Xiuxian: I Can See the Proficiency

After reading more than 30 chapters, until the male protagonist paid the original price for a spiritual grass that he did not need urgently and whose market price was only 30 spiritual stones, he not only revealed his whereabouts and found someone to exchange with him (while evading pursuit), he blatantly admitted his place of origin in order to negotiate a lower price, and also promised to help once in the future as long as he was "in his power" (actually he still paid the market price)? ? ? Is this the male protagonist's IQ and way of doing things? The male protagonist in the previous article is said to be a descendant of many generations of tribulation cultivators. In the article, he showed no sense of crisis more than once at critical moments, and he has been patient with bluntly promoting the development of the plot... This time he really didn't have enough poison resistance... He failed.

1. The heroine is a little bitch 2. It feels a bit like martial arts 3. The protagonist is not worthy of Goldfinger

It's a very cliché way of writing, you're either in trouble or on the way to it.

It's crazy, I was promoted to the middle level of Qi training, it was like the battle of the century, and it was divided into several chapters...

Similar to Wulongshan Notes, the writing is smooth and the plot is quite good. The author should promote it, it is much better than most mortals.

For a proficiency article like this, it was fine until I got the plug-in. But once I got it, my butt didn't get too hot.

The plot is a bit nonsense. The protagonist is either being hunted or on the way to killing dozens or hundreds of people.

Nowadays, too many studios use AI ghostwriting to squeeze out many capable authors. Some famous writers come up with a book title and outline and leave it to the studio for operation. Just be a part of the group and it's fine. It's so disgusting that making money by being famous is as easy as drinking water, yet many people still don't believe it. Those who want to work part-time or full-time will be squeezed by AI and suffer. This book can still be rated as a high-quality book, it just depends on whether it is a real person or an AI. Logic is important. Once it's written, there's still a market for it.

Discovered starting from getting the golden finger Reckless from beginning to end Killing without knowing the consequences Travelers, don't understand anything Seemingly low-key, but in fact they are all sold out If it weren't for the golden finger, I would have died a long time ago The whole book has a warm-blooded martial arts atmosphere, which is not in line with the spirit of cultivating immortals It's a little cool, with a martial arts style

The protagonist's IQ is equal to the author's IQ

The author's divination setting is too poisonous. If a family has access to divination, then everyone is having fun. Normally, you have at least the golden elixir threshold to come into contact with this thing. A Qi-refining family can also do divination, and a foundation-building family can also do divination, just like James and Dabaicai, so who should practice other things, just learn divination.

Nowadays, it's difficult to become popular even if you write something so long during the qi training period.

It has such a strong flavor of early martial arts.

Judging from your introduction, it doesn't look like a proficiency panel, but more like a cause and effect panel. Because you have practiced the technique so many times, this technique is perfect.

I don't want to watch it for free, it's a waste of time

Use snacks to write books, and the self that comes out of AI will be more moist, and the middle-grade spiritual roots mentioned at the beginning will directly become low-grade later.

Guide poison every day, sincerely do not deceive me 🙂

In the battlefield of good and evil, the protagonist, as the foundation builder of the right path, refines all the right path Qi refining juniors who are fighting against the demon cultivators into blood beads just to snatch a regular second-level magic weapon from the friendly Qi refining juniors. . . Then the previous efforts to portray the moral boundaries of the protagonist (the so-called not a good person, but there is a bottom line) were all in vain, right? . . Once the protagonist of a book starts killing people for property and storage bags, the subsequent plots will become more and more mechanical and insensitive, and will eventually backfire on the work. This is different from whether the protagonist is a good person.

It's about like this

There's nothing wrong with the writing, it's just that my intelligence makes me want to curse! It is said that the writing is fluent and there should be no problem with the logic of thinking. How could he be so stupid!

A very sophisticated upgrade article. The main story line is a process in which crises, upgrades, and new crises are used to promote the protagonist to upgrade through the plot. Very classic, but easy enough to use. The battles are also well written, and the characters in the middle are portrayed with a good tone of sadness and joy The introduction is well written, but the title is a bit confusing The shortcomings There are mainly two points. First, the changes in the plot lack tension. There is no doubt that the opponent's fueling tactics do not show a real crisis. The most obvious one is the wave of four against one in Fenglei Valley. The previous wave was well prepared, but when it came to the life and death fight, it was far worse The second point is that the plot routine focuses on improving the cultivation level. In fact, it makes people feel that the protagonist is very awesome, which should be felt from the changes in social status. To put it more simply, it is the attitude of people around you towards you. This point has been written less. Summary of food and grass, I am the first to order

Generally speaking, having an extra daughter in a pig's trotters is a big poison. Maybe the author wanted to write a different kind of fairy tale. But the immortal way is private. As a reader, it is difficult to feel immersed in it. At present, I still insist on watching it and voted for it monthly. Hopefully there won't be more unbearable episodes

Since the comment section says it's toxic, I won't read it.

Daily settlement, start cultivating immortality from a handyman

The biggest drawback is that the upgrade is too slow and there are glitches. It takes more than 60 chapters to reach the 6th level of Qi training. . I can't go into details about other little poisonous points.

I have read more than a dozen episodes, and the writing is good, the plot design is reasonable, and the characters are full-bodied! Not like a novice writer! A different title might be better! Recommend

The protagonist has time to practice swordsmanship thousands of times but does not have time to improve his cultivation level (not to say that it is not at all, but it is too slow compared to swordsmanship.) He has always said that swordsmanship is difficult, but he does not improve his cultivation level.

I was baffled by the first chapter, three golden chapters. . . That's it for the first chapter! ! ! !

The proficiency level is probably the most rubbish system like the blood bar. It is extremely joyful to practice Qi from one level to the next. When I see the golden elixir cause and see billions or tens of billions of experience, I will probably be in despair.

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