I Might Be a Villain

The plot of the new Three Kingdoms is a bit of a waste of time. They've already got Yuwen Tuo; wouldn't a high-fantasy martial arts version of the Three Kingdoms be better?

The latest dungeon is a bit inexplicable, like a game with a touch of mystery, it's not very engaging.

1️⃣"From this day forward, I will stand in the heavens." —Aizen Sousuke This is a famous scene from the Japanese shonen manga "Bleach," where the villain Aizen Sousuke makes his announcement when he betrays Soul Society. 2️⃣ "And you, my friend, you are the real hero." ——The People of the Motherland From the American TV series "The Boys".

There's no need to always focus on anime. You could also try villainous protagonists from the last decade, like Lü Yang or Gu Yue Fang Yuan.

You initially said you wanted to rule the world, but now it's changed to ruling America. Are you afraid of writing about that indescribable place? The author no longer has the courage of his previous book, where the mission in Jackie Chan Adventures was to destroy the world, but wasn't it destroyed anyway? If you're afraid of being banned, you can just gloss over that part and go straight to the final world domination in the sketch; otherwise, it's just too awkward.

Having read up to the point where I've abandoned the Bleach volume, I finally understand why this book flopped. Many times, it feels like a huge gap is missing; the context is completely disconnected. It's like in Kung Fu Hustle where the second-in-command is killed – he's talking one minute and then suddenly he's all lying on the ground the next, leaving the reader confused.

This latest one doesn't look like Aizen at all.

The character roles are so confusing! What is the protagonist even doing? Is he possessed by a ghost, or is his true nature being revealed – just a ruthless scoundrel? This setup is unbearable! The protagonist, caught between progress and regression, chooses the path of killing everyone!

The initial version of "The Immortal" was quite good and garnered a decent following, with nearly 1000 discussion posts. Then they shifted to original content, and now they've finally settled down. You still need to polish it, author.

Why did the Boys world leave the talisman to Homelander? It's yet another world that aids the enemy.