does not mean killing people and setting fires without batting an eyelid. Please convey your positive outlook. What you write is that of a master, not a domineering president! ! ! It was okay at first, but the three views I wrote were all wrong. But will anyone who goes to the mountain to learn from a teacher without your permission be thrown out? You'd better look at Han Yu's master and say that your attitude is like those who despise the master-disciple relationship. Since you look down on them and are unwilling to accept them, just ignore them. If you rely on calculations to get up the mountain, you can learn how the Taoist priests from Laoshan dealt with it. It's not about killing people, it's not about throwing them out, it's about using your brain. An expert doesn't have well-developed limbs and a simple mind, he only knows how to hit people. If you follow the way it is written at the beginning, the protagonist's actions will be quite reasonable, but others will see that he is completely overbearing later on. I am not criticizing your writing style, nor am I criticizing you for changing the outline, nor am I criticizing the plot. What I am criticizing is the three views. What I am criticizing is doing the things of a gangster in the name of an expert. Those who follow me will prosper, and those who go against me will perish. So isn't it good for you to write about the emperor? Maybe it will be praised unanimously. You tell me whether you are tired or not, but you still get criticized. Inexplicably, it reminds me of those people in universities who use the name of professors and scholars to do research in the name of doing research, but actually do things that want to be officials.

It was okay in the front, except for the somewhat forced scene in Baili County, which was barely bearable. But what happened to the little girl? Your savior is so pissed off, but you, a god, don't have any backhand or sense? As long as the little girl is protected, is it difficult to draw two more talismans? Forced plot killing, please save the little girl's parents, not the little girl. The same kind of bad fate, Zhuyu, don't you know how to learn from it? Not to mention such a great kindness, even a predestined person will be helped. As for dying so miserably? Can't even copy homework? It is estimated that 80% of readers will not be able to read this book until this point.

I have read seventy-four chapters so far. The first few chapters were quite good, but then they fell apart. The two green and white snakes said to the protagonist when they appeared, "Qingqiu Ridge, three hundred miles of Qinchuan, demons cannot appear, and everyone who sees them will bow their heads." What a great reputation! The result? Neither the monsters nor the human cultivators at the back knew the protagonist. The sixth realm in the article is already a high-end combat power. In the Yunshan disaster, two seventh realms and a dozen sixth realms died, and the low-end ones were basically dead; when Duoduo was saved in Chudi, two seventh realms and more than a dozen sixth realms died; the third floor owner caused trouble, and the third floor of the twelfth floor building died. There are only seven sixth realms of human race in the huge Shu region. Even if other places are ten times better than it, it won't take long for the high-end combat power in this world to be killed by the protagonist. The routine in the article is: the protagonist becomes a hermit, the villain angers the protagonist, the protagonist is born to kill the villain, and then continues to be a hermit, another villain angers the protagonist, the protagonist is born to kill the villain, and then returns home to continue to be a hermit... The title of the book is The Self-cultivation of the Master, I saw the master, where is the self-cultivation? Finally, I would like to summarize my opinion: there are too many bugs.

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I just saw that the author is back to write a new book. I didn't expect that this book will also be eunuch. Can you change your eunuch disease and insist on finishing this book? I still miss the mountains. That book was so well written. It captured the feeling of a master practicing Taoism living in seclusion in the mountains. That feeling is exactly what I want. After reading books for so many years, there are only a few books that I still miss.

Taoist Land Immortal, Li Xuan

Hahahaha, I was right. This book is the same as the previous one. I can't write anything. As I write, I go to the magical world of Europe and the United States. I can't finish writing so many stories in my three-thirds of an acre. I have to write about the messy plots in Europe and the United States. Everyone should leave. This book is dead.

Seeing the land gods is almost the only and biggest cause and effect (commitment)? That brand is broken. As an ordinary person, when the personal gadget is broken, I subconsciously think about it as a land god! ! Laugh it off? Blocked by the secret? Always blocked, is the protagonist still a Taoist priest? The writing is very comfortable to read, but this kind of lunatic-like plot happened twice. The previous time it was said that the secret was blocked by the powerful, how could he still set up a trap? It's really uncomfortable to block someone of the same level if you want to. I gave it up. This kind of plot should be carefully designed and thought about. With the author's writing style, it is easy to stand out. However, I personally feel that such a plot is purely disgusting.

I feel that the purpose of this book is not suitable. The protagonist is invincible from the beginning, defeating all parties, and then the plot is the daily stories of ordinary people in ancient times, which does not match the protagonist's tonnage. Such a story is forcibly glued together, no matter how good the writing is, there is no desire to continue reading. It's nothing more than pretending to be slapped in the face again and again. I don't know who said it was suitable for a middle-aged uncle? Uncle can't appreciate this kind of plot

This book is good. The old routines of complaining about the author have stopped. It's 2021. What routines have readers not seen before? The key is the description of the plot. This book highlights a description of the battle that is very exciting. It is never aggrieved, and it is a battle between heaven and earth! It's refreshing but not white, I personally feel very comfortable!

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Compared with the previous book, the author's book is a bit too exciting. The down-to-earth cultivation life of the previous book is better than this one. This book is at its peak at the beginning, and relatively lacks the part of arduous pursuit of truth, so that the climax reaches the point where the author cannot grasp it now. From the moment I saw the author went to the European and American world, I felt that this book was going to be discontinued. It was just like the previous one, and it was directly interrupted by the war with European and American mythology. The protagonist in the author's writing basically reaches the top without much suffering, so that the author has difficulty in conceiving subsequent plots! Generally speaking, the book "In the Mountains" is much better than this one overall. This book is all about pursuing fun, with a slight sense of mindless fun and losing the excess.

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Is the protagonist Dharmakaya based on Asura? It feels a bit like it

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Let's call this novel a plagiarism. It has also been changed a lot. Let's call it original. It can also be seen in many other novels. It doesn't matter if it is pieced together or not. The author's writing style is a bit good but not strong. Maybe the author wanted to write about a fairy-like outsider, but he couldn't grasp it. It was like he was thinking of accidentally Versailles, but when he wrote it, it just turned out to be pretentious. Take the first few pictures as an example. I personally think they were the beginnings of a bad chess game that was modified and then pretended to be fake. It was very embarrassing to watch. Later, someone's junior accidentally discovered the protagonist's whereabouts for some reason. Then someone thought he was an expert and made rude remarks. Finally, the elder came to see the protagonist and apologized profusely. The junior was shocked and regretful. In this way, the plot unfolds, and it is passed down to ten, and passed on to hundreds. Those people don't care who they are, they are all looking for opportunities. It's like a bustling city. The author should be downloading a copy here, and is busy juggling. There is also this kind of novel. The biggest problem is that it was originally written about an extraordinary person, a peerless master. I can't describe what he should be capable of at this level. For example, others are weaker than the protagonist, but they lay out the world and cover everything. The protagonist is obviously super strong and can do anything. But even the hens being stolen at the door are not counted (metaphorically). (I only saw a few pictures before I saw the shepherd boy. The subsequent plot is purely speculation. Any similarity is purely coincidental.)

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Write a book about eunuchs? Niubi

I saw the first character design of the main character. Others were playing chess there. I put my finger on it and ran over to take a look at the comment section. Sure enough, it was right. Not only was it bad, but the writing was also poisonous.