Real Tiger

I hope the author won't write monsters as human beings' good friends again.

Change your name. Tiger

It's okay. The real beast style is a little green, but it's much better than many lottery panels. If you keep it up, it may not become a high-quality product.

There were a lot of illogical points in the front, and the way it was written was like AI. But now that I look at it, it's like, good guy, it's time to put it on the shelves.

Tigers don't eat humans, so they can't eat animals like rabid dogs? How many gods in the sky don't eat humans? Monsters don't even dare to eat humans and yet they want to become immortals? Heaven does not need such a cowardly immortal

The writing is overly stiff and rigid, and it basically follows wherever the tiger goes. Inexplicably, I entered a cave and started reading a lot of poems, and then I started to understand them, but in the end I didn't learn them. Talking about writing tiger, he is actually a savage

It's not bad. It's just that some places are not particularly rigorous in writing and are a bit inconsistent. But it's still readable. I hope the author will read it carefully when writing.

There are many inconsistencies. The author especially likes to fight between the left and right brains.

I was convinced. At first glance, I thought the profile mentioned Tiger and White Tiger... I almost thought I had entered the wrong platform 🙂

Literary youth, sometimes sentimental

Yes, the protagonist of the story about alien beasts must be an alien beast.

It's good to watch, the plot is not cliché, and it's a real beast.

The writing is actually quite interesting. I feel like the vest of the old author.

Where is Shennong? Can pig's feet make good friends with people?

Gone? Is this cut?

Let me lean on it and do it this way.

Let's just say, haha, you can add a few words to the scene of escaping, going up the mountain, and the officers and soldiers coming out. It's so smooth... Are you waiting to be caught?

It looks good. If you want to be a tiger, you will be a tiger. You will kill decisively. There is no common problem with exotic beasts. If you change it, you will kill people

Very well written, vote for it

The overall style is okay, it has a bit of a monster feel, but the logic is inconsistent in some places. I will make some corrections later. I hope the writing will get better and better. Also, when changing the map, the enemies level up too quickly. If you pull any one, they will be monsters.

This is the name 🙂

I don't want to write about tigers anymore, I want to take away the tiger's body.

On the first day of time travel, Shen Shen had the eighteenth bowl of black blood pills in front of him. Drink, die; don't drink, die now. He chose the third way and asked Zhao Xiaoliu next door to die for him. ...... Shen Shen became the container of "The Record of Stolen Life". This thing is not a golden finger, it is a reminder. Every time someone dies for him, that person's memories, obsessions, and even the girl he has a crush on will be poured into his mind. Borrow one life, and you will have one more tenant. If you borrow too much, you won't even be able to pay your own rent. In the consumables area, human life is a consumable. Drinking elixirs to death in the drugstore, cleaning the blood pool and being torn apart by fighting spirits, and blocking two hundred people in the thunder pool, twenty of them survived. Shen Shen went from being a handyman in a drugstore to becoming the scapegoat "C-Seventy-Three" and then becoming a monster in the puppet palace. The more he fears death, the more he borrows life; the more he borrows life, the less like himself he becomes. He began to speak with Zhao Xiaoliu's native accent, looked at the girl with Zhou Yuan's eyes, and gnawed at the soul with the greed of a fighting spirit. When looking in the mirror, the smile of the person in the mirror will be delayed by half a beat. This is the habit of a certain dead person. Until one day, he dug out a stone slab at the bottom of the blood pool. It is engraved with his real name before time travel: "Shen Shen, don't believe in the way of heaven." ... This is the story of a man who cherishes his life extremely. In order to live, he has to live as a group of people. "Fate is that you can only die by yourself, and you cannot let others die for you." But he has already died countless times.

I recommend the updated novel "Eternal Life: Step by Step to Immortality", which has a positive outlook on life, a smooth plot, and a grand world view. No traffic, please support me, thank you! 🙏