DOTA System Comes to Marvel

If it weren't for the fact that I prefer DOTA, I don't think I would insist on watching it. I just read this book today, and I have read more than 30 chapters so far. But there have been many times that made me want to give up the book. Let me first talk about the biggest problem of this book, which is that the main line is not clear, and the author writes here and there. If you take the route of killing monsters and upgrading, then you should concentrate on finding ways to gain experience. If you want to run a company in the city and make money at the same time, then please focus on the description and intersperse other plots. But the author simply cannot grasp the point. Secondly, I think the vast majority of people in China have never read comics, and what everyone is familiar with is just the characters that appear in movies. However, the author insists on struggling countless times in the article whether this is comic or movie Marvel, and even struggles with which actor plays which version of Marvel. I know that the characters in the movie have been greatly weakened, but now that you are the author, you can just write according to your own ideas, including the combat effectiveness of the plot characters. But you always repeat what version this is over and over again as the plot progresses. Thirdly, there are those miscellaneous fish heroes in comics. There is no need to write so many. I don't have the ability to write every character well, and readers are not familiar with the miscellaneous fish characters in comics. This not only causes great reading difficulties, but also makes readers feel unhappy. Fourthly, when it comes to investing in favors, it is of course more useful to invest before the character matures, but the protagonist is too licky. When talking and interacting with the characters in the plot, I always keep describing what this person will be in the future, but now I am always timid when doing things, and I am always a licker. Many things are just coincidences, such as Spider-Man. If Peter Parker didn't go to visit that day, or if he went to visit, but before the spider bit him, someone called him away and went somewhere else, could he still become Spider-Man? ? ? There are too many things, and a slight difference is a huge difference. The protagonist is obviously very awesome now, so you just need to treat him with a normal attitude and sincerely make friends. You have to consider what the other person will be like in the future, and then act like a licking dog now. I'm really speechless.

I've never played Dota, so I can't understand it.

Nowadays, people who write Dota are basically invisible. Come on, author. Another comment: The author sets the three-dimensional attributes of ordinary people to 1. Is it a bit too low? The protagonist's attributes are doubled with a branch. What is the concept? A branch can make the protagonist a weightlifting champion + a sprint champion + a genius blood tyrant? It's strange that his fighting ability doesn't collapse. I think it is more reasonable for ordinary people to change the three-dimensional attributes to 10, so that trained people can increase their strength and agility to about 12 to 15. The attributes of a first-level hero are only in the mid-teens to mid-twenties. They may be weaker than super soldiers like Captain America, but with their going-out outfits, they should be 50-50 equal to Captain America. Some well-trained soldiers should be equivalent to Dota's minions. They can win but will lose a lot of health. Of course this is naked.

I want the protagonist who is fully armored, with the Butcher's passive + UG's refraction + dragon's blood + DF's shield + woodcutter's armor + Centaur's counter-injury + Void's back to the past, and give these skills to Pig's Foot, Pig's Foot is the most handsome boy in the universe, and the equipment should be Dragon's Heart + Flying Boots + Linglong + anything else

After reading more than a dozen chapters, it's normal for this book to be a hit. What did the author write? 1: It's so long-winded. It's obviously about a movie, but here comes a person who wants to briefly introduce the plots of a bunch of comics. Is he afraid he's sick? 2: The plot is too slow. And what the hell is that about rescuing my sister? If I don't save people first, then I end up chatting with the punisher, maybe I'm going to be sick? 3: As a cheating protagonist, is it necessary for the author to write that he is a licker? Just communicate normally. Why are you licking a dog? I'm afraid I'm sick! There are so many pitfalls, and this subject matter is in vain.

Don't say anything. Dragon Knight is invincible, as long as you can beat me (I only play Dragon Knight and think it's cool because I'm meaty, and I have a legend)

To be honest, why are you so nice to SHIELD? If you give someone a promise to help without any reward, SHIELD will not treat you well. They will only play you and use you as a tool.

I haven't watched it yet. Is the protagonist a Marvel licker? Because most of the protagonists in American comics work as slaves for S. H. I. E. L. D.

What's going on when the protagonist keeps licking Spider-Man when he has nothing to do? ? ? ?

In fact, I have never played DOTA. I just read Dota and I hope you can explain it a little bit about hero skills. You can also read it. If you don't explain it, I don't even know what the hero skills are. Okay, I'm reading.

Others write lol, but you are the first one I see writing dota.

I was suspected of being a thief, so I took a musket inheritance and engaged in close combat all day long. Apart from the fact that the equipment was named in the turret, I felt it had little to do with the turret.

Everyone came here for the turret, but in the end, there was basically nothing about the turret. It can be said that the key point was completely missed.

The pace is too slow. I came here for DOTA, not for you to write daily stories about the protagonist and Marvel heroes.

Everything else is fine. It's this American pioneer that looks a bit dazzling. No matter it's the early code name or something else,

When reading Marvel novels, the most overwhelming thing is that my classmate is Peter Parker, and then he screams with familiarity all the way, and I am really a novice NPC.

Isn't the protagonist's mind not clear enough? He doesn't look like a smart person. No matter what your identity is, someone must know it, and it's probably an agent organization like S. H. I. E. L. D. Just having money is useless. You have to have social status or be famous enough to block some prying eyes. Iron Man is nb because he is the boss of Stark Industries. If it was just an ordinary person who was being fucked to death. After all, clothes cannot be worn 24 hours a day. Why doesn't the protagonist's company run well? Just for money? Becoming a minority shareholder in Stark Industries is useless and the company's network protagonists are useless. It's the same as nothing.

To be honest, I have read more than 50 chapters and have no desire to continue reading.

When Ancient One comes out, it feels like it was written by a different person. Damn it, isn't there a better Marvel fanfic from the starting point now...

This is such a gross Dota. After reading dozens of chapters, I got a dwarf musketeer, and I haven't written an upgrade yet.

I suggest the author write more Dota content. After all, most of the people who read your books came in because of Dota. Don't always deal with daily superheroes. This is really boring.

DOTA carries the youth of a generation. I hope that when playing DOTA, you will get rid of the air conditioning, just move up, don't listen to the words of those who give up on themselves, do what you can do, and shine when you can! There is a bit of heat and a bit of light, just like a firefly. It can also shine a bit in the dark. There is no need to wait for the torch If there is no torch from now on, I will be the only light!

Too much nonsense. At least 60% of it is meaningless. The author's own narration

You can't use the Battle Fury Ax in close combat 🙂

It seems that there are more than 20 chapters, which feels relatively young, but the subject matter is good,

Why is there no one writing about King of Glory?

The author did not write about how absolute talents and growth attributes of multiple heroes are.

The butcher's ability to kill people increases his strength. It's so abnormal. Is this possible?

Do they all produce meat? Considering the reality, I think I should first learn the Blue Cat Flying, and then add the Silent Stealing Intelligence and the Black Bird Essence Aura to learn new knowledge. In the Western world, learn the Holy Light Technique to add blood, and I should be able to join the circle of the Vatican, or learn the Panda Clone. It just happens that the Five Elements can study the Eastern system, and finally learn a Black Hole. If you are hunted, release it and go to destruction with the Earth King. Of course, this is impossible, hehe, I want to learn it. It would be difficult if they were the same, let alone the skills of people with different identities.

Similarly, zz still thinks that the protagonist is too strong. The protagonist wants to do it according to your ideas. How long can you survive if you don't have dozens of resurrection items when you go out?