Invading All Worlds: Summoning Immortals and Gods, Starting with Sun Wukong

At the beginning, the two female teammates felt that it was a bit too much, and there was nothing they could do. Opinion only

The biggest problem with your writing is that it's not cool enough.

The theme of the story is very good, but the plot development is a bit slow. The protagonist owns more than a dozen houses to collect rent, and he has just been given a golden finger for two days. Suddenly, two women he met once invited the protagonist to go on an adventure, and the protagonist still couldn't refuse. What reason did he have to go out and take risks? , People who have only met once dare to form a team. If they were not the protagonists, they would have been made into barbecued pork buns with human meat.

You know, I've been a fan of the Monitor for ten years.

The subject matter is good, but the plot is not. It's draggy, bland, and not exciting enough. The protagonist is supportive throughout.

Why can enemies be from all over the world, but most of them are summoned from Journey to the West?

The one with the strongest bond must definitely choose Yang Jian. Let's not talk about the far ones, let's talk about the close ones. Yang Jian's master is Yuanshi Tianzun, his uncle is the Jade Emperor, and his uncle is the boy under Hongjun. In terms of background, Nezha and Sun Wukong are not worthy of carrying Yang Jian's shoes.

It was originally a good subject, but two foreign women were inexplicably added at the beginning. The protagonist himself was not prepared to be exposed, but he agreed as soon as the two women invited him? Be sick!

There are two gringo girls at the beginning, giant poison, and lightning protection.

Yes, look at how well the subject matter of this book was chosen. The writing is very good, and I think it is a relatively potential author. Come on, I especially like the book you wrote before: The End of the Realms, Summoning Thousands of Armies.