The Water Margin in America

To pour cold water on it, I feel that the antique style of writing is not able to support readers for long periods of reading, and the theme of American magic cultivators does not feel like it can squeeze out much new water. I still like the author's first book very much, please keep up the good work.

Write back the urban novels you are good at and make an outline

I've started a new book~ Have you finished writing the outline this time? Don't be like the last book that suddenly exploded Come on

I'm on the verge of death omo. I feel that this book's poor performance is because it missed the limelight and the plot didn't have something that everyone wanted to see. Now Liangshan's set has long been criticized, and the character description is also... Very popular. After all, it is a modern setting, isn't it? The character creation is not as good as the previous two books. It is too separated from the world view. Even Dou Po only mentions the background. And the author has perfectly avoided possible explosive points, not to mention the relatively smooth emotional line in the first book (maybe it was borrowed from it?) And the more awkward emotional line in the second book (maybe some people like it?). How could anyone want to see an urban soldier king (who is also a cultivator anyway) and a group of old people over thirty? Men who sell brotherhood... Are simply more youthful and Dangerous than Young and Dangerous The so-called joy of this book is that the fighting descriptions like the Invincible Tramp and the recruitment and development like the Dark Dungeon are incompatible with the author's comfort zone in the city. TJ can only say that it is a pity, but it is also expected. Also, regardless of whether vinegar is good or not, at least boil the dumplings before putting them in... Adding vinegar from beginning to end is not as good as making a short video on Rui Station with an ancient style DJ. The author will make more money than this novel.

Why have you changed? Writing about America is okay after all, it is popular now, but writing about Water Margin fan fiction is too niche, not as good as Three Kingdoms and Journey to the West.

Looking at the title and introduction of this book, I feel like I want a G

😍New book! Good

Come on, big brother who wrote about Chen Entropy