
Swallowed Star: I, Babata's New Master
吞噬星空:我,巴巴塔的新主人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 897k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 11d ago
- English
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310Chapters
9Monthly votes
5.4kRecommendations
13.7kFans
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I read a time-travel novel, but I didn't know the plot. Isn't this just a local novel?
The protagonist is a transmigrator who has never read the original novel; he can be considered a native.
The book club community is really chaotic.
How can you recruit Xu Xin one minute? How can you write multiple female protagonists in Swallowed Star? If you don't like watching too many female leads, just leave. The character list clearly states it, but some people seem to be blind. I found it quite novel; after all, I've never seen a multi-female lead story based on *Swallowed Star* before.
Please, please take a look!
Since the author doesn't delete negative reviews and accepts criticism, and you've already come to the book review section, why don't you take a look? People have a hundred different flavors, each with its own unique characteristics. Perhaps, I mean maybe, this book can be considered a worthwhile read for you. Thank you
Two points
I'll say two things; you can decide for yourselves whether to watch or not. 1. The protagonist is a transmigrator who hasn't read the original novel, so he's more like a native than a native himself. 2. Not only did they steal Luo Feng's opportunity, they also didn't spare Xu Xin.
It's absolutely garbage. First, the protagonist of this book is a time traveler whose fate is completely unknown, so what is the point of writing about time travel? Secondly, this is fan fiction based on an anime, and anime is already heavily modified, so this book is even more heavily modified. Third, they have no knowledge of the original text's structure and rely solely on searches or AI.
I don't even bother looking at free piles of poop; clicking on them is just a waste of time.
No wonder nobody watches.
The transmigrator doesn't know the plot or which world they're going to? Then why write fanfiction? Wouldn't it be better to create an original world? A wasteland or a supernatural world wouldn't work? Even if a transmigrator in fanfiction doesn't know the whole plot, they should at least know which world they're in and who the original protagonist is. They should know some basic plot details, right? With your cluelessness, no wonder nobody reads your work.
Explanation of the protagonist.
Many readers are puzzled as to why the protagonist, as a time traveler, has not read the original work and therefore lacks the advantage of knowing the plot beforehand. But... The protagonist doesn't know, the readers do, and the author of this book does too. Most importantly.
Less preaching and more interaction with the female lead—I'll give you a monthly vote as encouragement.
Haven't you noticed that you keep repeating the same things you've said countless times? As a character with multiple female leads, there's very little description or interaction with the female lead. Every time you describe the female lead's interactions, you flip through a page or two and suddenly find yourself jumping to another scene. You're interacting with the female lead, and then you're immediately interrupted. You have no idea what you did or what you were doing.