Simulator: Start by Choosing a Cheat

The protagonist in the simulation is different from the real protagonist and has an independent will. This is a big mistake.

What are you writing about? It seems inexplicable?

About Tomie's setting: Tomie is the "blood daughter" written by Junji Ito and has the ability to be immortal. In some series, the ashes can be turned into Tomie, the ashes can run out of the cement, and they can charm people when frozen. They will receive a certain degree of charm regardless of gender, but Tomie is a passive skill for male charm, and an active skill for female charm. Tomie can split and parasitize other bodies, similar to mycelium to control people, and the child born is also another Tomie. Ito Junji gave two weaknesses, that is, Tomie will be cremated and Tomie will kill each other, but he was so excited that he always forgot this setting. Anyway, the ashes can still become Tomie again, and the cannibalism will give birth to more Tomies. There is even a series where Tomie can come to reality from a person's fantasy. This is one of the scariest places.

This book is what I want so much. I self-righteously designed a set of multi-archive settings, including pig raising files, pathfinding files, background files, kill files, rescue files, live files, dead files, locked files, and multi-file linkage settings. I also designed a set of my own Nine Heavens Realm, and also designed a set of Magatama Realm for Onmyoji, and also wrote about the timeline issue. I also wanted to sew the novel to be the first world. Although the stitching techniques were more proficient than the previous book, I also created a set of world views in a self-righteous manner. In the end, I wanted to capture too many things, and ended up forgetting that telling a good story is the most important thing. I not only wanted to write a cool novel to win the public, but also wanted to satisfy my own niche hobby. I constantly want to build scaffolding and have thought of many ways. Timeline cognition uses events to establish connections. When switching archives, add the characteristics of the archive as a mark to distinguish the changes between the three archives. When switching between the simulator and outside the simulation, I write a separate line of "continue simulation" to establish cognition. There are also end-of-chapter notes for every five chapters. The result is what it is now, haha, I wanted too much and ended up getting nothing. Many brothers sent me long articles to give me their suggestions and feelings after reading them. I could feel it and was very moved. Those who were willing to write long articles, including "hating iron that cannot become steel" and "understanding", made me cry for a long time, feeling that I had failed them. In short, I have a lot of feelings. Please keep writing this book. Even if it is written like a stream of consciousness, I don't care anymore.

This book looks a bit confusing, but after understanding it, it is actually a game of left foot stepping on right foot. Only "Ghost" is the protagonist, and the others are just the protagonists of the game who open a save file to play. It can be understood as "my simulator game has come true". However, the author also mainly added multi-person archives in this book. The left foot steps on the right foot, and the files can be switched to each other, so it seems a bit messy. It can be understood if you bring in ghosts. But bringing in these archived characters is a bit messy. Maybe the author didn't write it clearly? The author can make these three protagonists look like faces. Although the facial expression is said to be poor, the main distinction is still very useful. Of course, I don't mean to teach the author how to write a book. This is just my impression after reading it. We are not teaching authors to write books. Authors can write whatever they want.

If you forcefully write two protagonists out of one, you are also a talent. Anyway, I don't like it at all

It feels like a schizophrenic dual personality

In addition to the good simulator and world view settings, there are many problems. Here are just the most serious ones: This book essentially has multiple protagonists, and I personally don't like multiple protagonists. Since the main perspective is given to the ghost, the protagonist of the entire story should only be the ghost. However, the protagonist outside the simulation (ghost) and the protagonist in the simulation are not the same person. The simulation is not controlled by the ghost, and the ghost needs to spend points to influence the protagonist in the simulation. The setting of the ghost is also problematic. The author is likely to set the ghost as a mutilated soul, and this mutilation is not the blood bar in some novels that has been reduced and has no effect, but has other effects. This kind of setting is easy for the author to use this as a reason to give the protagonist wisdom. The most common thing is that after the protagonist recovers in the later period, the personality of the character changes, and this change is often in the direction of the wisdom of the Virgin Mary. (This is not meant to slander the author, but most people who write about this kind of setting will often have this situation. I hope the author will not have this situation) I suggest the author read Ka Puding's "Proving the Way and Transcendence from Simulation". The theme is similar, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch.

It hurts my head to look at it, two protagonists, two lines, some things still have the same name, topsy-turvy

You only write about the simulator, and the writing is a bit messy. There will be no results if you write like this.

There is currently no accurate timeline for the perspective. It often happens when other simulated characters discover that something from another worldview has come out, and then write 000 to exchange for something or something that causes something in that worldview to appear, including the time traveler who suddenly appeared when I was writing about the 000 perspective. Then after a few chapters, I create the character 001, and start writing about the 001 perspective again. It's a bit tiring to watch.

When I read Chapter 33, I thought it was quite interesting, but the author kept adding settings in a world, overlapping world views, and it looked chaotic. There are other things such as: 1. The protagonist is one person, but putting clones who don't know each other and have memory loss into the same world is equivalent to writing three protagonists at the same time, and it becomes similar to a group portrait. Settings such as archives, saves, rewinds, dungeon experiences, etc. Have resulted in a very confusing timeline. I can barely accept the above two points and can read on, but the constant stacking of world views is a bit unacceptable. In the entertainment world, there is Tomie, Inuyasha, Dragon Clan in Chapter 32, and the name of Chapter 33 is Warring States. It is too tiring to watch, no matter how good your writing is, I can't accept it.

I can't understand it but it feels very powerful.

I think the book review is right, but I can't understand it either.

It's so messy, especially when playing on an emulator is a drag on me.

So I have a collection of your old books? I have to catch up on the new book, come on!

It's okay, but the settings of the simulator are too vague, and it's hard to understand a lot of things. What are the internal and external points of the simulator, the use of xxx points once, time recovery/time, it makes my head hurt to see it, who cares about these settings that say it is important or not, and it is not important! These are just tacks on. What readers want to see is the protagonist's performance, behavior, and whether he is having fun. The cheat data is actually not that important. After reading more, I can understand it, but at first I was really confused. It is better not to write so carefully. Just say in one sentence, what conditions are required to use a certain function, how many points, how many points you have now, whether you can use it or not. This is straightforward and reasonable. Readers really don't care about your obsessive-compulsive points, settings, etc. After all, not many people will specially remember these data.

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I can understand it, but my head hurts a little bit from reading it, so I'll just take care of it for now.

It made me confused. It was really difficult to sort out what the author wrote and make me brainstorm.

It's such a mess, I can't figure out the lines

The multi-world theme is very important for world selection, and there is nothing I can see about the current world view in the introduction. As for the worlds involved in the future, there are some that I have never heard of, and some of the worlds I have heard of are very general 🙂 Although this is just my opinion, it can represent some people, which proves that there is a problem with some of the worlds chosen.

It's too confusing. You should at least let readers know what story you are telling. To be honest, we don't have the time to sort out the plot. We would rather spend this time looking for other books.

There is Oriental Fantasyland. The queen of outsourcing. A gift from heaven. Story series. Doraemon. Doctor Who. Fictional reasoning. These?

Mysterious resurgence, Lord of Mysteries, Da Feng's watchman

I've been busy with three updates in the past two days, so I haven't read many comments. I'm sorry. I have a general understanding. In fact, it is an old problem, the sense of substitution (not as good as Jiujiu Liu), and the perspective problem. In fact, I have plans to unify them. I want to wait until archive 003 is locked (that is, the archive upstream of the timeline is dead and cannot be revived because it is locked by the downstream archive). Then I will write about the issue of unification. There is also the perspective. When you watch it from one perspective, you will feel immersed in it. If you split it, you will feel torn. I have thought of several mechanisms. The first one is that you can spend points to temporarily unify the game. The second one is the locked archives, which can be extracted directly. In other words, I will try my best to control the number of archives to no more than three, so as to avoid confusion when everyone forgets the plot after a long time.

Is there any XiuChat? I've almost never seen anyone come to XiuChat.

It's too messy. Why don't you write more words? Slow down.

I have seen everyone's comments and tried my best to reply to them one by one. This book will not delete negative comments. As long as the language is not abusive, I will not delete it. If there are comments with suggestions, I will answer them in as much detail as possible. I will not criticize them. There are indeed some questions in this book, and I will answer them here. 1. Person issue: You can think of "you" in the simulator as a person's name. I considered that each archive cannot have the same name, so I used the name "you" to reduce the amount of memory. 2. Points problem: There are now two sets of points, one is the simulator points and the other is the Fangting points. The former is the points of the ghost, and the latter is the points of the 000 Yang Qi. In the future, if there are more cheats, they will be distinguished by the cheat name + points. 3. Regarding whether to use AI: I typed it by hand, and the writer assistant has records in the background. The specific arguments can be seen in the first chapter. I did not delete the comments. 4. Regarding the confusion of the timeline: I have made adjustments. I think it is not because the time is not wrong. I looked carefully and it is generally OK, but because events are not used to establish time awareness, which has been modified in the previous article. 5. Regarding the incomprehensible problem, I will write all the settings into informal chapters in the future. Multi-level simulation will definitely not be suitable for me. After all, it is my newly created subdivision genre (probably). 6. Plot problem: The three levels will converge, don't worry. 7. The problem of stitching: I am an old stitcher, so don't worry. If I didn't stitch a few this time, I definitely won't be able to jump. The last book took dozens of stitches before it collapsed. If you have any more questions, you can add them and I will answer them one by one.

The author intends to write a book carefully, and I understand this. Everyone has different ideas about writing books. Most authors write books so that others can understand them, so as to gain readers' economic benefits and escape poverty. The author of this book is obviously from a wealthy family. He just wanted to express his imagination when he wrote the book. He didn't care whether people could understand it or whether they were tired from reading it. The author's idea is that he wants to set up a power system that he thinks is reasonable, so he explained at the beginning that his power system is based on the survivability of this strong man. As much as this one sentence could explain, he spent a whole paragraph on it. Then, the author plans to give each golden finger a unique name. For example, the first "Fang Ting" is actually a "Points Redemption Panel" of the current world view. For this thing, he picked a name, and then gave a long explanation and introduction in a mysterious way. The author's first chapter, I can briefly describe it. A ghost from the earth passed the simulator. He didn't want to die and wanted to come back alive, so he started the simulation. The protagonist has three characteristics: 1 Life, which can give the simulation a relatively reasonable identity and past. 2 Travelers, if they can cover the first ability, can go to a new world view. 3 gold fingers, each world sim can draw one gold finger. Then the story begins. The ghost is simulated for the first time. The simulated person travels through time and becomes a baby in the Japanese country. He is sent to a welfare home and is drawn into the golden finger "Points Redemption Panel". A lot of points are exchanged for a physique that is immune to Fu Jiang's ability. Okay, this is the first chapter, then the following chapters are easy to guess. The world view is a Japanese horror film, stitched together with Inuyasha, Bleach and other Japanese animations. The first sim will most likely deliver food, and he will probably die after the exploration of the world, and then the second sim will appear.