In the World of Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber, My Sword Emerges from Emei

The writing style of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is actually quite good! It has a strong martial arts and ancient Chinese style! It's just that the handling in the middle and later stages is really bad! The protagonist's combat power is drastically suppressed, while the villains' strength is infinitely increased! Divine skills are everywhere, and every villain has several!

This introduction is truly riddled with flaws; in the pursuit of perfect parallelism, they just randomly picked words and forced them together. They should focus on making the sentences flow smoothly before worrying about parallelism. Don't be so fussy.

It's fine for the protagonist to level up gradually in your story, but every time he improves, he ambushes the enemy, severely injuring them until their intestines are visible. The enemy is shocked and flees, and the protagonist can't catch up. He's completely unharmed by such horrific injuries, and then waits for the protagonist to level up again before finally finishing him off.

This humble nun is extinct; I hereby bestow upon you the Taoist name "Thanos".

Hopefully, this book won't let Cheng Kun off the hook so easily. Ouyang Feng is fine, though his character is questionable, he's still a grandmaster. Cheng Kun is just plain disgusting. There aren't enough villains. There's also the Twelve Treasure Tree King, and maybe some Mongolian masters could be added. A fight between Cheng Kun and Zhang Sanfeng would be really exciting.

The villains, even those with names or slightly elite-level abilities, are either not killed by Extinction or are otherwise invincible; they always manage to escape. Why not just call it "Swords Emerging from Emei"? Those who practice the Compassionate Sword Technique should just "Swords Emerging from Shaolin." Guess why Extinction is called "Extinction"?

Having written so much, the martial arts techniques and characters are disorganized, and it deviates too far from the original work.

I've followed the story on and off until the protagonist reached his peak, and I thought he was invincible. But then I was told he's only ranked fourth at best. It's really cruel how martial arts novels have to suppress power levels when they can't keep up with the plot.

I don't understand why in so many martial arts fanfiction, people are afraid to kill this person or that person? It's one thing if you can't beat them, but if you can beat them, why are you still afraid to kill them? Seriously?

The author is already immersed in their own art. In the original story, Xiao Zhao joined the Bright Peak to steal the Great Shift of the Universe for Granny Jin Hua; now it's been changed to her joining the Beggars' Sect, so she's supposed to be stealing the Eighteen Subduing Dragon Palms? 😜