Shanghai Literary Master, 1980

Just copy the text, don't make it too high-minded! When writing this type of novel, you should try to cater to the tastes of most readers. Don't just write some very niche works, just to make a little complaint. Whether the author accepts it or not doesn't matter!

I just like this kind of books that are original or magically modified. Every day I watch a group of protagonists lining up to copy Wrangler, Wreath on the Mountain, Alive, Lurking, Zhu Lin, Gong Xue, and Shi Tiesheng as my little brother. It almost makes me sick.

Author, you write about the protagonist who is researching this thesis at Fudan University. What's the point? The readers don't understand it, and the key point is uncomfortable. What readers want to see is how the protagonist makes money and publishes awesome works. How to improve your life, how to pick up girls. Who cares about your research on this or that? Boring.

You don't want to live in the world, policies began to be relaxed in the 1980s, don't you consider buying a house? When buying a courtyard house in Beijing or a villa in Shanghai, it doesn't have to be too big. Let's not talk about future appreciation. It's meaningless if it's too far away. At least you can live comfortably, right? You're already in love, don't you think about this at all? Doesn't the author feel fake or pretentious? Normal people would consider basic necessities, food, clothing, housing and transportation even in the extraordinary world. The protagonist doesn't have any such thoughts and doesn't look like a human being. It feels very fake.

Li Xiaolin was born in 1945. She is also the editor-in-chief of "Harvest" and is 16 years older than the protagonist. Is it appropriate for the protagonist to call her Sister Xiaolin?

Tao

The writing is very good. It is eye-catching from the beginning in Shanghai. It is not difficult to maintain the current level of high-quality writing.

In fact, the first chapter is well written, but the entry point is not good. It is boring if you choose to write a literary review. How can readers have any expectations for a review? In addition, it is important to focus on the plot. One or two mentions of academic things are enough. If you talk about it, readers will not bother to read it. What is the use of talking so much? You can wait for the plot to unfold and then pay attention to these details instead of doing it at the beginning.

Speaking of Huhe literary giants, I think of the 300,000-strong army. I chose to surrender and lose half of it. Xu Laosan. The key is that his surname is Xu. The natives have nothing to say hahahaha

After all, it's not Beijing. Peking University and Shanghai are very good, but why is it Tao Huimin, who is riding a horse? Is this subject really poorly written?