My Sister Is the Leader of the Demon Cult

It's so poisonous that I really regret not reading the book review

I like the subject matter and setting of this book very much, but the look and feel of it is very bad because the writing is too verbal and the author's lack of writing skills leads to a failure in character creation. The most obvious thing about the procrastination of writing is that in almost every long conversation, it is obviously the same person talking. The previous paragraph has just been written [So-and-so quickly grabbed him and said "..."], And at the beginning of the next paragraph, it is obviously the same person, but the author still has to write it again [So-and-so quickly said "..."]. It often happens that even the attributive is not changed. It's so weird There is also the psychological description of the characters. The plot obviously does not advance much, but the same psychological activities are written over and over again. Why is it necessary? I can't think of any other reason other than the word count As for the protagonist, it's obvious that he can create a particularly good model, but the author's Chen Qingshan has no personality charm. All decisions were driven by the overall situation. He was cowardly, indecisive, and completely incapable of logic. All the so-called strategies were all due to cheating and reading the script without any thinking of his own. If he were not a time traveler, his ending would not be much better than the original. And from the beginning to now, there is absolutely no growth arc at all. He is not at all the kind of anti-heroic character who refuses to grow up, like Shinji Ikari. You, the author, don't mean artistic expression, right? You should also know that what you write is enjoyable, right? And in my opinion, the biggest attraction and selling point of this book is my sister. A demon sect leader who can read minds and is not his own sister, and a young master who is hated by his sister but nobody else knows that one person is better than ten thousand people. There are obviously many games and growth lines that can be shaped. I initially thought that through the protagonist's dream ability and the leader's mind reading, the two constantly tested each other, understood each other, and resolved their old resentments until they became connected. As a result, the author completely wasted such a good setting. Alas, in short, this book is really tasteless and a pity to discard. I obviously don't want to waste time and effort writing this paragraph. The main reason is that there is a person below who keeps slandering the author. I don't know if the author is a trumped-up person or if he really hasn't read any good books. I can only say that it is not without reason that so many people criticize it. It shows that everyone has basic aesthetics and judgments about the quality of works. I continue to subscribe just because I don't want to waste the sunk cost I've invested, so I'll just see it through to the end.

Good news, five chapters have been updated, bad news, it's all water Even if there is a main plot of escaping from the devil's sect during the time of the demon sect, female characters with plot lines such as Lin Qingqing and Liu Yao can also be watched. What is the content of the 50 chapters after the escape? The only interesting thing is how to find the protagonist to enter and leave the village. The two new characters have no memory points except that the protagonist of the game occupies the ecological niche of the daughter. There are no previous ones. Liu Yao's idea of heart-pounding action is here. Let's take the logical base of Jinghu first and then talk about whether intuition will die. The protagonist is always charming. As for the slightly controversial witch, it's not that she can't die, or you can write the story in a happy and satisfying way and write her to death on the spot. It's no problem to put it in the background and be chased and killed. It's not impossible to kill her if you really have the idea, but it's not impossible to die in the plot. But the death is inexplicable in the plot. It's not good to suppress first and then suppress. The protagonist even had no idea before taking action. This kind of character who is obviously on the side of the road either has a background or needs to be written in depth. Whether this character is useful to the plot or to shaping the character will have to be discussed in two chapters.

Chen Qingshan, the protagonist, is so useless that he can be stabbed with a sword. Although it is said to create distance for the plot, there are two different perceptions: suppressing with strength and suffering after being stabbed. Even if he is to be defeated, there are two different perceptions. He also said that it is irresponsible for my sister to bet the chips, so is it also irresponsible for your protagonist to relax and be paralyzed when he has no strength? Although I don't want to say it again, this protagonist has no charm and even looks green tea.

? Written by a poet after Chapter 400?

The writing style is too clumsy. Things that can be explained clearly in one sentence are repeated over and over again in one chapter.

This is my recharge record. There are too many fake people in the comment area. I have two mobile phones. The one I left at home recently. I used the other phone to subscribe. I didn't want to respond. I found that many people like to control others. I think good works should not be hacked like this. I like this book very much. I don't understand. I am just expressing my opinion. Why are some people hacking me? Don't read a book with such low quality.

The characters are well drawn, the plot is well connected, and the writing is wonderful. Good luck to the author. Don't give up. All my monthly recommended tickets are given to you. 🤭🤭🤭 I haven't read such a good book in a long time

I have read Chapter 159 so far, and there are some problems. First, the rhythm is a bit messed up. Second, although it has been patched, the characters are very dry. Although it is difficult to substitute when writing in the third person, the overall character changes are almost rigid. I also saw what the author said when he put it on the shelf. I hope your writing progress will be better and that it can also promote changes in your life.

Doesn't anyone think it's strange? Why is this book circle all discussing the book "Sister is the Leader of the Demon Cult"?

I hope the author will take a look at it. I read it in one day and saw more than 200 chapters. Whether it is the game plot or the real experience after time travel, it is already confirmed that the sister wants the protagonist to die, and she squeezes him to death. She pushes the protagonist into danger with all her strength. The protagonist does not even have the ability to escape. If there is no golden finger, he will be robbed by four monks and he will be dead! This is not your sister, this is your enemy who wants to kill you. In reality, ordinary people will hate when they are bullied, but you don't hate someone who wants to kill you? So far, the protagonist has no intention of revenge at all. This really makes me frustrated to death. It is completely divorced from human logic. To the time traveler, she is just a strange woman who wants you to die, and you are not the original person! ! ! As for my sister's hidden secret? Now that I have written this, I have been killed by my sister several times without Goldfinger! The readers are eager to execute the sister in a hurry. If she washes it, the disgust will be transferred to the author. To be honest, it is better to kill each other. The sister wants the younger brother to die, and the younger brother wants the sister to die. In this way, the reader will at least feel happy reading, have expectations and not feel aggrieved, and even want to see how the author will do it! I'm really frustrated right now! That kind of story where you are only being persecuted by your sister (a strange woman), there is no message from God, and the protagonist can't even have the desire for revenge. Damn it, I really want to curse! Summary: The author's writing style is very suitable to my taste, very sophisticated, but the protagonist lacks human logic (you are the author, write according to the subsequent plot, consider the plot and forget the human logic, but the reader is the protagonist, there is a strange woman who wants to kill me, she wants my fat life, who is she, even if a dog is almost killed, she will jump over the wall!)

This is my first post after reading it for so many years. The early part of this book is barely readable, but the later part is just a big turd! Be cautious if you want to read a book

You probably don't have an outline, which is fatal to your book. Because your protagonist is not likable, you cannot write a likable protagonist at this stage. In addition, although this book has a high-level martial arts background, your description of combat is particularly rubbish. In other words, the point that you can attract readers is the plot. Without the plot, the book will have no other interesting points, and your arrangement is that the plot keeps reversing. But after reading this, many readers have begun to get tired of it, because the many twists and turns are not new, but instead numb people's sensory stimulation. This requires you to give greater stimulation every time you reverse, but this is impossible, so sooner or later it will collapse. Judging from the current situation, this book can still be saved, but I'm not sure whether it can be saved based on your level. Your protagonist can no longer be passively beaten. He must have his own ideas, take the initiative to do something, and have a very clear goal. If you follow your original plan and have the protagonist buy jade and then be passively involved in some incident, then the book will probably be useless, and there will probably be a bigger rhythm waiting for you. To be honest, the first 100 chapters of this book were pretty good. At the beginning, it was reasonable to be in a desperate situation and be passive everywhere. But it is different now. Now he is semi-free, and the characteristics of the protagonist are revealed. I am afraid that you will use yourself as the protagonist. To put it bluntly, your own character is not worthy of being the protagonist of this book even if it is cheating. You are just a mediocre ordinary person with no outstanding shining points. The protagonist of this book must at least be recognized in some aspect, otherwise it will not be able to support the plot at all. In short, there is an urgent need for a reasonable turning point so that the protagonist can look like a protagonist. We also urgently need a reasonable main line to give the book an overall framework, otherwise it will be ruined after another 100 chapters.

I don't know what the author's thinking is. Looking at it now, the author feels that he prefers to maximize the atmosphere elements without giving a real plot climax, which is a bit strange🤔

I wonder how this demon sect survives. There are so many masters of the ten realms. Anyone who comes to the demon sect is a ten realm. But the demon sect has just broken through the ten realms. When it was not in the ten realms before, it should not be kicked to death by others. It takes up so many resources but does not have the corresponding strength. It is simply inexplicable.

It's so disgusting. He is worthy of being the author's own son, and he is a gift to his daughter in all kinds of ways! The protagonist is too ordinary!

If you want to make yourself unhappy, you can continue reading below. Guaranteed you spend money to buy discomfort. Hehe. This article about the Demon Queen really hurt me, it was so rubbish. Such rubbish. Rubbish

Run quickly, it's shit 🥵

I can't stand this book until I pretend to die. First, if the protagonist wants to hide from the world, then don't take the initiative to cause trouble, such as Wolongsheng or the like, he doesn't have the ability! Secondly, the combat power system in this book is very confusing. If the levels are not differentiated, there is no sense of upgrading. Third, the protagonist wants to establish power, but he does not have the personality charm to establish power, nor does he have the strength of force, and he does not want to rely on a big power. If he is in a big power, he will definitely be used by others. If he is not used, he will be a worthless person. All in all, this protagonist wants to make decisions but not make decisions, wants goals but not goals, and his charisma is so bad that I can't stand it anymore!

At the beginning, there were some places where I could bear it. I saw that the protagonist felt aggrieved at times but I endured it. When I saw someone trying to cause trouble in Chapter 400, I endured it. Anyway, there must be such a plot. When I saw Chapter 407, I finally got poisoned and died... I advise you not to waste your time and subscribe!

It's a brainless and enjoyable article. You can read it without putting your mind behind it. However, there are certain plots that made my brain return. The author should pay attention to it.

The character of the protagonist is really unpleasant. When you first come to this world, you don't want to cause trouble, you want to be stubborn, and you have smooth plans. But this has been hundreds of chapters, and you have experienced a lot. It's boring to be a passive and cowardly little boy. If you really practice ruthlessness, you treat everyone you meet in this world as paper people...

After seeing the latest version in one day, I feel that there are advantages, but the disadvantages are becoming increasingly difficult to ignore. Let's talk about the good points first: the characters have delicate emotions, growth, and character arcs. The plot is not old-fashioned, and the system has no plot interaction. It is only used to add combat power and cheats to the male protagonist, and uses the identity of the time traveler to create an information gap to promote the plot. As a time traveler, the male protagonist has a growth trajectory, and his thoughts change without being rigid. Then let's talk about the points worth complaining about: First, the story is dry. In fact, it can be seen that the author had two lines in mind when he conceived it. One is the plot of the world before the male protagonist came, and the other is the plot of the world after the male protagonist travels through time. The problem lies here. The male protagonist skipped a lot of plots through some means. As a result, the plot after a lot of thinking was brought to the original text and there was nothing to write about, and it became pure information. When you see the second half, you will feel that it is more everyday, that is, a big parallel import. Second, the sensational part is too strong. The male protagonist is an innocent virgin who has never been in love. After time travel, he suddenly transforms into a lover. I don't know how you changed. Third, with more than one million words, the sister in the title is basically a soy sauce character, and her brain is not online. She knows clearly that her brother has been replaced by a fake, and she doesn't even bother to check, so how dare you believe it? The entire emotional exchange is about a male protagonist running into her dream to go shopping, and then her sister is dead set? Fourth, you went to the desert and specially wrote a Dragon Gate Inn-style scene. The key is that you didn't use it. A group of people went to the inn, and nothing happened, so they let the male protagonist have a hard time and then flirt with the new female costar? Then why did you write this kind of secret room scene to whet your appetite? In general, it was acceptable at first glance, but the more I read, the more I felt that the author couldn't continue writing, and it was difficult to follow it any further. Brothers who only read the free chapters can give it a try and see what the comments behind it are like before considering whether to subscribe.

I've read more than 200 chapters, and the main character is so frustrated that he's almost level 70 and still looks like a loser. He doesn't say what realm the level corresponds to. He's being dragged around like a corpse🤢. It's so disgusting.

My sister has been cheating on her brother for a long time, and she looks like the protagonist.

I'm curious to ask how many brothers wanted to complain, but found that the fan value was not enough, so they voted for monthly votes, and then complained again 🙂

I couldn't stand it anymore. Chapter 407 died of poison. The author's treatment really made me sick. Not to mention that the protagonist spent nearly two hundred chapters to escape from fake death and was casually recognized by one person after another. You just exploded, didn't your previous efforts to fake death all go to waste? In order to force the plot to return to the demon sect, you can think of any kind of blunt plot, right? I'm going to get married here by force. I won't let you have an easy time. I won't let you get married. You have to help me push the progress of the other line. That system is useless. The protagonists are not jumping up and down when they are recognized one by one. I just write whatever comes to my mind. I find something is wrong, so I rush to make a patch without using it. It's just a disgusting reader.

What does it mean? It was determined to be death by explosion. So what if you read it for free in the past, but it's a lot of work in the back ⦁֊⦁꧞The chapters on the shelves are not explosive, the plot is back and forth, and the heroine has been written one after another in the 370,000-word novel. Even someone like me who has few subscriptions can be ranked hundreds of times among book friends. It's really a place where I live in Bengbu.

Forget it, it was watery before it was released. After six chapters, it's still watery. Look at how much information there is in these six chapters. The recognition of brother and sister has been foreshadowed for more than ten chapters, but the result is so bland. There are also restrictions on speaking in the comment area, requiring 100 fan points, and only 6 chapters will be available.

Author, I started writing for AI from Chapter 130. AI seems to write better than you. How about you try combining it with AI?