The Huangdan Immortal Clan

It's quite strange. I just went to catch the demon cultivator and didn't build the foundation. Even if I sent the young people to practice Qi, they basically sent the old people to die. They deserved to be exterminated. This kind of family should be gone.

I thought it was "Who asked him to become an immortal?" Where's the Bean Emperor in "?"

Wasn't there a woman in the previous book?

It's quite interesting. The character design of Huang Doudou is also very good. Liang Cao Liang Cao

🎭 Character: Average 🎬 Plot: Very average ✒️Writing: Childish

The main character's name is too ugly, he might as well be called Huang Dou

I personally think that the title of the book and the name of the family can be considered again. It is not for the mission. I would not have the urge to read it just by looking at the name. There is also an introduction. Hahaha, the plot is currently laid out. It is just to use the power to let the family go to exterminate the demons. There is no attractive hook. The setting and plot of "turning waste pills into treasures" are mostly not new. I hope the author will gradually get better in the future, and the more he writes, the better!

How to write a family story without having children?

If you don't write about women, don't write about women. Why do you have to write it in the introduction? It will show that you care about this kind of thing. Is it really necessary to care? In many novels, women are just added to the story, don't make it seem like women are more important. As long as you write well, you won't care about this kind of thing, right?

It's the slow-burning type that I like. It has golden fingers, but it's not too unnatural; the world setting is realistic, righteousness does not necessarily mean good, villains are not necessarily perverted, and the family is not harmonious. All interests come first. Let's see how the author conceals his development.