Planning Ahead in Hong Kong

This book is difficult to read; it's disjointed and doesn't flow well. I feel like it's not even as good as one written by AI!

Damn it, they're padding the word count here. A paper should have 20 chapters.

It's not very well written; it feels like chatting about everyday things, like writing a diary.

Isn't this supposed to be a business article? Why is there so much history?

Anyone can write books now; they're full of typos and wild fantasies.

Why are there so many asterisks? It's making it so hard to read, I really can't stand it.

The biggest flaw of this novel is its disjointed writing style, which feels like a monotonous account. The protagonist is also unlikable, lacking distinct character traits. The plot is poorly managed and drags on. Its only redeeming quality is its relatable and down-to-earth message.

It gets more and more verbose towards the end. Can you please cut down on all those monologues?

This book is full of academic papers, it's hilarious! I'm outta here.