Kuis: Starting as the Nineteenth Son of Yan Wang

Both Chao Tianjiao and Binglou's only son have a grudge against Gong Wuhou. Fozhu, a Buddhist, is also at odds with the Demon Buddha. He saves a bunch of people who are at odds with each other. If things aren't handled properly, it could lead to a major plot hole.

Ji Wuxia, Hongchen Xue, Yu Cixin, She Tian Qin Qi, Furong Zhuke Qiaotiangong, Yaohou, Jie Hongyan, Zengmingxia, Rangming Nu, Xichuang Yue, Yunmeng Huaju, Yunmeng Xiangying, Leng Yan, Taixi Shenzhao, Bian Tianxia, ​​Manli, Shengnu Si. 😍 I can only vaguely remember these female characters. I felt Ji Wuxia was a bit too refined, and she even had white hair.

Given the protagonist's abilities, a master like Yama could have been easily overtaken by a transmigrator from the perspective of a time traveler. Since he was originally a stillborn infant, Tianluozi is nothing to him. Why not just confront the Black Queen directly? Is Yama really that powerful as to hide his trump card so well that the Black Queen can't find it?

The story revolves around women, but now they've all become their followers. It was alright when they were with Nüya; she wasn't constantly following them, she had her own storyline, and there were interactions. Now, once they get Nüya, they just throw her at home to seduce other women, and those they seduced disappear?

If you keep writing slowly and deliberately, you're probably going to be done with it. Either you write a lot of detailed and satisfying pieces, or you write tightly and intensely. See which one you fit in.

Every time we're halfway through a fight, someone comes along, and we drag it out so we can't kill anyone. Aside from the Ancient Tomb's Vanishing Smoke, we haven't gotten a single kill.

For example, the protagonist obtains the Sacred Heart Technique and the original version of the Dao Heart Demon Seed Technique at the start, which can be used to obtain Enlightenment Pills or Fusion Cards through the system. In "Border Town Prodigal," the Dao Heart Demon Seed Technique is already a single-universe-level divine skill.

The Grandmaster sects are truly terrifying; they're incredibly popular every day!

It seems this time it'll be another case of bypassing Xuanxiao, or some unexpected event happening along the way, preventing him from being killed. This kind of plot has repeated itself many times. Xuanxiao has provoked the protagonist's side more than once or twice, and he's still alive and kicking. This kind of plot is really frustrating and unsatisfying to watch.

The author follows the Pili style, but there's nothing new. It's not necessary for his character's destiny to end before he dies. With your current strength, you can take down many characters beforehand. If you want to save people and get rewards, wouldn't it be better to take down some opponents beforehand? Don't always save people at the last minute, and don't make it up that people can't die because their destiny hasn't ended.