Invasion of All Realms: Summoning Immortals Starting from Brother Monkey

At the beginning, the two female teammates felt that it was a bit too much, and there was nothing they could do. Opinion only

The biggest problem with your writing is that it's not cool enough.

The theme of the story is very good, but the plot development is a bit slow. The protagonist owns more than a dozen houses to collect rent, and he has just been given a golden finger for two days. Suddenly, two women he met once invited the protagonist to go on an adventure, and the protagonist still couldn't refuse. What reason did he have to go out and take risks? , People who have only met once dare to form a team. If they were not the protagonists, they would have been made into barbecued pork buns with human meat.

You know, I've been a fan of the Monitor for ten years.

Why can enemies be from all over the world, but most of them are summoned from Journey to the West?

The one with the strongest bond must definitely choose Yang Jian. Let's not talk about the far ones, let's talk about the close ones. Yang Jian's master is Yuanshi Tianzun, his uncle is the Jade Emperor, and his uncle is the boy under Hongjun. In terms of background, Nezha and Sun Wukong are not worthy of carrying Yang Jian's shoes.

Yes, look at how well the subject matter of this book was chosen. The writing is very good, and I think it is a relatively potential author. Come on, I especially like the book you wrote before: The End of the Realms, Summoning Thousands of Armies.

I didn't have any desire to read the last single-player book, and the author is not good at it. Isn't it better to practice in your comfort zone first until you can write 700-800 chapters steadily? You see, Xu Ming's change of style almost killed him. Don't be too aggressive, just take it slow.

There are two gringo girls at the beginning, giant poison, and lightning protection.

It was originally a good subject, but two foreign women were inexplicably added at the beginning. The protagonist himself was not prepared to be exposed, but he agreed as soon as the two women invited him? Be sick!

The subject matter is good, but the plot is not. It's draggy, bland, and not exciting enough. The protagonist is supportive throughout.

{"NickName":"","UserId":112367553}This subject is good, but the author's skills are average. Do you want to try it?

You are so quick in conceiving and selecting topics for your new book. You can open it in seconds 😰

So passive? Other Guo Jia can throw monsters, but his own Guo Jia has no monsters to throw back?

With the current protagonist's ability to summon, resurrect, and reunite immortals, he is definitely the spring of heaven in the list of gods.

Come on

I think there is absolutely no need to have such a deep connection with reality, not to mention that modern ones are still not as good as classical ones, and hot weapons are far inferior to those cold weapons.