Transmigrating Simultaneously: Invincible Across the Heavens, Starting with Dragon and Snake

A memory is written in more than ten chapters, more than ten chapters, and the memory is written in such detail. Is this a memory? There is a big problem with the narrative method. If I can get ten points in the college entrance examination essay, it is because the teacher is kind. Taking advantage of the fact that there are few people and few chapters, I have changed the first two chapters to the back. Various other issues have been reviewed by other book friends. I can only say that this book has great potential.

Is it true that he only appeared after writing 20 golden fingers in the same genre? A bit interesting

Aren't they traveling at the same time? Why is there only one protagonist, and there are other protagonists? The protagonist of another world

The beginning of this book is a bit weird. It has nothing to do with the introduction. The protagonist is also a middle school boy. Has the original text been revised? When was Goldfinger written?

It's a bit speechless. You beat someone to death and you go back to school. At least you can find a lawyer and it's not like you have no money.

I was speechless. The protagonist slaughtered hundreds of ferocious beasts at the beginning and captured them with ease. Then he reincarnated and took care of all these things. All 15 years were wasted. He didn't know how to use such strong force in his previous life. Did someone write the three golden chapters? Then the author hasn't read the first three chapters at all?

What are you writing about in the latest chapters? Now Li Wansen, now Boss Zhou, the author, why don't you look at yourself and see if you are dizzy?

What do you think of your book? It was written with intention but there are a lot of mistakes. It is not consistent with famous books. The foreshadowing is too long and some of it is unnecessary. It does not get into the theme quickly. The golden finger comes too late. The protagonist's past life is not clearly explained. It starts with a middle school boy in high school and has no mature and stable aspects. Fortunately, your book has been recommended, otherwise it would probably be thrown away!

Tong Chuan Liu is most taboo about writing a little here and a little there

As title. Because the protagonist of this plot builds a foundation for a hundred days, which is a process of the protagonist's growth, but as some book friends have reported, it is indeed a bit boring. In order not to affect everyone's reading experience, I will release the saved manuscripts at once.