40K: When the Warp Appears

Warrior, do you understand? Four distant voices intertwined in the depths of the universe, like four invisible rivers merging into the same sea of ​​stars. Smiles swayed silently in the vacuum. We will come back, like a heavy rain that never stops. People who get caught in the rain will shed tears, and after the tears evaporate, they condense into new raindrops and hit their heads again. Whether they pray or curse, rain has no beginning and no end. It will only fall in the past, present, and future forever. So you understand, right? Warrior. The blue sky will never come and the rain will never end. Every heavy rain you encounter will be our reunion. No. Raindrops slipped from the corners of the warrior's head, fell into his eyes, and then dripped from the corners of his eyes. I will make this heavy rain stop. I will stop people from crying. After saying that, the warrior raised his sword and walked into the heavy rain.

Came here from the previous one. So far it feels pretty good. I really like the description of the wolf pack. It feels like the protagonist is a little too powerful, struggling with the incarnation of Khorne in the first few chapters, leaving little room for changes (both physically and mentally) in the later stages. But the Warhammer world is a mess. If the protagonist is not so powerful, he really can't do most things. I will keep chasing you. I hope it can bring the same feeling as the previous book.

1. I feel that the author is good at describing the story of a single character in a big era, but not good at arranging a coherent plot. 2. At present, this work does not have an obvious main line. I wonder if the author wants to convert the work into a unit drama or a road movie? 3. The literary + cold style is very distinctive, but sometimes I wish I could explain to the readers what is going on in more vernacular terms.

"When evil things appear, use the spirit stone of hope to add to your body, and turn them into the shape of fire to burn away the evil warriors" "When evil things appear, turn their skills into invisible forms, just like the resources of flowing water can calm the evil warriors" "When evil things appear, knowing their form is better than their body, like a disease The state of wind shoots through the evil warriors" "When evil appears, wear steel armor and cut off the evil warriors with the force of breaking the ground" Become a miserable warrior and fight for yourself, for mankind, for freedom, and for the future.

Great, the book is finally released. Without the author, what would we eat?

Give birth, finally give birth! Mother and child are safe! !

Is TM really Kamen Rider time travel? I don't understand Kamen Rider at all😦. The height, strength, and speed shown in the first few chapters of the protagonist are not comparable to Kamen Rider😦

It's still the same awkward literary style as before. I don't know whether it's because my brother's economy is so good that he doesn't have to worry about food and clothing, or because he's generating electricity for love. I can't make people feel more relaxed when I look at it. I'm already very depressed at work and I can't relax watching this. Also, I don't understand that by rescuing Guilliman like this, Caul's role will be gone?

Author, your writing is very good. Your writing style is not childish at all, and I don't think there is any need to care about the niche subject matter. Everyone knows that Kamen Rider can also be read smoothly. This kind of mysterious prophecy-style writing is very attractive, and the requirements for the author are higher. At the same time, it is more in line with the Warhammer world view. Moreover, the author's writing is very delicate. There are few Warhammer-related derivatives that I have read that can match the author's writing. To be honest, if there are too many people in a circle, it is easy for the audience to gravitate towards comedy. In the style of Shuangwen, the author's style is drama-oriented, mystical, and the writing is beautiful. This book attracts me more than the previous one. In addition, there are a lot of bad memes in the Warhammer circle, and some gay men and male authors also use some pornographic memes. The quality is very low, purely for fun and for fun. The writing style is also biased toward younger ages, and the narrative style is also very straightforward, with no transitions at all. The protagonists in their works are also very young. They do childish things in a tragic and serious world view, which is very OOC. The author can write normally. The Warhammer IP itself has a very strong story, and the characters in it also perfectly fit the popular psychology. They are beautiful, strong and miserable. There are many readers who like this character design. Moreover, the author's writing style is quite mature and very consistent with the background of Warhammer, so I feel that many people will still like it.

Why don't you like Kamen Rider? I quite like it🙂

Literary youth, Form 2, Riddler.

This book is really tiring to read, and I can't get into it. Whether it's from Kuuga's perspective or Warhammer's perspective, no matter how you read it, there will be drama, and now I have no desire to follow up.

It's not good to watch. The first few chapters go round and round without even revealing the identity of the protagonist. The plot is also about the Riddler. I don't recommend it.

Red Almighty Form Blue Azure Dragon Form Green Pegasus Form Purple Titan Form Even the ultimate black can correspond to the Black King The sublimated form can also bring a touch of gold Do you understand this little ingenuity (

This is too difficult to write. With Kuuga's appearance, when meeting the Imperial Tribunal, Chapter, and Imperial Navy, no matter which Imperial unit, the protagonist must be treated as an alien.

Before I give my opinion, I have fully subscribed to the previous book. Although it is not at the top of the book list, it is at least on the list. This book is currently updated automatically, and all monthly passes from the previous month have been given. Since I want to give my opinion, it is natural to compare the two books. First of all, let's talk about the creation of the protagonist, or what is the protagonist's personality charm? The protagonists in both books have enough power to change the world, and they are both rebels against the darkness of the Warhammer world. Most of the protagonists in the Warhammer book are like this, so why do I like your book? Because in my opinion, the core of Lao Ka is his hatred of darkness and his love for children. He is an Avenger who has learned to protect. He draws his sword out of hatred for all evil and injustice, and chooses to walk with the Emperor; but what truly makes him determined is his love for his children. Where's Alder? I think he was a knight, a protector who decided to do his best to ward off evil spirits. His driving force is love, the love for all the beauty in the world, the love for ordinary people who can laugh, and then he fights to protect what he loves from the bottom of his heart. The problem back in the text is that he joins the wolf pack, the wolf pack loves him, and he fights in the name of the wolf pack, which is good; but in Macragge, he fights because of the request of the think tank, even though he does hate evil and really wants to help the emperor. The logic seems to be smooth, but something is missing, and the protagonist's flesh and blood is withered. Any Hammer protagonist can fight. What are his characteristics? Couldn't Macragge's wonderful life bring back memories? Can't he strengthen his confidence to fight? How can a person without blood or tears resist evil? The knight who does not shed tears is about to become a servitor. And Clone Fulgrim, what's wrong with him loving a baby? After landing, what if you love simple farmers, love kind governors, and love peaceful Eldar? A knight is one who gains power. The second point is the correspondence between strength and the enemy. Lao Ka's performance is killing skills, spiritual energy and divine power, leaning towards magic stabs; and currently, Alder's strength lies in the strong physical strength after transformation and a certain degree of resilience and resistance. He can naturally obtain other powers through growth, but since he is biased toward warriors, Black Bean Sprouts, Demonic Engines, Chaos Knights, Demonic Titans, top-level Zerg and even insect ships and demonic battleships can all compete with him in a power duel, or show his excellent control of physical power. The current description of Alder's combat power is still a bit thin. The third point is the creation of supporting characters. The article must be a group portrait, and each supporting role has its own background and characteristics. I feel that for Guilliman who wakes up after ten thousand years, his pain and fragility are insufficiently described. He is the son of God and the son of man. Compared with him in 30K, he is under pressure. No matter how hard he persists, he can't make a few jokes in his busy schedule like he did in 30K, but this happiness must be cherished enough. Although the protagonist is not his blood brother, why can't he complain since he is a comrade? There is also Clone Fulgrim. Phoenix led the workers' uprising. He also had a mortal family. On the planet, he was in the growth period. Write about his human touch. He actively wanted to pursue fairness for the civilians. Isn't it good for him to communicate and live with the civilians? Finally, there is the current name of the cloned Fulgrim. Western-style names are somewhat difficult to remember, and they overlap with the protagonist by one word, which will cause dyslexia. I hope the author will work hard on his creation. I will continue to subscribe to this book and double my monthly votes at the end of the month.

It's too much of a riddle and makes me read dryly, and the writing is not as good as the previous one.

He's not like Midnight Blade, full of Warhammer native style mixed with the right goldfinger. Before I clicked in, I thought it was a serious time travel. After seeing the war in Afghanistan, I can be sure that this article is very inappropriate for my colleagues. Why do I say that? Because I neither understand Warhammer Land nor respect Kuuga Kamen Rider. Chivalry, Warhammer War. Every single one of them is so bad I can't believe a man who became Kuuga is just a tool, it's ridiculous! The fifth generation is a person with 100 skills. Even if he is his successor, he is still a human being. They are all self-respecting and self-loving people. The author sets up a knight, a Kamen Rider, as a person who treats himself as a tool from the beginning. I can only say that it seriously violates the original intention of Kamen Rider. Kamen Rider should be roaming the dragon, not participating in the war, because the original Showa was anti-war

What is it written? It's mysterious. Who is the protagonist? Waterma can't stand a single chapter.

It feels particularly suitable for the style of this book. It was drawn by the blogger Xiaoxiaoxiaoxiaomilong.

The quality of this book should be okay, but the question is whether the themes of Warhammer and Kamen Rider are too niche. The overlap between the two audiences is not high, right?

Mask plus war hammer, wow, not bad, but it's a pity that it's not Yaji Tuo. Although Kuuga is also good, a god-killer like Yaji Tuo is more suitable for War Hammer, especially the power of light, which can correspond to spiritual energy. When the power of light is out of control, it means spiritual energy is out of control. The Black God loves people very much, and the Emperor also loves people very much. The Black God has the Creator Angel, and the Emperor also has the Angel Astartes, so the Black God is the Emperor.

I don't like the writing style very much, and the chapter comment section smells like it

He is really too young and looks tired. The black library is also divided into Shuangwen and Wenqingwen. I just like watching Shuang Wenkai Xiaobao. The famous Inquisitor trilogy is too literary and youthful, and I had to watch it over and over again to connect the plot. This book is the same, the atmosphere is well-done, but there are a lot of characters, the descriptions often jump, and a lot of Warhammer settings are used directly.

Damn it, are you crazy about being poor? Once you look at the table of contents, you need to pay only for Chapter 37.

One thing to say, I know the author is very good at writing midnight and group portraits, but there are no positive descriptions of Alder in several chapters. Is he writing too high?

If you haven't updated yet, at least post a chapter to talk about it.

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I am still looking forward to the author. Do you have a group? Why hasn't it been updated recently?

What I admire the most about the author is that while retaining the flavor of Warhammer, he also made War Machine humanistic.