1978: A Young Writer Joins the Army

After reading it, it was quite well written. 1. Sincerity The author's point of view is correct and it is the biggest common denominator (don't like scar literature, patriotism, loyalty to love [Of course, there is a high probability that I have never been in love, or have very little experience. This is also criticized a lot. Many comments are saying that Zhu Lin is not good as a heroine. Maybe she is tired of aesthetics, now in the last century There are too many manuscripts written around the 1980s, regardless of single/multiple heroines, there are all Zhu Lin. Here you can give your favorite people around the 1980s, a shell, as the original heroine]), from some of the previous plots and some designs in the previous book, it can also be seen that the author should be the author's own background (a liberal arts college student, a native of Henan). It's very sincere and very upright. Most of the popular books can be said to be unconventional (creating genres) at the same time. This kind of writing can be regarded as following the trend. It's quite good to be written like this. That is, sincerity. It is already very good for those who write books now to be sincere. 2. The angle is relatively novel As mentioned above, this is a follow-up article. There are many similar works in the 1980s, but the author chose a military-themed article, which is considered a relatively new angle. This type of article has the largest The selling point of the book is a memory. Reading some of the stories that may have left an impression will give you a feeling of reminiscence. In other words, it can bring back a certain emotional experience when you first read the book, or a new emotional feeling after reading a story again after a while. The copied works are relatively novel compared to similar novels. This is the core selling point of this type of novel. This selling point is firmly established here. Then, that part of Hong Kong, generally, actually. I have read many books like this, and the most disgusting part is that in the mid-term, I will transfer to setting up a company in Hong Kong, engaging in the entertainment industry, etc. The author is okay in this part, but below average. Here is a suggestion. Since the starting point of this book is military-themed texts, what about a military-themed book, supplemented by a certain amount of positive energy at most, and a narrative that focuses on the main theme? The work on schizophrenia was really, really weird to watch. 3. The character is likeable The protagonist does not hold back anything, and lets it out on the spot when he is angry. The pace is also well controlled. The only thing is that the treatment and popularity of the writer after becoming famous are still a little too fast. There are no brainless villains in the supporting characters. In the early stage, the guy who lived next door, Bei Dao, etc., Was dealt with on the spot. In the middle stage, the Wesley, the sour, and the reporter were all dealt with very quickly. It was very good. These were all. 4. Not many shortcomings It can also be considered as an advantage, only some small bugs, Mainly because he became famous too quickly (upgraded too fast) There is no foreshadowing (explanation) for the protagonist's ability in Vietnam's self-defense counterattack, And some of the settings are so cliche (the protagonist is handsome, has a great figure, etc., Of course, it's harmless) Hong Kong must stop copying foreign works, just do military work, even if you copy Japanese pure love, love letters, White Valentine's Day, etc. Hong Kong people of this era have never tasted it. Furthermore, in an environment where everything is focused on money, innocent things are particularly precious and desirable (if you cannot understand, for example, in modern times, Paul Korchagin's spirit is difficult to admire) The core of literary works is to let people People have an emotional experience, whether it is deep thought, longing, excitement, admiration, etc., They can choose some works to copy based on this emotional experience. Of course, it is best to be able to be felt by modern readers, which is the greatest common denominator. The author has a pretty good grasp of it. Of course, I didn't say what kind of literature this novel is, and it's not even worthy of being written online yet, but the works in this novel are literature.

Oops, they are already in medical school, and the heroine is Zhu Lin again?

The plug-in is too high. As an entertainment worker, you can just write articles and make movies, and you can also participate in the counterattack against Vietnam. It's neither fish nor fowl.

Jiao Didi

The most disgusting thing about scar literature is that going to the countryside to work and live with farmers has become a trampling on them. What are the horse-mounted farmers? Aren't they humans? Are you the only human beings? These people should have been beaten to death in the first place

It felt pretty good at first, but as you write, it becomes more and more like the previous book. Apart from the protagonist of this book, is there any big difference between changing careers and the previous one? I have been looking for domestic novels and movies. I admit that those works are very good, but you can't keep blocking your own people. These works will appear without you, so what difference does it make with or without you? Why not adapt some foreign novels and movies and change the core to your own?

Recently, the Jia Pingwa incident really opened my eyes. There is also the matter of establishing an heir for a living person, which is also a wonder of the ages.

Are you writing a book for Zhu Lin again? It's over! The literary copycats in Qidian in the 1980s were all trying to realize Zhu Lin's dream?

Have you always written about war? Didn't you come here to see a literary hero?

It takes more than ten chapters to get into the theme of the writer, and the previous chapters are full of short-sightedness.

Remember, you are writing about our young soldiers, don't be biased towards urban love. Come on

Has the author strayed off topic in the past two days?

The instructor's portrayal is good, he can do ideological work and fight. Like Li Yannian played by Wang Lei.

I said why it looks so familiar. I feel like I've seen it before. The author of Yidiankai has written a book with a similar plot before. Good Guys. Can you change the name and re-sell it? 😅

The author is True Love Zhu Lin. The last book was the heroine Zhu Lin.

Why is the heroine Zhu Lin so popular?

I posted it after getting stuck and then said I would revise it the next day. People read it intermittently.

After fighting this battle, there is a song to come up with. Walking to Nanchang, carrying hope, we are the earliest armed force established by the party, and it happens to be the army. Holy shit, it is very suitable!

What's going on? I remember reading the content on 106. Why did I buy it again?

The protagonist appears, he is twenty-three years old. These guys who write chronicles are sick. This twenty-three year old, and the twenty-seven and twenty-eight-year-old ones. Do they not know what thirty years old represents?

No! Brother! You've already paid for both of the two things that have been blocked. If you haven't come yet, look at it. If you change it and reissue it, you still have to buy it again 😓

Why does the author keep repeating the same chapters these two days?

I subscribed to 185 chapters and re-uploaded the 185 chapters. Why am I being charged again?

After a walk, do you also want to have a walk? Come and have more tomorrow 🤓

Please give me more, too little

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It was so fun to fight in Vietnam, and it was so fun to scold Jin Yong 😁

It's very well written, don't be affected by it.

What was going on with air-to-ship missiles in China at that time? If there were any good ones, we could find a way to export them to Argentina in large quantities and sink the British fleet in 1982.

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