Monk in the Mountains

Shengliu: Run! ! ! Let's talk about the content of this book in detail. It can be clearly seen from the opening pictures that the author wants to create an atmosphere of tranquility and remoteness, a paradise. There is also a coir raincoat man fishing alone in the snow in the cold river (the twenty-year-old protagonist), and he lives with his four-year-old sister in a small courtyard halfway up the mountain, and there is a big yellow dog. But the problem is that the author just makes the protagonist keep pretending, and they are all very embarrassing and low-level. Let's take the opening chapter. In the middle of winter, the protagonist builds a small boat and fishes in the lake wearing a straw hat. The tourists on the other boat just sit there and read poems. The key protagonist is only twenty. Just to highlight that the protagonist seems to be an outsider, is it embarrassing? Later, there was a supporting couple who couldn't find a place to live in the village at the foot of the mountain, so they went up the mountain to find the protagonist and wanted to stay at the protagonist's house. After that, the man probably wanted to show off that he was rich, so he took out 1,000 yuan and gave it to the protagonist. That's it. The protagonist only took 100, saying that this was the accommodation and food expenses for the two of them tonight. At this time, any normal person would think that the protagonist is quite good, and he is not the kind to see money, right? He was trying to save my face, and when we were having dinner, the man kept talking to the protagonist in a condescending manner, looking down on the protagonist, and the young couple was still tired of each other. The protagonist felt that this was not good for his four-year-old sister, so he sent her to watch TV. He turned around and said to the couple, "Food and sex are good, but food is the first word, and the two of them still eat well, don't let the children take it lightly." Look, what does this mean? Isn't this just saying that the protagonist is very generous, but I care about my sister very much. It doesn't matter what you say to me, but don't affect my sister. She is my sister, and so does this couple. You two stay here, eat their food, and look down on others. Home, and it's not honest to just eat. The supporting character is too mentally retarded. Let's continue with the plot. As soon as the protagonist finished saying this and continued to eat with his head down, someone knocked on the door and said that the child at home was sick. The boss of the village My husband couldn't be saved, so I asked the protagonist to take action (pretend) to see (force). The protagonist cured the disease that others couldn't cure. Afterwards, the family members asked for money. The protagonist only took 200, saying that this is what I deserve. I won't accept more. Look. Look, you are so pretentious. It also highlights that the protagonist is very capable. He can easily cure things that others cannot cure. It also highlights that the protagonist has a big situation. The matter of human life is not a big deal in my opinion, so I only charge you two hundred. It is not vulgar. After finishing treating the person, I went back to clear the table. Maybe what the young couple did just now made the protagonist angry, so he cleared the table regardless of whether the young couple finished eating. What we mean is, if you want to be generous, you should always be generous. Why, you are pretending to be cool and you are not generous anymore. You just cleared the table without caring about whether the young couple finished eating. There is also a plot later. The protagonist takes his sister to the market and sees a father and son selling an unusual tortoise. Someone wants to buy it and has been bargaining with the father and son. The tortoise is the kind of tortoise that absorbs spiritual energy after reviving it. It understands human speech and feels that it is about to be slaughtered. It sheds tears. After it is over, some people start to make superstitious things and say that they ate this psychic animal. There will be retribution for the meat, but the man didn't buy it. The protagonist saw it. The protagonist wanted to buy the turtle, but he didn't have enough money, so the son of the father and son refused to sell it. As a result, the people around him tried to persuade him. Anyway, it was all kinds of superstitious theories. Then the father sold it, and the protagonist used all the money he had to buy the turtle. What a coincidence, not long after the protagonist bought the turtle, a group of people came over. Buying a turtle. I heard that the protagonist bought the turtle, so I went to look for the protagonist. As for the protagonist, because he had no money, he planned to go back and waited at the dock to take a boat back with others. Then the protagonist saw a beautiful woman, but she was in a wheelchair. I believe friends who often read books can already guess what will happen after seeing these few elements. The protagonist has medical skills, is a beauty, and the beauty is in a wheelchair. In fact, if you have written this That's a good point, but the author has something, just to highlight that the protagonist is not a lustful person. The protagonist just glanced at the beautiful woman, said it was a pity, and left it alone. But if you really don't care, that's fine. The beauty was followed by a middle-aged woman and a naughty little boy of six or seven years old. The little boy saw the turtle as a novelty, so he saved a snowball and wanted to throw the turtle, but the snowball failed. It was tilted and thrown on the protagonist's sister. The protagonist's sister was a little unhappy because she bought a turtle without buying anything at the market. Now she became even more angry and started to yell at the little boy. The little boy also yelled back at the protagonist's sister. The protagonist's sister asked the big yellow dog to bite the little boy to scare him. The little boy went back to his mother crying, although the protagonist's sister was only trying to scare the little boy. , But the protagonist went over and apologized, but we always say that if you have a naughty child, you must have a naughty parent. It was just a small fight between the two children. The middle-aged woman came directly to blame the protagonist, saying that the protagonist did not value his dog Balabala, and then the protagonist became angry. But at this time, the beauty suddenly interrupted and apologized to the protagonist on behalf of her aunt, and the protagonist was not angry again. Others apologized. The protagonist is no longer angry, which is normal, but as a normal person, even if I am no longer angry, I should have no good impression of the family. Friends, pay attention to the author's follow-up actions. After the beauty apologized, the protagonist continued to wait for others to take the boat together. At this moment, the group of people who wanted to buy turtles came, and ah, what a coincidence, that group of people and this beauty are members of the same family, and that The man from the young couple who stayed at the protagonist's house that night was also there. He was the cousin of the beautiful woman. You name it, coincidence or not, this family has almost offended the protagonist, and now they are asking for help from the protagonist. You can call it vulgar. The beauty's father wants to ask the protagonist to buy a turtle to treat his daughter's illness. And the beauty's father is coincidentally a super rich man. But who is my protagonist? Is he the kind of person who is blind to money? Of course, it is impossible to sell it, and then the beautiful woman's father launched another financial offensive and moral kidnapping (yes, that's right, moral kidnapping, asking for help but also using moral kidnapping), but the protagonist refused to sell it, but the protagonist said that he would show it to the beauty first. Hey, this is not because my protagonist is lustful, my protagonist just treated the beauty because he was so troubled that he couldn't help it. After the protagonist looked at it, he said it couldn't be cured. Hey, what does that sentence mean? When a gun appears in the story, it will definitely be fired. There are beauties suffering from incurable diseases. How could our protagonist let her go? After the protagonist said that there was no cure, the beauty's father continued to want to buy the protagonist's turtle, saying that it lacked the turtle's heart to be used as medicine. Then the protagonist asked for the prescription and looked at it. He didn't know it and was shocked when he saw it. This prescription was written by the protagonist's master twenty years ago. Alas, it turns out that the beauty was born weak and sick. When the protagonist's master picked up the protagonist twenty years ago, he went to borrow some from this family. Milk feeds the protagonist, and he writes this prescription by the way. The protagonist and this beauty have some causal connection. Hey, a rich man has been unable to get together the ingredients for a prescription for twenty years, so the protagonist has to treat it. The protagonist who just said that it can't be cured immediately said that he would ask the beautiful father to bring the beauty to him tomorrow, and he would treat it. Hey, although your family has offended me to death, who made your daughter beautiful... No, who made your daughter have a causal relationship with me, I cured it. Friends, just by reading these two plots, I think you should understand what this novel is about. Moreover, these are only two representative plots that I extracted. There are still many big and small poisonous points that I haven't mentioned yet. Now you should understand why I said this novel is a poisonous den. In short, just run away.

This is a magic book. When I read it, I became very angry and had endless things to say.

Not to mention that the idea is not clear, this book is considered useless after reaching chapter 234. It is a waste of time to read a sacred book. It is really Tema's failure.

Generally speaking, this book is quite creative and the world view is very innovative. However, the author's processing ability is still lacking and his writing style needs to be improved. The author wanted to write a lot, and he wanted to bring some personal details, but unfortunately it was a bit immature, which made it uncomfortable for both the person who wrote it and the person who read it. After all, it is a web page. If the experience is not enough, I hope the author can just tell the story honestly and don't fall into the trap of literary youth! !

Compared with most immortal cultivation novels, this book is indeed a breath of fresh air, but that's all. There are two reasons: First, the character description is too thin. For example, the protagonist Jiang Xiaobai doesn't look like a human being at all. His emotions and desires are almost cut off, and the family and friendship that are emphasized are particularly pale and weak. I only see embarrassment in Jiang Xiaolu's love; or Jiang Xiaobai is a person who is established both subjectively and objectively, but no one wants to see a faceless man, because the author did not say how everything about him was formed. This is not something that can be easily explained by a monk who has been practicing Taoism in the mountains for more than 20 years. Second, the layout is too small. Modern cultivation is not the business of the cultivators themselves. The author has not emphasized on world events, social situations, and the ways of the world, and it contains too much black and white flavor. In short, this is a clear stream, but it is not my clear stream.

When I saw Longhu Mountain, I was really convinced. I can't explain why it's all caused by fate. Why are you still going out to the mountain?

I finished reading this article! Brothers, run quickly

The protagonist's temperament feels like he has no desires and no demands. He has no sense of responsibility. The more I watch it, the more I feel dissatisfied with the protagonist's mentality. I'm not saying you have to do something. If a person is like a cold stone, why are you still alive?

What kind of explanation is it? It's not caused by the protagonist's disregard for human life.

Talented man, stop wandering and go home quickly

A rare good book, come on, talented man!

I read other novels before, which mentioned that the author was locked in a small dark room and made to type 20,000 to 30,000 words a day without being fed. That powerful book friend went to catch the talented man in the dark room and wait online~~~~

I wanted to find some articles written by masters who cultivated immortality like this, but I found that several similar articles were unfinished, such as Dao Xing. It's best if the protagonist is from a Taoist sect. I really can't fit into the Buddhist sect. As a senior monk, it's okay to guide the protagonist, or to play a supporting role. But as the protagonist, I personally can't fit in. . Please recommend. .

It was a pretty good novel. It's quite charming, but after the protagonist went crazy, the writing became more and more trashy, as if he had changed into a different person. Too popular. Not interesting

After killing everyone in Longhu Mountain, I gave up immediately.

If you ask me carefully, why do you have to get entangled with a woman? It's all in vain, alas.

I really couldn't stand it anymore. It was a good book, but it was really baffling.

I haven't read it since I committed suicide. To be honest, I have been reading for almost 8 years and I haven't seen many people who can come back to their true self. It was a book with great potential. It is a pity Having said that, after these years of development, the starting point has been established. It is getting harder and harder for small authors to stand out. It is difficult for authors to change their vests and then have such achievements 🤫

This book was written by the author himself. I was chasing updates at the beginning. I don't know at what chapter he started writing it, and I don't know if it was changed later.

This book is really good. I read it in 18 years, and I still think of it now that I am 21 years old.

After so many years, I still want to criticize it. The twist is like a piece of shit. There is no foreshadowing and I just go crazy and kill them all, and then they are resurrected. The author wrote the climax himself.

Hey, the writing collapsed later, otherwise you, the author, wouldn't know how to be a eunuch.

I was really convinced. I was so angry at this unlucky book that my head hurt. I cursed it a few times and ran away without reading it. Why is it that it's already 2025 and you're still pushing this unlucky book to me on the home page? When I saw the name, I felt familiar. When I saw the unlucky name Jiang Xiaobai, I felt even more familiar. After browsing the book circle for a while, hey! Sure enough, it is this unlucky book. It's an unlucky book, if you're too lazy to comment, just read it if you don't believe in evil.

I feel that the male protagonist is very cowardly. He has been bullied many times by the other party. He is afraid of trouble and does not dare to kill people. He just said, "Next time I see you, I will return double the amount."

When I saw Jiang Xiaobai's fragmentary way of looking back at Longhu Mountain, I was obsessed with it. This fragmentary way of writing was so over the top that the character of the protagonist collapsed. It was so disgusting.

Okay, okay, I found another book. Fully booked to show support

Author, your cover is really unique. No wonder I didn't notice it for so long.

After reading it for a long time, it's not a Taoist way of playing. Such a good writing style is really a waste. Taoist inaction is written as salty fish and cowardice.

I felt that it became unsightly around chapter 200, so I just kept "pretending" and pretending. Is this kind of writing really good? The peaceful temperament before has changed.

Create a post, and the talented person will put it on the shelves tomorrow. If you update a chapter, you will be rewarded 20 yuan, with no upper limit. The first floor of this post costs one yuan. I'll see you in the group tomorrow for the red envelope. Emmmm, I'll put a cap on this, maybe 200.