Simultaneous Transmigration: A Journey of Idealism Beginning with One Piece

After reading two chapters, it can be seen that the author has good writing style and ideas. But it's not like you're here to make money. If you want to make money, don't do so many bells and whistles! Just bury a few hooks. Who in the right mind would remember so many of your characters and settings in Chapter 2? Can't you write it simply and to the point? Or does it mean that you have to show off your writing skills to the point of being covered in clouds and mountains in order to show your true character? I came here to read the online article. Simple and straightforward review is fine, but the stream of consciousness from the beginning is really dissuaded from writing something that is incomprehensible to people with thousands of words! Of course, if you are not here to make money and want to express yourself, then please feel free.

I don't dare to read this kind of author who loves to play, because usually this kind of author will stab the reader unconsciously because of his own ideas of fun.

The introduction is very attractive, the plot is very abstract, and it introduces a lot of settings and transitions from left to right, which is even more uncomfortable than when I first watched Weird Fairy 😴

It could be chocolate-flavored shit, or it could be shit-flavored chocolate.

The writing is very messy. In the first two chapters alone, there are chat videos, item transmission, autonomous time travel, the golden finger of the main god space, high-level influence, simultaneous time travel, and memory loss. There is no main body like the currently popular golden fingers that are all integrated together, and several golden fingers will conflict with each other. For example, the main god panel of the Heart Distortion will be disconnected from Xiao Zhou's video for unknown reasons after traveling through the world.

The writing is too complicated, biting off more than one can chew. Tongtongliu should be written world by world first, and then unified at the end. Moreover, the main god space and the Tongtongliu are very incompatible. Both involve multiple worlds. I don't have enough skills and writing skills to write clearly what I want to express. What is presented in the end is a mess, because it involves multi-world travel and the main god space from the beginning, so it is no longer possible to make up for it.

No one commented, Even the pictures were stolen from others, The author is so lonely.

After looking at four or five pictures, it seemed quite baffling. At the beginning, you connect with the protagonist of the mysterious world. There is a problem with suddenly traveling through time later. Then there were protagonists who traveled through other worlds, and they also had problems. As for how you connected with the best friend protagonist before? Forget it, just think of it as foreshadowing. Anyway, just various Riddler modes. I am reading novels after get off work for fun, and I still like to read some more straightforward ones. Reading these pictures makes my head hurt. It's a bit too jumping, here and there.

Your introduction is well written, but the early content is so complicated that even a person like me who likes setting articles can't understand what you are writing about.

The writing is a mess and I don't know what to say. The author is so excited about writing that he doesn't care whether the readers can understand it or not.