Starting as Murong Fu and Transmigrating into Song Qingshu Across the Heavens

It feels like it has touched the ceiling of martial arts fandom. The protagonist's character changes very smoothly, and the various plots are well designed. The characteristics of the plot characters are described in such a way that there is no sense of detachment at all. When getting along with various plot characters, they are not irritating or belittling. They have their own standards for how to behave. If it is not dark or funny, it will be a misfortune. It doesn't matter to me if there is no heroine, or if I return to Tianlong and take one or more. Although I really like the princess and the girl in yellow shirt described by the author, I still feel that it would be better to have a friendship between gentlemen. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. There are still few chapters at present, food and grass, continue to maintain the absolute fairy grass.

A pretty good martial arts novel. I thought that the author arranged for the protagonist to interact with so many female characters, and it was the kind of stallion novel that was devoid of nutrition and resembled a collection of addictions. However, this book is really brilliant in the creation of female characters, each with its own characteristics, and I was very impressed after reading it. The martial arts fighting scenes are also okay, and some of the witty remarks during the interaction with Zhao Min are also good. What I don't like very much is that the protagonist is like a collector of martial arts. He practices all kinds of kung fu, and he may have practiced more than ten top-notch techniques. Since the protagonist is extremely gifted, he can quickly master the Pure Yang Kung Fu in one year, master the Dragon Subduing Palm in ten days, and master the Yang Finger in half a day. This kind of talent combined with his martial arts accumulation has already made him the second best in the world after Zhang Sanfeng. However, the actual combat performance does not match the description of the unique skills added to the body, and it feels a bit overwhelming.

Taking a comprehensive look at it, it seems that it is obviously suppressing the protagonist's combat power. The protagonist's current configuration is not much inferior to Zhang Wuji's at the peak. In addition, Murong Fu's actual combat skills should not be just as shown in the book; and the recent chapters are too embarrassing to boast about the Great Shift. It is a bit outrageous to say that the Star Shift is not as good as the Great Shift. You are completely using Zhang Wuji's top-level Great Shift to compare with the original Murong Fu's Star Shift. The opponents Zhang Wuji encountered in Yitianli were basically less than half as skilled as him, and they were all in a brutal game, but even so, he could only resolve quick attacks that could not be returned to Sandu; the most important thing is that the Great Shift of the Universe is a mental method that focuses on stimulating the potential of the human body, while the Dou Zhuanxing Shift is a technique that focuses on leveraging strength. The emphasis of the two is different. You don't have to use the shortcomings of your own skills to compare with others' advantages, right? Murong Longcheng, who was the same generation as Xiaoyaozi Zhao Kuangyin and other monsters, was still invincible with the battle of the stars. It was more because Murong Fu himself was not as good as Zhang Wuji in the original work, rather than that the battle of the stars was not as good as the world.

The author's way of handling the overwhelming plot is really uncomfortable to watch. Is this recent way of writing trying to make people jump? Qiao Feng mentioned the problem in the chapter before. After the modification, it looked okay, but now it happens again? If you don't understand, why can't you write that the protagonist's martial arts skills are almost incapable of defeating Xiao Yuanshan? If you have to write that the protagonist is not the opponent, just write it if you want. In front of it, you should also add that Duan Murong Fu learned Xiao Wuxiang Kung Fu and Pure Yang Wu Ji Kung Fu and quickly returned to the state before the loss, so you are equivalent to telling the reader that the protagonist went to Yitian and got a The results of stacking top martial arts are still not as good as the Four Heavenly Dragons. Although Xiao Yuanshan and Murong Bo are still better than Qiao Feng before killing A'Zhu and Jiumozhi who has practiced Xiaowuxiang Gong, but does your portrait like this really make the protagonist look like he is stretching his crotch? I see that many readers have asked why the problem of suppressing combat power has not been changed? Murong Fu in your novel was the first person under Zhang Sanfeng during the Yitian period, but he behaved like this when he returned to Tianlong? I have followed your book from the beginning to now, but if you insist on keeping this writing style, I don't know how long I can keep reading.

To be honest, even if your skills have not recovered, with the skills of Fighting the Stars, the Great Shift, the Nine-Yin Manual, and the Jade Girl's Heart Sutra, fighting left and right, Tai Chi, and swords, no one except the sweeping monk should be able to do anything to you; during the battle in the Chongyang Palace of the Little Dragon Girl, let alone the Golden Wheel Master, even the Bhikkhu Ji Nimoxing and others are even far behind, but their Jade Girl Su Xin swordsmanship can single-handedly resist the three Mongolian masters of Jinlun Kingdom and the five masters of Quanzhen. Compared with the Pure Yang Wuji Kung Fu of Murong Fu Dacheng in your novel, after mastering this set of kung fu, you are still afraid of not being able to defeat the two elders Xuan Ming, which makes you look like the protagonist. Like a waste; and if you give these skills to the original Murong Fu, even if the skills are still at the level of the original work, it is impossible for you to be at a disadvantage in the fight against Xiao Yuanshan like you did yesterday before you changed. Not to mention that you have almost recovered your skills. According to the position you gave to the protagonist in Yitian, in addition to sweeping Except for the Earth Monk, only Tong Lao, who was in his heyday, might have some trouble, and the others are not to be feared. Your writing method is not only suppressing combat power, you are suppressing combat performance. This way of handling gives readers a really bad impression, and you are going to become a cultivator later, so what else are you suppressing? Isn't it true that fan fiction that belittles the protagonist is simply disgusting to the readers? Now that you have written about the recovery of your skills, don't make so many distracting plots later, otherwise your blood pressure will really rise.

I personally hope to have a harem. It's such a pity that Song Qingshu can open a harem.

I chased Wei Yixiao twice but couldn't catch him, and I couldn't kill Chen Youliang either.

Wei Yixiao should give up the book if this plot happens again. You have already repeated it twice. This is an Internet article. Don't be stupid. No one will pay for your literary youth.

I've read Chapter 120 of the full subscription. It's shit. Don't read it. Abandon it.

Is the famous villain really the immortal Xiao Qiang? With his rubbish martial arts skills, Chen Youliang could make his opponent run away? Isn't it too old to be plotted by others later, and then slapped in the face to give away resources and reputation? Besides, this God of Heaven is really rubbish. He can defeat the weaklings without killing them all at once? The combined finger and the one yang finger are not the same as the physical energy. I am confident that I can kill people, but people run away? Why do you put so much poison into such a rhythm?