Senior Sister, Don't Touch Me

Moderator Xiaoxiu's delusional starting point for enlightenment, resurrect my third brother

Which old man is reincarnated again🙂

Regarding the affairs of two other sects, it's okay for you to sing and dance and be the one in front. You also take the initiative to make the male protagonist the target of public criticism. The key reason is outrageous. You might as well write that the male protagonist is too conspicuous in the female cultivator camp, so he is ridiculed as soon as he appears, and then Ye Da shows off his skills to help the male protagonist stand out. (In this way, the character stood up. Senior Sister Qing Leng did a contrasting thing for me. On the contrary, apart from the character, it still looks like a two-armed female fist.) The enemy mocked the male protagonist as a pretty boy who hides behind women. If the male protagonist slaps him in the face, it can achieve the effect that Ye Yuan originally wanted to save the sect.

Boss opening a new vest? This force is by no means ordinary!

The protagonist doesn't seem to be in a hurry at all. He doesn't focus on strengthening his weakest skills, but when it comes to the critical point, it all depends on fate. Knowing that there was a big cause and effect on him, he ignored everything and was completely pushed by the plot to do things. Women are superior to men + the weak can eat the strong + both humans and monsters exist, brother! Does the protagonist have any ideas at this time that still need to be promoted by the plot to appear "logical"? I won't go into details about the bugs in the plot. Anyway, that's what happened. The male protagonist suffered. From the beginning to the end, he was raped even when he entered the clan. So what did the male protagonist think? Hey ~ my sister said! To be honest, I wasn't impressed by the cool arrangement. After dozens of chapters, the male protagonist started practicing Qi and building a foundation. I was completely focused on the logic of the marriage between extreme feminism and extreme patriarchy. What did the gods on both sides want to do? The male protagonist finally realized that "only when you stand out can you complete the task better", which made me feel numb. The modern secret realm has such a good climax and a killing stage, but in the end the male protagonist is still a weakling, and most of the mistakes will be made by relying on the rules. Isn't this really overwhelming? What's so cool about this approach? Going one step further, with the female characters appearing today, if the author focuses on falling in love, I can't even imagine how the story will develop in the future.

Don't care what others say, write what you want to write, confident people are the most beautiful, come on! 👍

It's quite good, but the title and introduction are too plain. Don't you think about changing it?

It feels like I've finished all the roles. What's this?

It's very well written. It's definitely the vest of some big shot.

It's so embarrassing to read, it's a fairy tale novel

The plot is okay, but there is a heroine whose character I really don't like, I hate it very much.

Women can be beaten, but they are the kind of mean women who violate your bottom line and deliberately disgust you. They can be beaten. They can be beaten to death, but normal women cannot be beaten.

Will my visa be rejected because of gender issues? . . . .

The setting and writing are both good, keep it up

Author, can you continue writing? My writing is obviously getting better and better, but it's a pity that there is no traffic.