Heroes of Might and Magic: Lord of the Yellow Springs
英雄无敌之黄泉狱主
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.8M Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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I've been writing this book review for a long time, I hope the author will take a look.
Like many others, I have the same problem: my writing is terrible.
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I suggest the author write less about jealousy and rivalry. Most authors struggle with handling romantic storylines, and currently, jealousy and rivalry significantly detract from the reading experience.
To be honest, this is related to Heroes of Might and Magic, but not closely. It's primarily Warhammer, with some crossover elements. The biggest problem is that it has too many elements; it tries to include everything but can't manage to balance it all. Wouldn't it be better if it could be streamlined and the characters' stories developed more deeply?
There's a Yumin here, and there's you. Your imagination is a bit weaker than Yumin's, and your writing is a bit better, but only slightly better. Could you spend some time polishing your writing? Your previous books had the same problem, which gave me a headache.
The biggest problem with this book right now is that there's this expensive guy who keeps posting comments; he's got me all tainted by this stuff. Half the book has already been shipped. Haven't you noticed that other readers are so annoyed they don't want to post comments or even open them anymore?
My initial fears have come true: the handling of female characters is really poor, and there are just too many female characters.
The author's character development is too simplistic, almost nonexistent.
It followed a similar formula to the previous book, and had similar problems. As a result, the plot collapsed as the writing progressed, and it ended poorly.