Gou Collect Strengthening Points in Xiuxianfang City

The protagonist's current dangers are basically caused by his own interpersonal relationships. Most other books are about crises, with risks and benefits, and conflicts with positive feedback. A gentleman does not stand under a dangerous wall. Author, you write these things as if they are unnecessary disasters, which can easily drive readers away. A complex without positive feedback will only make the protagonist feel stupid.

Why are immortal cultivators said to be stupid? My opinion is given below. The most important thing for immortal cultivators is the realm of cultivation, and this book is no different. The protagonist has completed and upgraded a talisman inheritance. Why not upgrade and improve your skills? The protagonist upgrades the fireball talisman instead of upgrading the fireball technique. Is the protagonist stupid? The protagonist uses the Swift Wind Talisman to strengthen the Swift Wind Talisman. Why not find an article on body techniques or escape techniques to practice? (Don't say you can't find it, you can find the remaining chapters to complete the upgrade.) Doesn't it seem like the protagonist is stupid? The protagonist is still the protagonist even if he is so stupid, which means that other immortal cultivators are stupider than him. Does that mean that all immortal cultivators are stupid? Why are they all so stupid? I thought about it for a while, and it seems that cultivating immortality is very laborious, and the more you practice, the stupider you become. So those who seek immortality are all stupid~

The title of this novel attracted me, but the introduction put me off. An item can only be upgraded once, so don't limit cheating.

The plot needs to be revised based on readers' opinions. The protagonist's name and the plot of the supporting characters are too dramatic. Has the heroine not come out yet? Are you writing the story about the light bulb? The protagonist is about to become a male virgin. His relationship with his family has become a slave mentality. When choosing to pay for your boss, you still have to strengthen yourself. This is where there is a conflict.

Tuesday's follow-up reading will decide whether I can test the waters in the last round and recommend it. Please help me a lot.

The pursuit is really low now. I can't get in even after one round of testing. If I can't get in, I won't recommend 😭. Please help me. 🙏

Come on. There is something wrong with the formatting. Good setup.

In order to prevent anyone from being too lazy to read such a long paragraph, I will first state my final conclusion: this is a very solid novel, it is a bit slow to gain popularity, but I think it has the potential to be a masterpiece. I hope the author will persevere and it will probably achieve the results it deserves after it reaches hundreds of thousands or even millions of words. I have been reading novels for many years, especially fantasy and fairy tales. I have also been writing a novel recently (I haven't published it, it's not for advertising. I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night and read the new book list. When I saw it, I felt a little emotional and wanted to write it down). I have read Chapter 13 of the novel. It's too late. I'll save the rest for the morning. Let me tell you my current impressions. I think this is a very solid novel. In terms of plot, I don't think there are any flaws. The author's writing and plot design feel very sophisticated and not like a newcomer, and it feels a bit like a demon from outside the world. But it's too solid. In fact, it doesn't feel very satisfying. Whether it's cheats or character plot design, I don't feel that there are any bad points, but it's not satisfying enough. I think the current pace of online writing is still too fast. Unless the villain is creating a particularly good situation, he usually has to die early (I currently see the plot of Zhao Heng or something, which requires the inheritance of the talisman and is related to the interests of the city. There is a protagonist, and then a horse boy named Zhu helps Zhao Heng investigate. I have seen this so far) This villain is very facially portrayed. , The following plot I guess is that Zhao Heng died, and the protagonist changed his job to become a charm maker to make money (I guessed it) In the early stage, I felt it was a bit like the online novels about cultivating immortals in ancient times, similar to the biography of mortals cultivating immortals. For a new book, it is not suitable for the fast pace of current online novels in the short term, so I think this book may have poor results before hundreds of thousands of words, and no one even cares about it. As for other aspects such as protagonist creation, plot design, etc., I think it is still solid (bland, non-toxic, but I also feel that it is not very outstanding, such as the character growth of the protagonist). The author must have his own design in this aspect, and should insist on it. The main character of the work is generally a certain projection of the author himself, so there is nothing to say. Well, that's all, let's go for it.

The first copy is almost finished, it's almost time to read it

Abandoned, the first protagonist was defenseless. Secondly, a foundation-building family is described as very weak-minded, a first-order appendix inheritance, and it chooses to betray without even understanding what inheritance is. For a foundation-building family that has been around for hundreds of years, it is a bit outrageous. It's even more outrageous for a strong enemy to start building foundations in the fifth floor, and it's also outrageous to come to rescue people later, how long does it take to come from a sect.

Pursuing reading is very important in the new book stage. Please support me.

The author is capable, but the plot arrangement may be a little cliché. I suggest that the author study the Explosive Latte book. The latest book is full of suspense in every copy. The first three chapters should be a life-or-death crisis, and you won't be able to get through it if you don't use the system cleverly. At the same time, I suggest that the author first writes an orphan protagonist. Nowadays, it is easy to get tired of introducing conflicts through relatives or family. You could write like this 10 years ago, but now it is lost to everyone.