Traveling Through the Black Robe, I Work Under the Hands of My Motherland

Oi, write it out for me like a sow

Others are becoming Azu and surpassing Azu. It would be better for you to work for Azu. Do you have more lives or more hair?

Can't speak without 'oh'? ? ?

Hmm, let's take a look at Die's reference.

Not bad, keep up the hard work 😜

There are some bugs. For example, when I watched it, I was confused as to why it didn't come when I was 99% loyal, and why it didn't come when I was 100% loyal. Who knows how big the result is? It actually exceeded 100%. The author didn't write it. Also, the protagonist was touched in his residence, which means that the protagonist was exposed. Why did he dare not run away? Go to work? There is no explanation. Or maybe the protagonist just upgraded his Cyclops in the company car? He also left traces. Are you not afraid that the company will see it and get suspicious? Or is the protagonist using super powers in the company not afraid of being discovered by the people of the motherland? After all, the people of the motherland can see things through clairvoyance and have super hearing. These are all risks. Also, the protagonist's ending has not been successful, which means he went directly to Butcher's place because of the risk. It feels a bit confusing. Of course, the overall performance is okay and deserves praise, but there are a lot of bugs.

How to say it? The protagonist's abilities and personality are inconsistent, and the protagonist's abilities and the plot feel disconnected, as if they are not on the same channel, and as mentioned before, if you slowly get to know the character and become stronger, In the early stage, the protagonist's character creation and personality are not good, and the character creation and personality are not good, which is a bit inconsistent. At least it's okay if you are weak for a few minutes. You don't have anything. Pay attention to it. Pay attention to the characters and don't be OOC. Starlight is just a little bit. The author should correct these problems. Don't change it in words but not in action. This work is not a masterpiece. Come on, write it well (ง•̀_•́)ง

Brothers, the author just prefers the black-robed picket team. This is the first time I signed a contract to write a book. There must be something bad in the writing. If you reasonably raise it, the author will correct it. However, if you directly post comments with bad attitudes and personal attacks, report them first and then ban them. Although there is freedom of speech on the Internet, there are limits.

Several brothers expressed that they were a little aggrieved. I changed it when I woke up this morning, and it should be less aggrieved.

Dr. G: Incompetent, the leader of the G-Men He has five superpowers, the strongest of which is as powerful as Locomotive, but slightly weaker than Maeve

Is this a clone style or something like that? After all, I think the system has a Servant column. If so, I will withdraw in advance.

I feel like there is a bug. Isn't Ellie a super human? Why can't I be with her all the time and draw? They happen to have a good relationship.