Film and Television World: Dimensionality Reduction Attack at the Beginning

Overall, the writing is great. I was pleasantly surprised by the thoughts on values ​​and the understanding of "volume" in the article. But at the end, I broke away from the cliché of the daughter-in-law, but I was not upset or regretful. Instead, I felt that it had a literary beauty and the writing was really strong. But there are also shortcomings. Some places actually look a bit unpleasant. I know that the system setting requires emotional value. But the protagonist's behavior style is the kind that is not understood by others. Obviously, what he does is relatively just and fair, but the people around him are assimilated by the environment. Then the protagonist lets the characters around him follow the original plot, while rushing to criticize people. Forcibly helping, not being understood, and then outputting opinions, From Na Wei to Sister, they all ignore the feelings of others and only focus on harvesting emotional values ​​for themselves. The feeling of not being understood is very strong The protagonist still has to explain, and once he explains The other party actually didn't listen very well, so I felt a little annoyed. I know this is a normal portrayal of real life, or a portrayal needs, but after all, it is an online text, too template-based, and the reading experience is not very good So in the supporting role In terms of characterization, it is recommended that the author not always portray in the direction of earnest advice, but can be a little new, because the reader's perspective follows the protagonist, and our supporting characters have too many emotional conflicts with the protagonist, and the reading experience is easily affected

Luo Zijun in the first half of my life and Chiang's mother in the golden years were both people who did nothing and only cared about their own exquisite pleasure. They both had an accomplice, Tang Jing and Dai Qian, both played by Yuan Quan. Is there something seriously wrong with this woman's brain? Chen Junsheng is acting like a bully. His business trip record shows that he is already overwhelmed. His mental derailment probably also shows that his family has long been unable to provide warmth and respect. He is comparable to a fool! Is it different for Father Jiang? Look at the expenses of the Jiang family. Jiang Nansun's haircut costs 2,000, and his violin worth 200,000 is destroyed at the drop of a hat. Mrs. Jiang prepares exquisite bird's nests every day and serves more than a dozen dishes for every meal. Jiang's mother only dances and plays mahjong every day, and buys a lot of jewelry every year, not counting clothes and beauty. It seems that Father Jiang owes 30 million yuan? After selling the house for 10 million, the family didn't have much money left when Jiang's father was trading in the stock market. According to the Jiang family's consumption, Jiang's father would not be able to survive for more than three to five years if he did not lose money. Then Father Jiang, the second generation ancestor, was not forced to make money, but simply failed. Then look at Jiang's father. He still paid Jiang Nansun to learn violin and wanted to marry a rich man. Is it wrong? Can Zhang Anren afford it? When Jiang Nansun met the rich second generation, he took the initiative to get involved. Mrs. Jiang, Mother Jiang, and Nansun Jiang were all squandering and willful. Mrs. Jiang has a rich family, but there are two left. One is unhappy even though she spends money, and Mrs. Jiang has no dignity and freedom. One doesn't love money, spends grandma's money, and complains that grandma favors sons over daughters. The same thing between the two dramas is that I spend your money and still look down on you!

"The Rose" is really well written. What he said is consistent with what I have observed and summarized over a long period of time. It is true. It requires a certain degree of detachment from the general cognition of society and rational thinking to understand and discover. I also want to tell the author that you have no shortage of sympathetic supporters. Why did you write the rose chapter so short? ! You jump five years and it's the finale! Write more!

Did it say 'human world' at the end? It would be even better to torture the Zhou family like the Zhengyang family did

Your audience basically doesn't watch TV series, let alone ancient puppets and fairy tales.

I couldn't read even one chapter of the last book, and I basically concluded that it was the inevitable result. Don't you know what your basic base is? They are all LSPs, so they focus on urban or period film and television dramas, which are sarcastic, and they focus on good girls and do not let bad girls go to waste. They do not let go of female characters as long as they are good-looking. This is the basis for your success ahead.

The writing style is quite good, and the plot is smooth, but it has a strong didactic flavor. It not only teaches the characters in the book, but also often instills plots in the readers. I hope there is less didactic content.

Hit card hard

Return to the city, you deserve this money

I still like sadomasochism, that is, the heroine falls in love with the hero in various ways and can't help herself. The story of Rose has this flavor. The best of us, the beauty of our heroine feels a bit unbearable. I hope to increase my efforts to fall in love with the hero and continue to have children 🤐

The smell of this book is a bit weird and not to my liking

I really like the way Mario you wrote the protagonist fights against the sky, the ground, and the air. It's only right that he's so angry. Most of us readers have some negative emotions in order to live and work. After reading your novel, I feel released. It's well written. Keep up the good work. I'll give you a monthly pass.

It's such a sense of accomplishment

Why are you still using this aggressive style of writing now?

Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

Without divorce, the income from the studio should be the joint property of the couple, right?

Omniscient plug-in, forcibly flashing into the plot, is a bit of a drama.

I don't understand. If you don't improve yourself day by day, you have to do things randomly. If you don't pursue an official career, you should resign early, and then use the abilities given by the golden finger to make money. If you pursue an official career and do some magic operations that affect your future, there will be no one else.

I like reading Lao Ma's books, but Lao Ma's books don't follow normal routines. His brain circuit is unexpected, and his criticism of people is reasonable and well-founded. If I can't hold it in for a long time, I can't speak or refute people 🤭

I was disgusted and gave in. In the end, I forced myself to make dumplings.

Get more clothes. I don't watch soul wear. I just jump to watch it.

Dwelling Bar, a breakout TV series, is quite popular on a certain channel. Or parental love.

I remember there was a drama called (Struggle). It was not very interesting 🤫, but it was also a drama that shattered the world of people 😄

The protagonist helps him escape from the sea of ​​suffering, improves his spiritual vision, and teaches by words and deeds By the time the plot is over, he should have grown into President Ying.

Are there any books similar to Mario? If you don't accept it, just do that, quarrel with the sky and the earth, ask for the same type, there is no limit on the theme website, ask the experienced driver to point out

My human fireworks!

Watch more TV series with outrageous views and get slapped in the face

Lao Ma is different in his comfort zone, he looks good

Flowers with Thousand Bones, Three Lives and Three Lives, Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms, Fragrant Honey, you know, you can write about it!

In the next world, you can write a Hong Kong movie "News Queen" to rectify the workplace. This should be quite interesting.