Football: With Cheats Like These, Why Even Train?

The protagonist's reasoning is good, but now it's a little annoying. After joining the Hong Kong team, I wrote a lot of plots about domestic attacks on the protagonist, and I feel that I will write less in the future. However, the protagonist can only be abused to show his generosity, and it becomes a dead end without ending. The reading feeling is getting worse and worse.

I haven't finished watching it but I just can't help but want to complain about it. The first chapter is stinky and long, and the relationship between the characters is extremely simple and the settings are not randomly added. If it were not for the multiple heroines, I would not want to read further. In the end, Chapters 2 and 3 were stinky and long introductions. Looking back, it finally became a bit more text. As a result, you told me that the protagonist found three people on the bus 🥵 who he didn't know at all, and looked at them for five seconds longer just because they were strong-looking! Five seconds! You can go to bed. I said taking a bus might be a bit too much, after all, you have a good look and a good figure, but it's about the same. Later, it was said that the protagonist is more handsome than Kaka, but he backhandedly said that Cristiano Ronaldo is handsome. No, his eyes are useless and can be donated. To put it bluntly, Luo Zi and Dwarf are at the level of the public. I would give 5 points out of 10 as too much. Is there anyone really bragging about their looks? It is said that there are three golden chapters in novels, but I have read so many of them and I really can't stand them anymore. Goodbye.

I'm going to become an author because I enjoyed reading it. The author's writing is very good and the introduction to off-site topics is concise. There is no unnecessary nonsense in the description of the game. As long as the author of this book does not change, I will pursue books to the end of the world! Come on author

You are already a cultivator and you still play football!

Why does the protagonist listen to Ferguson and hold back? Are there bonuses for scoring goals? The protagonist has such strength. If it is not for money but for historical status, then wouldn't it be better to go to a small team and lead the small team into a championship than to go to Manchester United?

Another person who immediately changed his body, height, and appearance after taking medicine and pretended that everyone was a fool and that the photo in his passport was fake.

When I saw the idea of ​​opening a school, I didn't want to see it. Thinking about it, I felt that it was a lot of mess, and there was nothing exciting about it. Is it necessary to save the country and save the national football team?

This is how sports writing should be, with all kinds of extravagance in private life such as eating, drinking and having fun. I don't know what kind of writing those virgin articles are about being involved in the sports circle with a system!

This system is most suitable for playing national football

You can't stand it even if you don't have any brains!

The beginning of the heaven-defying one is such an ancient way of writing.

My personal opinion and some suggestions. One is that you are a time traveler, not the original owner. The old coach of the original owner cares about you. It is understandable that you are moved, but is it too much to have a sore nose and not be able to put down the phone for a long time? Two and one, are your data too detailed and affecting the perception? Just keep some rigorous things in mind. You have to list them line by line each time. It affects reading too much. Without the pornographic information, your grades will be worse. Simplify it a bit, and I can feel that you are afraid of data collapse, so you increase the difficulty. If this fantasy novel could be scolded, it would be said that you are overpowering in combat. It is better to reduce Albizia Julibrissin even a little at a time than to list a lot of data. Trinity, a very personal opinion, don't use embarrassing, bad, disgusting and inexplicable descriptions like wonderful arcs, sharp passes, etc. You are a novel, you are not a video. No one can imagine a wonderful arc, and there have been too many such descriptions in the past novels, which are already disgusting.

It is recommended not to use Gamero's private products. You should dislike them one by one, either all of them or all of them, otherwise it will affect the perception. Readers are here to read novels, not to chase stars. They are also chasing your stars.

The system has been marginalized, and so has daily life. As I write later, in addition to competitions, I am starting from the settings. The results are still the same, and I am becoming more and more invincible. On the contrary, there are more competitions, and everyone else is invincible. Focusing on daily life, I can only say that it is getting more and more boring.

We created a Hong Kong team out of nowhere. Who wants to watch the national football team? Give it up.

Keep it up, it's getting smoother and smoother You know, I'm not a fan and I never watch football games. Even so, I'm still interested in following it.

I slipped away and ordered almost all of them, but the post was deleted and the comments were criticized.

I have read this novel so far, and now I can only say that it is very retro and has the beauty of a novel from more than ten years ago.

The first few systems are too complicated to write. There is no need to adjust so many rules. I can just briefly introduce the two systems and it will be ok The description of cultivating immortals will be deleted directly.

One is arrogant and the other is Xiao Zhang. I feel like the author made a mistake with the name. So embarrassing

How much does it cost to move to Manchester United? I haven't seen it yet, and I have to let Ferguson beat the main character's data. Why don't you write about these exciting points? Don't worry about others finding out about the signing. How can any team's offensive core be so stressed? It's fun if you press too much and it becomes boring 🤫

It looks good, but it's too watery. I randomly picked up a chapter, cut it out and asked deepseek to delete more than half of it. In the end, the content had no impact. Recently, these football and basketball articles have become more and more popular.

This is a sports novel for the appetite. It's easy to get tired of the game, and the lace matches very well. Moreover, the previous part about cultivating immortals can be simplified. Don't touch on the domestic football association part later. Maybe you can live longer.

After reading it, I enjoyed the writing. I have always felt that athletes exercise every day and their hormones explode. It is impossible not to play. At most, they should be more conservative and not play so much. And the protagonists of most sports articles are training and competition machines, which is very inconsistent with common sense. Keep it up, I will subscribe when it is released

The early days of eating, drinking, having fun + competitions are now so serious that they are all competitions. Some competitions can be omitted directly, it is too watery. They also set up schools, and they make people look bad both inside and outside. It's getting boring to watch

The content is very exciting, but I don't know if it can be put on the shelves. The novel is about scolding shoes and finding a woman to throw away for a month as soon as I go abroad. I haven't read it in the past two years. . .

I have been reading this book for a while. The main point of enjoyment in other football novels is that the protagonist continuously gains honors through leveling up. This book is equivalent to directly minimizing this process. The protagonist basically does not level up, and relies on the system to add points to achieve an ability that far exceeds that of the football champion. For each game, it is equivalent to how to reasonably complete each game for the protagonist. Therefore, what this article can bring about is the honor, the Hong Kong team's trip to the World Championship, and the support and construction of the football industry. But is the author's talent limited? The recent writing has been very homogeneous. Basically, it is written about every game. Basically, the previous chapter is about the content of the game, how the protagonist scored, and the next chapter is written in a battle report style with media evaluation. This kind of writing really makes people unable to feel the passionate enthusiasm of football novels, and it also makes people have no enthusiasm to pursue reading. Having said that, I may subscribe to key chapters based on their titles, or I may no longer subscribe.

At first I thought the author was out of touch with the national football team, but in the end, he turned out to be a clever guy.

Generally speaking, in sports writing, when the protagonist's strength increases to the point of crushing him, it usually means the end. We all know that the protagonist comes on the scene and then beats everyone to the ground with a hard blow, so what else is there to see...

Keep it up, it's getting smoother.