The Regicide and the Widow Queen

I have read more than 100 chapters, and the overall impression is quite good. The author is a newcomer, but his writing is not like that of a novice. He writes well, has a clear worldview structure, and a complete currency system. From the descriptions of the relationships between various forces within the empire, the grievances, and the countries outside the empire that have and have not yet unfolded, the author has worked hard on the worldview. There was a complete structural framework before, and with the description and development of similar group portraits, it feels like It's like another real different world (but with less mysterious power, more like a Roman world with low magic). The settings of the male and female protagonists as well as the various supporting characters in the article feel quite good and very distinct. Each has its own characteristics, and judging from how the author describes it, it seems that there is a background story. It is not like a superficial character, but more like a real living person in the different world. Overall, this is a good book. If it were not a bit unpopular, I feel that the results would not be so bad. (I still lost because the subject matter is too unpopular.) The author has worked hard on the world view, all aspects of the world, and the character background. He also has a good understanding of the history of this historical period in the West, and is very attentive in writing. Almost every chapter has pictures, which feels very considerate, like reading a novel with illustrations. It is very comfortable (and the AI ​​is adjusted well and the paintings are good). This is rare and worthy of praise. It may be the reason for the temporary recognition, and it is still actively responding to readers. In short, if you like Rome, Greek culture, or ancient Western history, the Western fantasy style, or articles about farming lords, you will definitely read this book.

I can understand that the male protagonist who is a political amateur is manipulated in various ways, but I can't understand that the male protagonist has no ideas. What does the hero want to do? Does co-governance follow the emperor's orders or do you have your own ideas?       ，，， The puppet heroine's guard from the defeated country held the sword that killed the hero's fiancée and danced in front of and sideways. The hero kept smiling bitterly, and then had no idea at all, just because they wanted to rule together? Wasn't the blood pressure your sister-in-law gave you before? The author emphasized the profiling based on family ties. At that time, the male protagonist had no idea, but what about this time? Then you are the fiancée of the male protagonist who you have created for a long time! I don't even know what the author is doing. Does the Queen want to "prune" the guards? Let's fight this shit together! I don't understand how the author could write such a male protagonist with his writing skills? It's as if the author has taken on the role of the male protagonist and written it from God's perspective. Or is it that the author wants to write a "true group portrait", in which all the characters hold their thoughts in their hearts, and the various lines are intertwined, and then there is a big one, and suddenly the heroes come together, and the male protagonist bursts into a group of emotions? In short, I wish the author good luck with his creation and let the male protagonist have fun as soon as possible. I almost want to go in and dance with the male protagonist.

The biggest problem is that the protagonist, as the winner of the war and having lost two important people because of the war, is too submissive and harmonious after arriving in the kingdom. The death of his lover at the hands of the former king did not make him feel the slightest anger towards the kingdom. He was still timid before going to pay homage to his brother who died in battle for fear of offending his former enemies. He did not look like a sentimental soldier. After reading the introduction, I thought that the two sides would gradually move from suspicion and wariness to unity and cooperation, but the protagonist in the book just caters to them blindly and is led around. To be honest, I hope they can adjust in the future. Except for this shortcoming, the world view and plot advancement are very attractive, and most of the characters are also very distinct. The most important thing is that the protagonist is a native, not a time traveler who claims to be the protagonist, and there is no system plug-in beyond the world. He can only rely on his own ability and luck. This is much better than 90% of online novels.

A complete version of the map drawn by the author using YiZhi map software. If you citizens of the empire want to zoom in and browse the map more clearly, you can search for "Yaro Empire" or "Youyou" in the easy-to-make map.

I suggest that the author write less emotional lines. I don't know if he missed it. Is the heroine supposed to have been married to the late king for hundreds of years? If I hadn't missed it, this heroine setting is amazing. At least this is the first time I've seen it in so many years. This kind of widow setting can't attract married readers. It's still too outrageous after hundreds of years. I hope the author will write more about the career line and not put too much emphasis on the emotional line. It would be better not to write about it at all. However, your setting of a strong heroine is unlikely. I feel that the probability of being disappointed with this setting is actually very high. Of course, if it becomes popular later, I will accept it and slap me in the face. Then I will cast a few monthly votes to show my support.

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Western fantasy, especially the sword and magic genre, is really becoming more and more niche, but it is rare to see a good novel again. I hope the author can stick to it.

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The writing style is not like that of a newcomer. I read the latest chapter in one breath, but the setting of the male protagonist is not good enough to give people the feeling of "Asashi" of a Japanese-style western fantasy male protagonist, not like a general on the battlefield.

"When a diseased branch appears on a flower bush, will you not prune it out of pity?"

Cassel Palesius Art Picture

The writing has a very ancient Roman feel to it. Unlike most of the books from Qidian, it is not a routine article. The protagonist is a local, not a time traveler (by the way, I have always found time travel and system texts to be a bit strange, with a sense of deus ex machina). The heroine is great, and the article describes Roman official positions, politics, and military affairs in great detail. Finally, did the destruction of the protagonist's brother's four legions refer to the Battle of Teutoburg Forest? Is there a "Valus, give me back my legion!" Segment?

I can't believe I started watching it on 5.23, But it's only now that I can finish it in a while. I have no motivation to read it. Mainly because I can tell by the chapter names that the plot develops slowly. I was attracted by the theme of the Roman Empire, but the male protagonist seems a bit stupid as a political idiot, and the queen seems to have no skills at all after living so long. Actually, the main issue is updating, at least two chapters a day, and the amount of information in one chapter cannot be too small. Posting a comment actually also sets up a little book friend value, and you can only vote for chapters.

Low Demon West Fantasy Herb Advantages Wonderful description of the heroine, the cold elf queen The description of the political ecology and legionary wars such as Roman officialdom and taxation is very detailed, and the small scenes of low demon battles are also very exciting, with a strong sense of historical reality Exquisite map design and scene pictures Disadvantages Relatively scattered plot design, slow advancement of the main line, frequent perspective switching; relatively small number of daily updates, overall slow development; the elf sister has not been promoted yet

In the classical setting of Western Europe, there is no time travel, no system weak plug-ins, the protagonist is the leader, and leads a group of like-minded and trusted friends to pass on the legacy of the late emperor. That is the kingly plot. Then the author's map drawing is really helpful. Some complex descriptions can be understood by reading the original text and the map. In addition, the description of humanities and customs is also very clear and readable. I hope that it will be a dual-protagonist treatment, and that the Elf Queen, as the co-ruler, will always be equally important and have the same status as the protagonist. As a queen who was pushed out to seek peace, the heroine currently seems to lack real power and is ruling from the side. If this state continues, it seems that it will gradually fade————

It's a pity that the protagonist is not a time traveler, so the sense of immersion is very low.

Overall, the writing is okay, but the perspective switching at the beginning is a bit discouraging, but if you stick to it, it is still very good at the end. The heroine's role is a bit small. I hope the author can increase the heroine's role according to the title.

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I really like watching strong female protagonists, I hope the author can portray her well

This kind of subject matter is relatively rare. I will give you a monthly ticket to support it. I hope the work will get better and better

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The last two chapters have been a bit confusing. The protagonist takes it for granted. How can the southerners let the rebels go just for some money if they want to suppress the rebellion? If they don't kill chickens to scare monkeys, people's hearts will not be stable.

I saw that half of the heroine's roles were not many, and I hope it will gradually increase as the plot progresses.

The writing is great, is this still the starting point?