Republic of China: Actor? Please Call Me Martial Arts Master!

After reading twenty-two or twenty-three, what should I say? If you don't know how to write about family relationships, don't write more. If you don't know how to advance the plot, don't push it. To attract an enemy by being stupid and stubborn, and then fight back through Lu Laogen's "forbearance" and Lu Cheng's "unbearability" to vent his anger (for details, you can read the paragraphs written by everyone), what is highlighted is not the character image, but the author's shallow writing skills; what is portrayed is not the character's intelligence and force, but the reader is treated like a fool.

A story about a protagonist in the arena of the Republic of China, who used drama to build people and use martial arts to clear the way. It is a warm-blooded and smooth novel. The protagonist still insists on his own character and attitude under the background of the Republic of China, and has the bearing of a great master. At the same time, the descriptions of the opera repertoire in the book are deeply rooted in people's hearts and full of passion; the military breakthroughs and fighting scenes are also very artistic and powerful. With singing and martial arts training as the main themes, the daily plot and atmosphere under the Republic of China are also well arranged, and the narrative rhythm is smooth.

Actors can't save the world. You have a few teachers who forcefully sensationalize and write too bluntly. Change society if you really have the ability, instead of sensationalizing in a drama. In that era, it was not the martial arts master who killed a few people who could change it. It was the general trend of the world. If there was no Zhang San, there would still be Li San. To truly save the country, you must have a gun, control the army, then govern a place, let the people live a good life, and finally save the world step by step. Acting can be performed privately in a private theater, and subordinate soldiers can watch and gain abilities. Unless one's personal strength reaches the level of gods and demons, then acting is just acting, just for oneself, and don't be sensational at all times, as if you are a savior. The setting of this book in a peaceful era is okay. In troubled times, if you have the ability, you can truly practice salvation instead of sensationalizing it in a drama. Only let people see the false emptiness!

We have hundreds of large and small artillery pieces, 500 light and heavy machine guns, and 20,000 firearms of all kinds. I ask you! What kind of teacher are you?

The author's knowledge of the routines from 20 years ago is too low, and what he writes makes people look like utopia, which is always wishful thinking.

Not to mention anything else, it has been mentioned in the comments, and the timetable issue is not trivial. Even though a day has not passed yet, the surrounding people are talking as if the matter has been fermenting for several months. The bystanders know the plot clearly. Why write a novel if you can't handle the timeline well? After writing this article for a long time, I am sure that all kinds of nonsense will be wrong.

After reading about 30 chapters, the plot progression is very good, not abrupt and natural, but unfortunately the way things are handled is too awkward, and the multiple-choice questions are not done well. In troubled times, you kill decisively, and in prosperous times, you rewrite the rules. It is very unreasonable to write the rules of peace in troubled times. The male protagonist is also a big problem. He was not very old when he traveled to the past. When he arrived there, he was like an old man, full of truth. The key is that all your own strength comes from the system. The male protagonist you wrote seems to be very qualified but is actually very cheap. It is very similar to a villain pretending to be an expert. Do you understand? And the most contradictory thing is that once your acting skills are improved, you can say that you have enlightened yourself. Martial arts are just made out of nothing, and you become a master out of nowhere. No one cares where the martial arts secrets come from or how you suddenly become stronger. Other people in the book naturally accept that the protagonist becomes a master overnight. It's a funny fact. If my brother feels sluggish the next day, I'll ask him if he played too much at night. The protagonist becomes horny and energetic overnight and his parents don't ask anything. Is the relationship between the original protagonist and his parents so unfamiliar~~ Overall, I can watch it, but there are many questions.

What makes people speechless is the part about saving the blind man! Did the blind man help the protagonist in any way? Does it help the protagonist when his family is in trouble? Are there any magic secrets for the protagonist? The protagonist spends hundreds of thousands of dollars to save him 😥 The author has just traveled through time, and the writing does not feel like a time traveler 😥, but he is still loyal and courageous! Doesn't it feel false to write without the characters standing up?😥

I feel that the author's writing on (opera and kung fu) is very delicate, pretty good, and very comfortable to read; but in other aspects, I feel that there are big problems. The writing is a bit messy, and the concept of time is not clear. The feelings for the "parents in the past life" after traveling for three days are too fake, and people are grabbing it. He only dares to hurt people and dare not kill. He doesn't know how to spend money. He can even give a tiger-wolf medicine to an old man who is dying even if he can't take it himself. It needs to be improved.

In the troubled times like the Republic of China, if he helped his father buy a luxury rickshaw, he would be a childish person holding money to get through the busy city, right?

There's so much shit, how much shit happened in dozens of chapters?

I am not discriminating against the profession of actors, because the education we received since childhood tells us that there is no distinction between high and low professions! But you are trying to force an actor with values ​​from the old society and the old times into a god? Are you sick? Ah? Feeling: In modern times, China sacrificed so many outstanding people just to find a way out for the nation. In your eyes, this fact is bullshit? You can be uneducated, but don't insult your ancestors! If you use an actor to write an online article to highlight the most critical era, it is a naked betrayal of history!

I don't understand. I spent more than 100 oceans to buy a car to drive. I spent so much money just to be the lowest and lowest person.

He can't resist guns and cannons, so there's no use for him. The actor can't change Guo Jia's fate? Actors mislead the country

Overall it's pretty good, but the forced addition of details is too dramatic. Spending tens of thousands on a blind man to treat his eyes. Even Ming Jin is curious about such a big city like Peiping... His world view is too small, and he forces some weird and kind intentions.

I gave up on this one halfway through. It felt like watching a play. With the background of that era and the helplessness of that era, is it tenable to still engage in American heroism and not kill?

The author puts shackles on the protagonist himself and restrains himself. This kind of writing is courting death.

After only a few chapters, you can no longer read the currency prices. If you sing a show, a lot of money will be credited to your account. If you sing a few more shows, Peiping will be yours according to the author's price. Are you even willing to sacrifice your life to gain some territory by killing a few enemies? Even if you sing opera and make JB lose his singing, it's not worth the price.

He knows how to act, he is indecisive, he knows how to show off even though he can save people,

Are you engaging in the annulment trick again? You just return the token to the other party, and the two families have never been in contact with each other for a long time. They insist on running to slap each other in the face. It seems that if you don't do this, it won't show that the protagonist is awesome. Everyone is tired of watching this plot and there is nothing new.

I quite like the fighting setting in this novel, but I don't like the way the male protagonist behaves. In the troubled times of the Republic of China, it was an era of cannibalism. Others tried to punish you to death over and over again, but you just injured them and beat them to death for fear of getting a lawsuit. Then I ask, why set it in the Republic of China? It would be better to just go to the peaceful and prosperous era. The folk art of the Republic of China does not kill people, only hurts them. It gives me the impression that Lin Chong is a person who is armed with force and is a coward to death. The most disgusting thing is that the author always likes to write such bullshit that it's a matter of life and death, blood splatters in five steps, and only kills enemies without acting. I looked forward to the protagonist beating people to death, and finally pulled the big one. Blood splattered in five steps makes people vomit blood... And there's also the disrespect for the protagonist. It's malicious. The protagonist feels like a machine to attract hatred. Every time after writing an incident, he talks about how the protagonist is so famous and how powerful he is. Then a little bastard jumps out to challenge the protagonist, and then the protagonist starts to clear his name again. I'm really convinced! So what are the events that the protagonist has experienced before? There is no gold content at all, just a running account? Every time a conflict occurs, the protagonist must undergo a qualitative change, right? Either the wealth is leapfrogged, or the social status is improved, or the relationship with a key person rises to a higher level...

Today's grandmasters don't practice martial arts well and only think about singing?

It's so funny. If he has money, he can buy a car for his father to drive. Does this car have to be pulled?

I don't want to read it anymore. What I wrote is totally unreasonable and I don't regard money as money.

A moment of description from God's perspective! After a while, the protagonist's perspective is described. Let's describe it from the author's perspective! Schizophrenia.

It was a little embarrassing, and it felt like I was forcing myself to do something difficult. And your singing is really just singing? ? And you don't have a gun? ? Crazy? ?

When I saw it on the shelves, my only comment was that it was rubbish. No subscription necessary

Whether the author is lighthearted or not, the writing is too heavy.

I want to keep watching, but the routine is so straightforward that it looks like it's only for elementary school students. I really can't watch it.

Can you be more diligent in coding? Don't spend two hours just scrolling through Douyin.