A Native of My Country, a Marvel Superstar

Is there a possibility that we just want to watch Azu kill with blood flowing like a river┐('~`;)┌ Is it because the young readers lack your third-rate slut? It's not good to watch, and I don't like to watch it. I just want to see Zu Bao smash the head of the opposite dog breed, so it's worth your visit! , Kill more

The people of the motherland written in it are still too weak. It only takes 2.3 Seconds for the people of the motherland to fly from the ground to space, and then from space to the ground. What does this mean? Such a level of physical fitness! Such speed! You don't believe me when I say it. Go check AI and see what this instantaneous speed means?

Please pay attention to the character design of Luo Dan. He does not mean that he will hate others if he is rejected. He is just a very controlling, calm and rational Lao Yinbi. And with Captain Marvel as his trump card, the protagonist cannot be targeted by Luo Dan without any problem.

The plot is there, but the writing is a little off. The author still needs practice in converting his imagination into words. The other is logic and rationality, and the starting point requirements may be higher. Of course, there is no need to be too obedient, especially ordinary users who are crying out for blood.

To be honest, going to DC is a complete failure. Does the author want to look at the title of his book? Originally, Marvel didn't even understand it and went to DC to start from scratch.

It's okay, I hope it's not a hodgepodge. Many people who write about Marvel like to add some DC characters, which makes it look very confusing. Speed ​​up the progress, don't keep writing about interviews, although it is to enrich the character, but the plot of the interview seems so boring, mainly because the new book has few chapters, and only a few chapters are updated every day. There is no climax at all, and there is no desire to follow it. Directly recruit superhumans from all over the world through the company. In addition to the 7-man team, you can also create a regional hero similar to Spider-Man to protect a place.

What are you doing with so many women? This was a routine from 10 years ago. This is not Marvel at all.

The protagonist has the abilities of the people of the motherland, and his character is also getting closer to the people of the motherland. It is very interesting, especially when the black robe is unfinished. However, there is a shortcoming that has to be pointed out. There are too many typos and sentence breaks. If you have more words, it is a small problem, but you don't have more.

Everything else is fine, but the name Li Guoguo is too dramatic And it's a name that basically no character knows except the readers

This picture appears, how much is Chaoying worth hahahahahaha

Write quickly, how can you sleep at your age?

Bean bags are mentally retarded, bean bags are completely fake.

Just like the aliens, this race can fly at millions of times the speed of light. The results of my body are very abstract. The top ones can fly at hundreds of millions of times the speed of light. Oh my God! He can fly at more than 100 million times the speed of light, can't he punch at more than 100 million times the speed of light?

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The writing is good, just be a normal person. You can be perverted, but don't act perverted, and act like a native of the motherland. I can only say that it is an early stage, and the later period will not be long. Various behaviors will lead to OOC. Once OOC, some people will say that you are not a native of the motherland. I can only say whether you are writing about a native of the motherland or a person with the strength of the motherland. It's good to design him from the beginning as a normal person with the strength of the motherland.

Identification shows that Lao Deng has been reincarnated for more than two times.

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Um? The latest chapter is because Sesu was arrested?

It can be considered a phased end, and what I wrote before is still acceptable. Color is good stuff and makes my 2D rotation. 😋

It feels no different from Superman

I see Catwoman in the profile but not in the character column. Has she not appeared yet?

As we get to the back, there are often contradictions in various contexts, and at first glance, it looks like it was written by AI.

It's somewhat similar to another one I've read, but it's a little worse than that one. This one is still slowly eating beef, and it's not exciting enough.

Homelander 2 can be shot like this. The Death of Homelander comes with Lex Luthor who believes that the fate of mankind should be left to humans themselves, instead of being guarded by a god like porcelain in the palm of his hand. Later, Homelander will take advantage of the situation and fake his death in other universes.

It's understandable that there are a lot of typos and sentences, but can't they be corrected?

The finale of 137 is over. When will it come back? When will you continue watching?

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There are too few updates. It took me a long time to finish it in half an hour.