The Return of the Condor Heroes: I Learned Star Shift

If I hadn't pointed it out, the author might not have realized that while the protagonist possessed superb martial arts skills, he lacked the demeanor of a top-tier master—what we commonly call "arrogance." The two martial artists invited the protagonist to Dasheng Pass, and after feigning reluctance, he gave up on the invitation.

This author hasn't even understood martial arts novels before writing a book. The Murong family's "Dou Zhuan Xing Yi" (斗转星移) isn't the same as the "Qian Kun Da Nuo Yi" (乾坤大挪移). It requires familiarity with powerful martial arts in the martial arts world, at least a basic understanding, and the ability to specifically counter them to be effective. While it's famous, it's not for novices.

I stopped watching after episode 28; it was too tedious. It felt like I was being held hostage the whole time, and the plot was drastically altered. They changed things arbitrarily outside the main storyline, fine, but they even messed up things within the main storyline. At this rate, I have no idea how the original plot even happened.

The beginning was quite well-written, with good interactions between Yang Guo and Yang Guo, including their friendship. There were also opportunities to develop storylines involving the Valley of Heartbreak, Jinlun Fawang, the Five Greats, and Guo Jing. Adding some Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils elements would also be a good idea. However, the later parts are so drawn-out.

The opening is well-written; please don't try to whitewash Li Mochou or make her the protagonist. Her extreme and ruthless nature is unlikely to be changed.

I started skipping around chapter 80. The author shouldn't have titled this book "I Learned the Star-Shifting Technique," since the rest of the book is all about practicing the Xiaoyao Sect's martial arts. It should have been titled "I Inherited the Xiaoyao Sect, I Came for Murong and the Star-Shifting Technique," but it's all about Xiaoyao Sect martial arts.

In the world of martial arts, if a book doesn't learn the most complete and perfect Nine Yang Divine Skill as its internal energy cultivation method, it truly has no future.

Wuxia novels are truly from the last century and have long since declined. I flipped through the top wuxia novels on Qidian and couldn't find a single good one; they were all utterly boring.

The author insists on suppressing the protagonist in terms of internal energy cultivation. Even if the protagonist masters the Lesser Formless Skill, he'll only be a second-rate expert at best. And yet, there's an extra one of the eight books that supposedly suppresses the protagonist; you can't find it even after searching dozens of chapters. It's pointless.

This writing is so tedious! I can't stand it anymore; this style of writing is doomed to fail.