What's Wrong with Superman's Brother Wanting to Be a Native of His Country?

The relationship between the protagonist and Superman feels a bit strange. I thought the title of the book was talking about identity and feelings, but it turns out that only the identity is the same. Moreover, the plug-in automatically applies a patch to restrict the carbon-based organisms in the front, and then applies a patch in the back, saying that it is carbon-based organisms on earth.

To be honest, I really like reading American comics, but if you start writing from babies, there is a high chance that you will be GG.

Chapters 14 and 29 are fighting each other. If you can't understand the classics, you'll start a variety show.

Does carbon-based organisms only refer to humans, or does it include all flesh-and-blood organisms?

Why is it that every Superman's brother has the same personality, aloof, cold and desireless (both male and female), only close to his family? I have read many books about the brothers who become Superman. Is this template easy to use?

A book that treats Azu as a symbol of simply doing whatever he wants will most likely be gg

And Superman absorbs sunlight and becomes this thing. How does the author plan to write it? I feel like the current protagonist is too useless. 🙄🙄🙄🙄😅😅😅😅

To be honest, the writing style, the description techniques, and the plots written are not good. I didn't write it with a normal heart. I just deliberately wanted to write about who the person was like. But the author couldn't describe the behavioral habits and language habits from the side. He could only rely on narration and inexplicable psychology.

First of all, the first point is that I feel that the protagonist's character is really useless. Yes, it is trash. The first link is to train the physical body, but it cannot exceed the carbon-based organisms of the earth. Damn, I just want to ask, what's the point of this? At the end of the training, the body will be equivalent to that of a demigod at best. After all, Diana is a mixture of human and demigod. But then, after making these preparations, how do you get heat vision, freezing breath, super strength, and super speed? ? And the second appearance should be super speed. Then the second plug-in is divine insight? ? ? This thing is useless. At most it can give you superhuman vision? ? But Superman punches you in the face and turns you into meat.

If you really can't finish it, then don't post it. If you open a subscription every time there is a new chapter, you are basically considered the important audience of this novel. But if you keep doing this kind of unfinished things, copying them casually, and not changing them in time, it really ruins your good impression.

The protagonist is still a virgin. I guess the author is also a virgin. He has never even touched a woman's hand.

Directly specifying the number of tons of power is too bad. If you set a 60-ton power for the protagonist and still be stronger than Clark, it is too despicable. The subsequent increase in super strength in the town will be completely leap-forward. If you specify the number of tons of power in this way, it will not only suppress the protagonist's strength, but also superman's strength.

I felt like I was going to collapse. After chapter 80, I became more and more deviated from the main character, and the main character was reduced to a background. He appears once in a few chapters and is briefly introduced, as if he has forced a protagonist into several stories.

It's understandable that he took the initiative to tell Jonathan to avoid danger when he had no strength at the beginning and knew the size and strength of the giant wolf. However, in the end, the protagonist was like a mute. He did not take the initiative to explain the situation of the giant wolf, and then let Jonathan go as an ordinary person to follow John to hunt monsters. The protagonist looked on coldly, as if he didn't care at all. I don't know if the author thought the protagonist could tell the truth, or if the protagonist had narrative-level abilities and suppressed the protagonist's halo.

Do you know why most people don't like to watch plots about childhood? The adult super and adult systems cover all the previous hundreds of chapters in one second, making the plot seem watery and boring.

If your writing skills are not good, then don't write a variety show. It will only feel like a mess. The script of Small Town Superman was enough for you to write when you were a child, and you still wrote some messy things. If you want to expand the background, you can write a short unit drama, which will not conflict with the main plot.

Is it possible to quickly skip the infancy chapter? If you turn off the infancy chapter, there will be very little useful information.

It's not that it's impossible to write an American comprehensive, but you must understand the logic in it. It's obvious that the author just wanted to enrich the plot and didn't think about logic at all. Why do I say that? Has the author ever thought about whether these worldviews were integrated from the beginning, or did the protagonist only merge together after traveling through time? If it is the former, then every story must be consistent in order to maintain the original plot until the protagonist meets them. In this case, if the protagonist does not intervene, there should not be a serious impact on each other. For example, Vecna ​​targets Clark. If the protagonist does not intervene to resolve this matter, it will completely change the plot of Smallville. This is something that shouldn't happen. If it's the latter, then it shouldn't be only the plot after the protagonist's time travel that is affected. The author's writing method of starting to influence after time travel is as if the time before the protagonist's arrival does not exist, and the world only begins to operate after the protagonist's arrival. If there is no special foreshadowing, the sense of providence is too serious, and the author's creation hand is too obvious. If the characters in the story have thoughts, they will feel it. Once unaware, the entire character becomes mentally retarded.

The protagonist keeps saying he doesn't like Lana and keeps writing about her, which feels a bit like pimping him out.

Looking at the writing style, the author also allows the protagonist to expand his brain power... The writing style is not like the brain-expanding type

One chapter a day is enough for anyone, damn it 😡. When foreigners come to see it, they think we are even more amazing! Now, I order you to write one hundred chapters a day. If you can't do it, just ask a hundred Chengdu men to play with you.

DC Isn't it enough for you to write?

Not bad, but the main plot is not visible at the moment

Recommendation (from Demon Boy to Almighty Superman)

I don't understand😕A Chinese is used to eating foreign food?

Is the last paragraph confusing or repeated? After I saw the update, I went in and read half of it and found that there were repeated chapters at the end. What happened?

I feel more and more bored lately, and I don't even know what the author wants to write.