Daily Information, from Casual Cultivators to Immortals

Isn't your golden finger supposed to be running around? Why don't you buy the island and An's family is not going to move, and you have adopted an adopted son. Your last apprentice was of no use, and now you have adopted an adopted son, and there are a bunch of sluts from the adopted son. I'm speechless.

The villains are all association monsters, and they want to kill the protagonist at the slightest clue.

There is information every day, and I don't have time to cultivate and retreat. I am out looking for opportunities every day.

This cover picture and this book title are really popular. The similarity is over 95%. I have to have eight if not ten books.

Cultivation + daily information? What do you think, author? Every year, every ten years does not violate the peace.

The father and daughter of the Qin family went to get married. How did they go? It took the woman three years to go there on her legs. It would take him and his father a lot of time to go there, even if they had a flying boat.

The protagonist is not well portrayed, there is too little psychological description, and there is no character change in the whole story. It is just like what to eat today. It is too dull. The villains are all stereotyped characters. They kill people for treasures and get killed. The conflicts are created peacefully. It feels like, "I just eat cabbage today." The setting of the intelligence system is also badly written, and no new ideas of its own are written.

I feel that the plot of Shaoyin is a bit abrupt. There was also a section about destroying people's golden elixir in the middle. I didn't benefit from it. I didn't kill two people and then made enemies for nothing. If it were not foreshadowing for the subsequent plot, the rationality and handling of the entire plot would be questionable.

Come on, author! The writing is fluent and the plot is reasonable. Please read more. I'm optimistic about you...