What to Do If You Become a Beast?

It's over, let's make a fuss, and the reason why I watched the quick retreat and started raising in the middle is that I don't really like the plot of turning into a human and walking alone. In the early stage, there was a master plot, and I didn't object. It just felt like watching Pokémon. It was quite good. When I started to walk alone, I took in a younger brother and communicated with other beasts. This kind of plot continued to understand, but it felt a bit different, that is, the alien beast flow began to have more human flavor, and the music was not good. Opening a clone to play in the league is considered a complete openness, and it is also the reason to directly open the breeding, because no matter it is a transformation, a clone, or a trap, the final result of its essence will not change. Just changing the term is digressing from the topic and writing the original beast as a human being. I originally thought that meeting each other would be a small climax, but it was quite dull. When it comes to the alien beast flow, it is seen from a different perspective than human beings. However, one person turned into a human and returned to the tradition. The freshness was gone.

What the hell, the protagonists are indeed dual protagonists at the beginning. There is no main character or deputy, but there is no character. Both sides are vaguely written. If both sides are erased, neither side will be pleased. It is very vague. His Meow reminds me of the TV series Xiaoyuer and Huawuque, but the problem is that this is a novel 😓 It's all about looking at the beginning and the end I suggest the author to take a good look at what he has written. I am not going to criticize and recommend reading Beast Control from Zero or other novels. They are all about dogs. Why is there such a big difference?

The writing is good, the writing is smooth, and the pitfalls can be filled in. I hope the worldview will not collapse. Regarding the underground forces, if the writing is too strong, it will definitely cause rifts in the worldview. I hope the author will pay attention to this aspect in the future. It's ok for now

To be honest, your heroine was too ordinary in the early design. If you design a yandere type, I think a lot more people will see it.

It's hard to read this kind of domestic elf literature. Why do you need to set up such ridiculous settings as racial levels? The level of elf is inherently limited by this thing. It's just a matter of learning Pokémon and not learning to set it yourself. I have never seen anything like this when looking at Pokémon. Although different Pokémon have racial differences, there are no restrictions on levels. At most, there are differences in ability values. This only reflects the combat power. Even if the insect type is weak, there is still an insect type king, which does not prevent others from reaching the peak and reaching 100 levels. I don't know who is responsible for setting this kind of setting for domestic elf literature. If there is a race with a low level, it will be ridiculed and looked down upon. If it is strong, it will be shocked and unbelievable. That's about it. Can't the domestic elf literature be less violent in this aspect?

You finally transformed into a human, right? A very real illusion, pretending to be an adult to participate in the competition. What is the difference between this and transformation? It doesn't match what's written in the introduction, Chapter 260. Still become human.

This book is a good book. If it doesn't collapse, it may become popular.

The alien beast genre is the alien beast genre. If you use humanoid clones, it will change its flavor. How many books have been written on clones, and they are still creating clones.

Transforming into a human is boring. In my opinion, the most prominent thing about alien beasts is the word beast. Anyway, you are no longer a human being. You have become an animal and become another species. As a result, your mentality does not change. You always maintain a human mentality inside, and then externally transform into a human form. There are people inside and outside. What is the difference between you and a human? Don't talk about clones and mirror images. Aren't they all under your control? Alien beasts should highlight an animal nature, and then Evolution, detachment, and distinguishing oneself from humans. Most of the purely alien beasts I have seen either oppose people, fight against detachment, or become beliefs, god-like existences, humans are just appendages, and fight against higher beings. The aliens that I remember deeply are those about monitor lizards, black snakes, tigers, mantises, succulents, and trees. Recently, I also read a book about a demon named Orponga. Although it is not an alien, the core of this kind of inappropriate human being is similar.

Don't you have a finished work before? Why not recommend your own work? It's like being in jail alone. Five comments and I think your fandom is worth it.

I feel like the villain organization is weird. I decided to steal a dog just because I saw it on TV one more time. In order to steal the dog, I kept sacrificing the organization's manpower.

After reading it for so long, I would like to give the author some small suggestions. After reading some comments and posts, many readers felt uncomfortable with the protagonist pretending to be an adult to participate in the competition, and felt that he was trying to sell someone else's meat. But I can understand this part. After all, as a self-employed person, it is difficult for the protagonist to obtain resources, so it is understandable to participate in the competition to obtain resources. Moreover, the Armored Frog and the Mushroom Man gave me a refreshing feeling. After all, I can't speak for most readers in the beast-control novels, but in my opinion, the beast-control novels focus on things that are different from others. It would be better to have more similar plots, such as helping other people or other mythical beasts to control beasts and raise offspring. The article also describes the cultivation of the offspring of the beast tribe, but it is basically covered in one stroke, and the protagonist just pretends to be awesome. I have also written before that I understand the competition, but the most important thing is that the pace is too slow. From the district competition to the national competition, the content of these chapters is really just for the sake of showing off. But in fact, considering the protagonist's current rank, this kind of competition pretentiousness does not create too much excitement, at least not for me. Moreover, the character of Chi Rongrong is not very likable, but in the end, a lot of pen and ink is spent describing the competition between Chi Rongrong and the protagonist. , I can feel that the author is laying the groundwork for the legendary meeting between the protagonist and Chi Rongrong's father, but the protagonist, as a quasi-legend, already feels inferior compared to them. The person to be compared with the protagonist should be a legendary figure, just like a professional player bullying a bronze player. When everyone knows the established result, the large-scale description makes the plot seem weak, and there have been many obvious talking points recently, resulting in a decline in the overall quality. As a reader who has followed up to this point, I believe that the author is very aware that the number of words he updates every day is not enough. I also believe that the author wants to update a lot, but human energy is limited. Readers read every day, but you write less, and you don't have a good point in several chapters. We haven't seen a good point for several days, and gradually the enthusiasm has declined. There are many books in my bookshelf, but there are very few that have been completed because the author has not updated for a few days. Even if I liked reading it before, the plot cannot be connected in my mind, and it is difficult to have the desire to read on. I hope the author will write better and better.

The cartoon version fits the appearance description of the different-armored Cangyunmon very well. It still has two heads missing and more horns, but it is full of white hair and is linked to the Cangyunmon.

It's okay to be a dog, but it's very problematic to be a dog for others. A beast does not grow freely in nature, but interacts with humans? Humans and beasts are naturally opposed to each other. Even in the Pokémon world, there are special chapters as a cruel background. At the same time, the biggest selling point of Pokémon is that the arrogance and power of the mythical beasts make it stand above humans.

Is it a bit weird for the protagonist to walk upright? When I think of it, it's an upright walking bird, and I feel a little weird. Also, since a toad wears armor, why doesn't it evolve into a humanoid form? Don't you think it's weird for a toad to wear armor and walk upright? 😅 You have to have a clear idea of ​​what a beast looks like. Some can walk on two legs, and some can be said to be hooligans!

Dear book friends, I have taken over the trap of No. 1 Bronze Alliance. The author said that there will be 20 more updates. How can I say it? Hurry up and supervise it PS: If you don't like it, just leave it alone. There is no need to come in to express your thoughts. People who like to read it will continue to follow it, and those who don't like it will leave on their own. If you come in and complain a few words, the author may be disappointed. You have lost a few potential readers because you have done this. If the writing is not perfect, you will cut the book. The new readers are all gone, and there are only a few old readers of big cats and kittens. If you don't make money and write a crappy book, what will you do to the people who want to continue reading

What do you think of this kind of book? It actually has an owner.

Looking at the whole thing, it feels weird. In this situation, I guess that the monster was experimentally produced. Shouldn't this extremely harmful organization and experimental monster be captured and tortured related information? Gao Xuefeng's whole performance gave people a feeling of being careless. He seemed to be very capable of grasping the overall situation and suppressing it, but he couldn't catch the monster, nor could he catch the two people in the organization. He watched the monster beat the two people and asked what it felt like to be beaten by his own test product. This felt like an undercover organization, and after something happened, he allowed the monster to kill and silence him. Even the protection from behind cannot protect people. In addition, Tang Wenhua watched the whole show later. They were probably together with Gouzi at that time. In the early stage, the opponent was not injured but he was afraid of Tang Wenhua. But later on, Tang Wenhua was like this. Tang Wenhua's reaction was not as fast as Gouzi's, and he didn't make any moves. Thirdly, that monster's method was also able to break through Gao Xuefeng's blockage and protection several times. How could he be so good at it? Fourth, Liao Zhenshou and the old man were dealing with monsters in the city before, and the people behind them were all gone. Normally, one would stay behind to stabilize people's hearts, protect people, and restore order, while the other would probably chase after them quickly, and they would only come after the matter was over. Overall, it can be said to be extremely blunt and inconvenient. In addition to the characteristics and skills of various beasts, the bond of partnership should be very important, such as Xiaozhi and Pikachu, or Shi 🐶 and his beasts. The bond between each other and the feelings and relationships of sharing adversity and adversity. To be honest, in this world, beasts are lifelong partners and part of the family. It's no different. Tang Yuexuan calls Tang Wenhua's two beasts Dushu Shu and Uncle An. From this, it can be seen that your wings are stiff and you run away from the little girl, which is really embarrassing. Everyone likes Huangtian Emperor because of the sense of responsibility he has carried for eternity and conveyed positive things. They hate Tang San because of the disgusting things and bad things behind him. The protagonist's description of the actions of Xiong Binghua's two teammates in the district championship match at the time seemed to be inconsistent. That is the correct approach and bond in the world of beast control. Gouzi was also a human in his previous life, but he could not understand that character and character are indeed an important criterion for the success of a mission. The protagonist felt that the character and thoughts were very weak and could not support so much knowledge in his mind. If he could have so much knowledge, at least his thoughts, temperament and words would not be so thin. Secondly, your book is the same as the books about rebirth as a snake and rebirth as a beast a few years ago. What everyone is reading is a novel perspective and a different world. In some books, he turns into a human later in the book, and then goes to the human world, and then beauties pretend to be cool and get slapped in the face. It is the same as some books. So what is the starting point of rebirth as a beast? What is the meaning?

Readers who are interested can comment on the building with their own imagined beasts or characters, and I will use them in the book if appropriate.

If you don't know how to write about group portraits, don't write about it. When you focus on supporting characters or supporting actors, writing a running account like a child is really disgusting, watery and disgusting, and it is equivalent to a direct collapse.

Not bad, the water was definitely a little watery. But this kind of novel has advantages as long as it is not overdone. There are definitely some unreasonable things, and it's considered basic material, so it's pretty good.

I thought it was quite interesting before the protagonist was teleported away, but I couldn't stand it afterward. Taking the subject of beast control and writing the protagonist as a beast control and not as a human being, this angle is fine and very creative. Since it is based on beast control, isn't the biggest attraction of beast control the various strange creatures and the bond between the beast and its master? There is no need to run away specifically for the sake of equality. It is hard to say that true equality is true. Just arrange for the protagonist to be seriously injured and on the verge of death. The only way to save him is to form a life-sharing contract or something like that. The two people are equal in life status. One will be prosperous and the other will suffer. This is also very good. Tang's other royal pets can be used as younger brothers, and writing about other competitions or secret adventures is also very interesting. If you really can't write an accidental time travel to other small worlds to entertain a few dozens of chapters and then return to the main story, you can write like this for a long time.

After reading the introduction, I felt like this - if a good person doesn't do anything, he just wants to be a dog.

Shen Nong, Liang Cao, the writing style is witty and humorous, and will later evolve from Liuyun Dog to Blue Cloud Beast.

Is this a forced eunuch? The writing of this combat power is broken. The elf writing in the early stage of this book is very good. It goes high and low. Otherwise, how much more popular would this book be if it were written well?

I have already ordered and read it all. As long as there are no bad points in the follow-up, it will at least be a good book. But I hope it will be updated more. I couldn't even hold on to this word count for a day before I finished reading it.

888 A good idea🤓

I haven't watched it for a week. It's great that you're free of charge when you go online

Halfway through, I said I wanted to take care of myself, but it ended? . . .

More finesse, you know? 😍😍