At Mount Hua, I Got Prismatic Traits from the Start
人在华山，开局获得棱彩词条
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- 763k Words
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- Myriad Worlds
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- 28d ago
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I just saw Chapter 3, has it become a mixed martial arts? If you don't rush to the street, who will? I have been reading novels for 18 years and have read almost 10,000 novels of various sizes. How many of them are about mixed martial arts? Not a single one! 🙂
I don't know what to think, since we already have a system, why do we still need to become a disciple of the Huashan Sect? Just walk around and get the entry, then run to get Beiming Shen Gong and Lingbo Weibu. Wouldn't it be better to teach you for a while before Wu Yazi teaches you the skills? If you say that you must become a disciple, wouldn't it be better for you to become a disciple of big men like Wu Yazi and Zhang Sanfeng? Why worship Yue Buqun? What can Yue Buqun teach you?
The plot jumps too much, the character stories are quite bland, and there are a lot of typos.
Mixed martial arts! A road destined to a bad end
It's a very stereotypical mixed martial arts, and everyone is a stereotype.
Brothers, this is about mixed martial arts. If you don't like it, you can ask me to quit.
It's just a teddy that has traveled through time and is nothing. The author is just enjoying himself. Selfish, capricious, petty. Even licking is strong.
... Forget there are too many typos, all the characters are written like idiots
It was written too quickly, updated too quickly, and there was no story. Just a running account.
To put it bluntly, novels are about writing stories. What you write is not a story, but a running account. You just level up. Go find enemies and fight them, then level up. What about the story? What about characterization? What about story foreshadowing? Almost none. Your routine should serve the story. You're putting the cart before the horse. The little story you have is all for the protagonist to level up quickly. There's no logic anymore. How many entries do you have? With more than a year of internal strength, he defeated the master Ouyang Feng. Each entry you make can increase your combat power 10 times. So how do you write it later?
The book is very good, the Huashan stage is very good, but the journey down the mountain is not good and it is not a book about Huan.