Marvel's Debt King Loves Making Friends the Most

After reading some, I don't know much about Goldfinger's background, but I think the setting is actually quite good, but the setting that the cards have to be combined into two to combine with the armor doesn't look very good. The author has set that the combination requires strength and compatibility, but I don't quite understand it. The infinite possibilities brought by the superposition of strength have been artificially limited by the author. If I want to fix the bug, can it be 2-in-1 + 2-in-1 = 4-in-1? And as of the part I watched, I didn't see the protagonist actively researching his own cheat after getting the cheat, trying to influence change and control, etc. It is very unrealistic. This way, there is less introduction to the protagonist's abilities, and it also affects the reading experience to a certain extent. Secondly, I think that after generating a card, it should mean that the card is under your own control. It is not too much to split the functionality so that you can create cards twice. Finally, I feel that there is no need to show a physical belt in the novel. It is better to set it as a belt itself. The armor is like a game skin. You can choose whether to display it to the outside world, so that the card abilities can be infinitely integrated into yourself, and then DIY, split, reorganize and optimize the combination. In this regard, you can incorporate some settings similar to professional skill trees. New cards can be unlocked to add new postures, new skills or special effects or passives, and it is not necessarily only creatures from other worlds that can become cards. For cards, you can set equipment cards, skill cards, prop cards, skill cards, etc., And you can generate cards if they are recognized. In my understanding, they are authorized by the power holder. The law of cause and effect forms an information state entanglement, so that it can be parsed and copied. Then you can develop your own information state entanglement methods, such as defeating the opponent and directly depriving it, and grabbing the card yourself; for example, through long-term contact and research on serums, viruses, items, etc., Slowly analyzing and generating cards; for example, asking other people for advice and learning, directly creating cards, etc. In addition, it is better to use the coverage gradient mode instead of zeroing and reloading when switching armors, so that local transformation settings can be introduced, which will make it a self-contained system and appear more realistic, more combat effective and adaptable to combat. How exciting the writing can be depends on how big the author's imagination is. Of course, it will easily collapse if you can't control it. If you write it well, you will feel very happy.

The combination of decade and Orb, after all, they are knights of the same level, so I drew this picture with decade as the main theme. In order to increase the sense of the picture, let's just look at it Mainly because the colors around me are only red, black, and blue pens, so I painted the eyes in red, thinking that they were Yu Sora's red eyes

No, why do so many people think that the golden spirit does not exist if it is not expressed 😅 And the golden spirit does not mean that it is a saint. JO Taro called his mother an old woman, but he still has the golden spirit. The spirit is inner, how can it be determined from the surface?

1. Without pictures and without truth, it is difficult to imagine the scene after transformation. This is why Kamen Rider fans are mainly based on the original knight, because there are pictures 2. The inequity with Iron Man, first of all, free prostitution cards, establishing a company and researching belt cards, plus treatment, do not seem to be equal. It is not an emphasis on benefits, but I am not familiar with Iron Man. The sudden contact and then handing over the belt for research is very abrupt, and it is easy for people to think that it is a licking of dogs, even if the belt is It may be black box technology, and nothing can be researched. At least this plot should be smoother 3. The protagonist is set up too quickly, and he starts out as a character who wants to save others. Too much emphasis on justice will feel fake 4. When I first saw SHIELD, all American comics are inseparable from SHIELD. With a family, it is easy to become a super tight-fitting team controlled by SHIELD. I watch too many similar ones too often

Ever since I saw the Diga Divine Light Rod being snatched away when I was a child, I have not been interested in the ability of external equipment. This kind of novel always feels unreliable. Although I know that the author cannot write about the transformation being interrupted or being robbed, I still don't like this kind of ability to borrow external power, although it is very handsome!

Ordinarily, writing a fanfic is not all about making up for everyone's regrets. Ordinarily, being the protagonist is not the focus of everyone's eyes. Ordinarily, writing a protagonist should not have a Marvel harem. If you want to write a supporting role, there are not a lot of them in the original novel. I really don't know what the protagonist is going to do?

This is the Lord of God!

Although this book is still very popular, I still posted a post to collect readers' ideas. The format is just like in the introduction, two characters fuse their powers and briefly explain the function of this form. Creatures in games, animations, movies, and novels can be used, and are not limited to humans. However, there must be a match of strength between the two parties. If you are interested, you can also describe the specific appearance of the form. Finally, I would like to thank all readers for your contributions~

At first, I didn't catch a cold after reading the title of the book. Then I clicked in and read the introduction. Emmm, it was okay. After reading it, I felt that this book was pretty good and suited my taste. Finally, cheers to the author.

I'm a little worried about the final villain of this book. Thanos is almost killed. Who is the final boss? It feels like the 760,000 words are almost finished, and there is still the question of the final form. Since we plan to imitate Shiwang's decadent table and be able to extrapolate, then do we plan on the final form to be like the ancestors and ancestors of Chonghuang table? I saw that the author should have read What If before. Do you plan to open a multiverse later?

Talking about Little Spider's latest armor, whether the spider spear behind him might be plagiarized, and whether the third son of the Tang family can win the lawsuit, I have always been puzzled by this question. 🐶🐶🐶

You have to repay the borrowed power. Be careful if your juniors borrow your power and don't return it.

laughing to death

Changing the name to Marvel Debt King will make it easier to attract people and make them more down-to-earth.

Let's make do with it, the form of courage I just drew (I know I'm bad, don't criticize me, it's just because you're awesome, and everything you say is right) Author, if it doesn't work, please delete it yourself

I was persuaded to quit at the beginning, but the protagonist was about to die because of a cat. I am afraid that the protagonist is not a staff maker.

I went to S. H. I. E. L. D. As an ordinary person and accepted it... As a Hydra dead person? I will use these poisonous points as a filter. This place is really too retarded.

I don't understand why it's called Light Knight Since it's a combination of Imperial Knight and Orb It's better to call it Dio Dio How nice it sounds.

I just saw some fifty suggestions and made some suggestions 1. The setting of the protagonist whoringing cards is very interesting, but for some villains who are not very expressive and have no special features, there is no need to take cards (or there will be a fully integrated mechanism in the later stage, or they are all useful) 2. Following the previous point, there are only two cards drawn except for the beginning. After all, the plot unfolds. In fact, what everyone likes to see is the fusion of different powers from different worlds. For example, the combination of similar characters from different worlds such as Iron Man and Genos (metaphor), or the interesting combination of different characters from the outer world or Marvel 3. If possible, we should make more The appearance of the fusion form, otherwise we should make more analogies when writing. There is a ripple form that I imagine is like Wang Xiaoming's head. Steaming Blood and changing the color and pattern🙂 4. The last thing is the combination of cards. It seems that there are no specific rules. In fact, there can be a corresponding best that looks like a rabbit. Much That kind or some of them can be universalcombinations like Venom or Infinity Stones (remember that the original stones like the Soul Stone have a will and can be used for whoring~) There are not many knights writing nowadays, and they are a bit creative. There are even fewer of them. DC's Knights can be read, but not many people in China know much about DC. Everyone likes the Marvel series. After all, the movies are commercial enough, but the creativity of that book is actually not as novel and interesting as yours. So I hope the author will work hard, and I hope the book will get better and better.

There are too many bugs, let's just talk about the timeline. Spider-Man's timeline is forcibly linked to Iron Man's, and it's very messy. Then there is the protagonist's attitude towards SHIELD. He was very cooperative at first, but his attitude suddenly changed after he gained some strength. There are also fragments of the Destroyer. Do you really think you can just cut them off? Do you really not take Odin seriously? The most important thing is that the protagonist's work style is extremely contradictory. He runs a company and engages in a heroic career, and he is also the kind of street hero who has to take care of everything. He also has to go to school?

I just saw the charge. Cheers for the author. The three views and the story are all very interesting and positive. If possible, I suggest you change the title of the book. To be honest, if it weren't for the book shortage, I would not have clicked on this novel that I have collected for a long time. Delayed by the title of the book [doge]

The book is indeed quite interesting, but the name feels a bit like a novice novel. It is another type of book that is delayed by the name.

Doctor Octopus

The combination of Ming (Wang Xiaoming) Kai (Oub·Hongkai)

This book would have been better if the author had paid someone to draw the shapes. It would have been too laborious to just rely on imagination.

Come on, the author, the writing is very interesting. Both the setting and the characters are very good, but it would be better if there could be more content about Kamen Rider and Ultraman (personal opinion, you can ignore it). After all, many of the original tokusatsu characters are also very popular, but they are a little afraid that their combat power will collapse. After all, Marvel's own characters will not be challenged by anyone.

I feel like many people think that Kamen Rider and Ultraman don't kill people, but do they kill less? ? There are a lot of people who are obscene about Kamen Rider and Ultraman, just like the Holy Mother, and everyone can forgive them.

Fourth

When will you come back?

Well, it's great, but I don't like it.