I Became a Swordsman in Konoha

As far as the performance of the first chapter is concerned. One, Hawkeye's apprentice, who has been learning swordsmanship for fifteen years, ran to Konoha and was very panicked. Even with the supreme sword, he was very panicked and didn't know his own strength. The world of pirates is not a peaceful world. Being the apprentice of the future greatest swordsman has a bad mentality. If you have only been learning swordsmanship for fifteen months, it makes sense. This kind of reaction after fifteen years is terrible. It feels like Hawkeye has been protecting you like a baby and doesn't know your specific strength. In other words, for fifteen years, you have been safe in the pirate world. You have lived in the pirate world for fifteen years and have never used a knife. It feels like you have never been killed. Two, system rewards, Luffy's bloodline? What's the use? It's not a Devil Fruit, and it doesn't have Garp or Dragon backing it up. What's so special about Luffy's bloodline? You might as well get a Kaido bloodline, which is from the ghost clan after all. A pirate native wants another pirate native. I don't see any difference in Luffy's physique. They are not both of human origin among pirates. Three-system arrangement, the Kingdom of Iron agrees with you, a samurai, to be a Konoha ninja? ? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! First of all, there is no example of a samurai becoming a ninja. Secondly, the control of the Iron Kingdom, or the army, is in the hands of the samurai group. There are no ninjas in the Iron Kingdom. Your behavior amounts to. The Raikage arranges for his own ninja to go to Konoha to become ninjas! ! ! ! Do you know what kind of behavior this is? Do you think it's reasonable? Samurai Mifune, the supreme leader of the Iron Country's army, arranged for his soldier protagonist to go to Konoha to become ninjas! A violent organization in one country arranges for its own people to serve in a violent organization in another country. The top leaders of the two national violence agencies are still very satisfied and harmonious. I'm going to die laughing! !

🤫 Let's get to the blunt point. They are all talking like this: "We can go straight to xx without saying hello, without accompanying anyone"; the action is "three steps and two steps", just like students copying the same set of composition materials. There are too few young authors who are improving their writing skills these days, so let's take a look at the new book list.

When writing about Naruto, the main character doesn't even have chakra. It's so gross.

If the power system is not integrated, fans on both sides will be offended.

😒 The one where Hatake committed suicide, was his idea too extreme? Danzo and the Third Generation killed him. If he didn't kill a Hatake with a samurai spirit and became the Fourth Hokage, he would not have seen the Daimyo kneel down and lick him like 🐶. Kakashi experienced ANBU to change his thoughts, and later the official added a Sixth Hokage to him 😭

I feel that I said some very red words in vain, but isn't this a swordsman? What you wrote is not quite right.

I don't know why, but I feel like I haven't watched it...

As soon as I saw the name of the protagonist, I knew this book was a done deal.

The swordsman of the pirates is quite weak, so when he hits someone, he just poses as a boss and charges up his blows. Especially Liu Suolong, a three-sword man who is a pure mage, beats people and recites poems, then makes a move and is gone.

Chapter 1 If you don't change and don't leave half of the people, everyone will have high poison resistance.