Heroes of Might and Magic: Lord of the Yellow Springs

I have been writing this book review for a long time and hope the author will read it

It's the same disease as the feathered people. I'm not good at writing.

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It is recommended that authors write less about jealousy. Most authors are not good at handling emotional lines. At present, jealousy affects the perception quite a lot.

Seriously, this has something to do with Invincible Heroes, but not much. Mainly just Warhammer, with some random content added. The biggest problem is that there are too many elements. You want everything, but you can't keep it. Wouldn't it be better if it could be streamlined and the characters' stories could be portrayed in depth?

There is one Yumin and you. Your imagination is weaker than that of Yumin. Your writing style is better than that of Yumin, but the good is very limited. Can you spend some time to polish the writing? Your previous books also had a problem, which made my head hurt when I read it.

The biggest problem with this book right now is that there is a precious person who keeps posting paragraphs and comments, and he gets caught up in this kind of thing. Half of the book has been sent. Haven't you noticed that other readers are so annoyed that they don't want to post paragraph comments or even click on them?

My initial worries have come true. The handling of female characters is really not good, and there are more and more female characters.

The author's character creation is too monotonous, and he doesn't even have any

It has almost the same routine as the previous book, and almost the same problems, but the result is that the plot falls apart and the ending ends.