I Became a Swordsman in Konoha

As for the performance in the first chapter... First, Hawkeye's apprentice, after fifteen years of swordsmanship training, ran to Konoha and panicked. Even with the Supreme Grade Sword, he was still flustered and unaware of his own strength. The world of One Piece isn't a peaceful world. Becoming the apprentice of the future greatest swordsman with such a terrible mentality is unacceptable.

🤫To put it bluntly, they all use the same old rhetoric: "We can go straight to xx without prior notice, without needing anyone to accompany us, etc."; Their actions are all done in a "three steps at a time" manner, like students copying the same essay material. These days, there are too few young authors whose writing skills improve with each passing year. Let's take another look at the new book charts.

If you're writing Naruto, and the protagonist doesn't even have chakra, what's the point?

If the power systems are not integrated, it will offend fans from both sides.

😒The one who committed suicide, wasn't it because his thinking was too extreme? Danzo and the Third Hokage set him up and killed him. If they hadn't killed someone with the samurai spirit like Hatake, he would have become the Fourth Hokage, wouldn't he have been kneeling and licking the boots of the Daimyo like a dog? Kakashi's experience in the Anbu changed his thinking, and later the official story added the Sixth Hokage to him. 😭

It feels like you've spouted some overly political and inflammatory language, but isn't this supposed to be a swordsman? Your writing isn't quite right.

I don't know why, but after watching it, it felt like I didn't watch it at all...

As soon as I saw the protagonist's name, I knew this book was doomed to fail.

The swordsmen in One Piece are quite weak; they basically just pose as a boss and unleash a charged attack. Especially Zoro the Three-Swordsman, a pure mage who attacks, chants a poem, strikes, and then disappears after a brief animation.

If Chapter 1 remains unchanged and half the population doesn't leave, it's considered that everyone has high poison resistance.