Yin Yang Mirror

I feel that the modern chapter is more interesting to write and looks better than the ancient one, so the author must not compress the plot of the modern chapter like before. Do it at your own pace. Like 👍🏻

Write more about the real world

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The pace is too fast, aesthetic fatigue 🙂 People in the two worlds are thinking about killing the protagonist all the time 🙂. Whenever the protagonist breaks through the existing ceiling of combat power and wants to practice, a new ceiling will be set to kill him. The protagonist has become a prodigy in just a few months. Logically speaking, the cultivation speed is very fast, why can his subordinates keep up with the hanging wall? The heroine is 18 years old and has not even reached the True Qi realm, but she has followed the protagonist for several months to inexplicably break through the True Qi. She is really strong and true. This is a bit embarrassing. Don't talk about luck acceleration. The Red Lotus Rebellion has been in rebellion for thousands of years. According to the acceleration method of the protagonist, her real martial arts is not as good as a dog, let alone the court. With luck acceleration, isn't the court the biggest winner? Where did the good fortune they enjoyed go?

This book is very well written so far. The protagonist is both kind and sharp. He is neither a bad guy nor a hypocrite. He does not have the wretched greed of people who travel through time nowadays. The logic and cause of life and martial arts are clearly sorted out. It is a great read. The author's writing is very good, and the fighting is especially good. Although it is difficult for the male and female protagonists to encounter anything good, they can just justify it. After all, in modern society, we cannot expect people to be kind. What cannot be broken is actually the rhythm and the overall rationality. I see that there is no big problem now. In the future, the writing will cover a wider area, there will be more connection lines, and it will still be two worlds. I hope the author will spend more time setting the outline and framework so that the quality can be maintained in the future! In addition, given the tone of the book, I suggest that the characters may be group portraits, but the emotional scenes may as well be more focused and rely on plot to win. In short, this is a rare and good book that is expected to become a classic, and I look forward to more exciting follow-ups.

Well, there are many struggles in other worlds, and there are conspiracies in this world. Events come one after another, and the time span is short. It feels a bit too urgent. The time can be longer.

I just want to ask why the mirror is not reunited. How many chapters have there been about various accidents? The mirror fragments are still scattered around. Doesn't he care about the protagonist's golden finger?

At a time when human beings are facing life and death, they all want to deal with it by transforming people. Spread martial arts, replace the plan of transforming people, gain status and benefits for yourself, and gain support from the upper class. As for fearing that what you preach is inhumane, this is a complete joke. How can others practice better than pig's feet? After all, he has a world and double the time to practice martial arts. If it is passed to a bad person, there will be good people to deal with it, and there will be pig's feet to cover it up. Moreover, human beings still have external enemies, which is beyond our comprehension, completely beyond our comprehension. According to this logic, the subject of chemistry should be left alone. Everyone who studies chemistry knows how to prepare drugs and do it💣

It's too urgent. The enemies come one after another without a break. It's so tiring.

There are more and more messy things. Now there are people who pop up from other worlds. What about the Palace of Reincarnation? Isn't this the main god? There used to be someone who could travel to other worlds as a disciple of the Suppressing Demon Sect. He is really big-hearted. Can you control it?

Come on, I'm not worried about you in terms of fighting scenes, but I hope you can make some progress in your love scenes and not be a stud, but you must not be impotent or sexually incompetent.

The author's writing of Chinese martial arts is first-rate. I hope the force value will not be too high The force value is almost at the level of the Fengyun TV series. If it is higher, it will collapse again.

The two worlds are too tight, you'll get tired of watching them

The title of the book was really not changed well. The poor performance is not a problem with the title. The author is very good at writing fighting scenes, but he can't keep fighting, otherwise he will get tired of the book.

Just remember, the live broadcast destroys the underground underworld industry, you decide whether to watch it or not

Yu'er finally has ten thousand orders for his works. I have been watching Yi Jian Ping Tian Xia before, and I am also watching Yan Wu Ling. Personal evaluation: The author's advantage is that the description of martial arts and fighting is really online, and the writing style is concise and touching. The shortcomings are not so much in the realm setting and background setting. It is not enough, not very attractive, the plot direction and the psychology of the protagonist are a bit too complex, and it is easy to end the story in the later stage. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better works (and don't worry about the title of the book, just choose one and settle on it 😵)

Your introduction feels like a dream back to ancient times.

Before Chapter 150, the rhythm was very strong, and the fairy grass was good. Later, Long Aotian's aura was too strong, and it supported Chapter 100 and I couldn't catch up. Come on, the author, and look forward to more works.

Let me tell you why I enjoyed watching it: it upgrades quickly, kills decisively, and the theme is good. Sometimes I can't stand it: Author, why are you writing the script here?

Isn't it a bit too long to write about modern times? Go back to another world and practice quickly. Don't do something that is not there. You are powerful. Modern ones are nothing. You can't distinguish priorities.

1. It's very deliberate and unreasonable to travel through time with only your underwear on. It's just too baffling to just be naked. 2. The story of double-crossing emphasizes that both worlds have their own strengths, but when I read it now, I feel that the main world is useless. The main world's population advantage, the "mass belief", is a big killer. I feel that the author has pointed it out, but the protagonist has not given it due attention. 3. The rhythm of the main world is a bit strange and not as comfortable as the other world.

It's so invincible. The whole novel is just about killing monsters and pretending to be cool, and there's not much success in picking up girls. That's what Toad's novels used to be like. Almost half of a chapter is spent describing how awesome the protagonist's skills are, but the actual plot doesn't advance much.

I hope to open a new book as soon as possible and look forward to it

It's reached the point where I can't catch up anymore. I didn't expect that the author would finish it half a month later, so I'll book the last dozen chapters to have a beginning and an end.

It's pretty good-looking, but it's really a brain hemorrhage if I don't look for a mirror.

This author has some good books. I just discovered this author

Brother, there are very few books that I enjoy reading these days. Your book is well written.

Do you still expect the protagonist to walk into the sea of ​​stars?

I saw Chapter 600 and was ready to raise it, why did it end suddenly?

Too little, too little,