Han Clan Fairy Clan: I Have a Hundred Times Gas Collecting Bottle

I have been reading this book for several days. Let me talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this book. Disadvantages: First of all, the plot is very slow. Goldfinger only appears in more than ten chapters. Usually there are hints within three chapters. The plot and details before returning to the family did not need to be described in so many words, which led to the delay in the appearance of Goldfinger. (You can really feel that it is a new author here) Secondly, the plot is very flat. I don't know whether it is a problem with the author's writing skills or a problem with the plot setting. It just feels flat. The characters are also very flat and have no distinctive features. Then, the protagonist cultivates the Tao of Convincing Qi and Nurturing Nature, but it fails to hint that the protagonist Dao Hui is any powerful. After all, this cannot be cultivated with Qi. Mediocre points: The Taoism practiced by the protagonist is the Five Elements and Water Virtues. Among the novels of the Xuanjian system, it is really unmemorable and has no new ideas. It cannot be different from the ordinary people who follow the Five Spiritual Roots. After all, the recent Xuanjian system books also have five elements, and the plot rhythm is better than this book. Originally, revising other interesting orthodox traditions would bring a lot of new ideas. Advantages: At least it is the Xuanjian system, so I try to give suggestions and encouragement as much as possible.

I suggest changing the title of the book. Although this title is concise and clear, it feels a bit short and easy to write off. Anyway, I feel that the current results do not match the content, and it may not be pushed to the people who want to read it. Those books that are not even logically consistent have better results than you. I vote 2 and you go for it.

It doesn't look good. It's not that there's anything wrong with the writing, it's just that the content is boring.

Let's take care of it now. I'll update it again in July. I really don't have time.

I haven't written anything for a long time. It's not very useful.

Be careful to catch a cold in the library😋 In addition, the author's coding speed needs to be improved

Not updated yet? The author is great

In the new book issue, reading rate and collection are very important. I hope everyone who supports can scroll to the last page. Thank you and wish everyone good health (ʘᴗʘ✿)

The writing is good, but the progress is too slow. I am 30 years old and at the fourth level of Qi Refining.

I like the rhythm, it's smooth and slow, getting better and better, I like it very much

I haven't found such a good-looking family novel in a long time. I hope the author can speed up the update.

Not bad👍, more updates, but now there are too few updates in a day, not enough to watch

Next time you write a book, write the names of pig's feet in a more popular way. After reading Chapter 60, I can't even remember the names of pig's feet.

I'm out today and tomorrow, so I don't have time to update. I'll update three times a day next week.

It's a very nice novel. Kudos to the author.

I haven't been talking about Li Zong all the time. I've been talking about it for seven or eight times.

No more updates since the holiday? The author is great

It's not bad. The pace just needs to be sped up, especially the group portraits, which are already slow to develop. Most of the same types are stuck in Zifu for so long. Actually, it's not a big deal to speed up the Qi and foundation building. Otherwise, it would be quite annoying to keep guessing and guessing for the Riddler.

What about today's update? The author is great

What about today's update? The author is great

Dear author, haven't you updated yet? ? ? ?

Is it still available today? Didn't he say there would be more updates?

I picked the wrong time to open this book. I'll be busy for now and will resume next Monday. There may also be fluctuations in June. I will make up for it all during the summer vacation.

The new extra chapter has a description of Jin Dan, you can learn from it

I forgot about this week's practice week. There are so many classes and the day is full. Chapter three is still a bit too strenuous. (T_T). The QQ book club group is here, 1080315364 If you are interested, you can add it to discuss the plot and other topics