My Abyss Survival Log

Having read 60 chapters, I feel the characters in the plot can only be described as inexplicable. I won't say more, but I hope the author can polish the character development and the overall plot. I do quite like the theme, though.

I just don't understand, why did you have to make the protagonist collect that piece of jerky, the evidence of the crime? He could have just taken it, dropped it, and run away. Why did you have to make him carry the jerky around?

The new book release period is very important for authors, please, readers! 😭

1. First, let's talk about the plot. Personally, I feel the pacing is too fast, and the transitions are too abrupt. A fast-paced plot makes the character portrayals feel flat and mechanical, or rather, the plot is too dry and lacks substance, leaving the reader feeling suffocated.

Hmm... The description reminded me of Made in the Abyss, claypot rice 😍

The description looks good, I'll give it a try.

The fast-paced plot and constant stream of exciting moments are truly excellent. The protagonist arrives in the abyss as a sinner, hunts monsters to gain abilities, and explores the unknown. The plot feels incredibly vivid, almost like it could be adapted into a manga (mainly because the content has a dark, gritty feel, and the monsters and settings are similar to series like Berserk, etc.).

It seems to have the potential to become a miraculous herb, but the quantity is currently too small; perhaps a half-step miraculous herb?

My current impression is that it's like another world of Warhammer.

Putting everything else aside, this introduction is very appealing.